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Rekindle An Old Love
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Carmen smiled at Dana. “Well hello, looks like you two had a great time last night.”
Dana slid her arm around Alice’s waist. “Yeah we did, didn’t we babe?” She smiled at her.
“Uh—yeah, we did.” Alice smiled coyly. “Did you guys want to come in?”
“Sure,” Shane nodded, and Alice and Dana moved away from the door. Shane and Carmen walked into the apartment, and Alice closed the door. They walked into the living room, and Carmen and Shane looked around. Shane scratched the back of her neck and grinned. “You guys had a really great time last night.” Their clothes were strewn everywhere, whip cream can and strawberry container on the floor with blankets and pillows around the couch.
“We had a lot of making up to do last night and this morning.” Dana took a seat on the couch. She pulled her feet up on the couch, and Alice took a seat next to her. “We went for eight hours straight.”
“Eight hours?” Shane looked at her friends.
Carmen smiled. “Oh wow—I would say that’s a world record.”
Alice yawned. “I’m still tired.” She leaned against Dana, and Dana wrapped her arm around her shoulders. Shane smiled softly at the sight of her two friends in love with each other again.
“I’m sorry that you didn’t get much sleep.” Dana laid a small kiss on her forehead.
“So are you two together or what?” Carmen took a seat in the love seat.
“Umm I don’t know—,” Alice looked at Dana. “I guess we are.”
“We want to take things slow.” Dana smiled.
“Well—I don’t think you two took things slow.” Shane shook her head and chuckled.
“But we’re going to though.” Alice nodded.
“So are you going to let everybody know?” Carmen asked.
“Well I really don’t want to yet. I just want us to rebuild our relationship again, and then maybe we’ll let everyone know except you two, since you already know.” Dana cracked a smile.
“So Dana—,” she looked at Carmen. “Did Alice tell you about her shrine?” Alice’s eyes got big, and Shane cleared her throat.
“Carmen, I don’t think that Dana should know about this.” Shane gave Carmen an intense glare.
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Carmen…..SHUT UP!!! Shane, couldn’t you have covered her mouth for one stinking second? Having a giggle over two friends getting back together is a good thing, but to spill the beans about the shrine, that’s just wrong and nasty. But I loved how Dana reacted to it all. She wasn’t brought down too much by what Carmen said, and she said ‘I love you Alice Pieszecki’. You can’t get much higher on Cloud 9 than when you say that.
Love Shane and Carmen’s reactions to the Danish night-o’-loving. I’m happy to see Dana being so comfortable with the relationship. Damn, Carmen, way to stick your foot in it. Good for Dana, though, for how she handled it. Hope you writer’s block clears soon. I was in the same boat and it sucks. I thought this chapter was great, though — blocked or not. Thanks!!
Love it. Funnier then hell. Danish’s love night and the reaction couldn’t have been funnier
All you writers will need some router rooter to unclog those blocks. Haha! Thanks AKcb, it really did not show in this chapter at all. I think it was good that it was brought up. Even though Carmen couldn’t keep her mouth shut, actually I think it was in A’s favor because it demonstrated how crazy in love A was. D should be elated that A did all that because of her. A & D sure had broken all records with this marathon loving. HF must have offered them a case full of red bull earlier.