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Closure – Chapter 20
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Dana could not believe her eyes. Why in the hell had Shane brought her here? It was definitely not her scene.
She looked around at the fully equipped S&M dungeon. Dana could figure out what some of the…implements? Toys? Tools? Whatever they were called could be used for, but, had no idea with most of the others. Once she got over her initial shock, she turned to Shane and lifted her hands and dropped them back down in a “What the Fuck?!?” gesture.
“Relax, Dane. This place is owned by a friend of mine. We’re the only ones here.”
“Why does that not help me relax? What are we doing here?”
Shane smiled slightly at her friend’s discomfort. “Dana? I was furious when I found out about what Jackie did. I seriously wanted to track her down and damage her.” Shane saw the anger flash in Dana’s eyes.
“If anyone is going to hurt her, it is going to be me.” Dana said menacingly.
Shane needed to get her defused quick. “The thing is… I came here and at least took the edge off.”
The look on Dana’s face was priceless. It was a mix of anger, confusion, fear, curiosity, disgust and about 20 other things. Dana threw up her hands and headed for the door.
“Wait, Dane, I think you have it wrong. Look — right over there.” Shane pointed to a punching bag that Dana overlooked in her sensory overload on seeing everything in the room.
“Do I even want to know what happens in this room with that?” Dana asked incredulously.
“Nothing.” Shane couldn’t help but grin. “I had it moved in. I needed to punch something. I needed to get some of that anger out. Dana… The gloves are right here.” Shane handed Dana the gloves in such a way that Dana had to take them or drop them.
“No one will hear you outside this room. No one will know you are here or that you have been here. It will just be between us. Give it a try. If it doesn’t work, we can just head back.” As Shane talked, she helped Dana put on the gloves and lace them up.
Shane left and Dana was alone with her thoughts. This is ridiculous. I just need to be with Alice. If I can be there, then she will be safe. No one can hurt her again. Sweet, gentle Alice. God… Those bruises. That…
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Good to have friend you can count on. poor Alice. I hope she will be alright and this Jackie needs to learn a lesson: never touch one from the gang. the cost is expensive
I love it! “I am so buying this house,” “flies getting in there”, and “knew more swearwords”, more laughs. I am so relieved that Shane gave D the opportunity to blow off some steam. That was really sad to see D breaking down. What D said about herself turning into a Jackie, I can understand that. Thank god Yoda was there again. Therapy was also a great idea for D. I just hope that Jackie would never find out about this dungeon. I am afraid that she might follow D one day and hurt her. So please keep this only between D & S. Thank you.
Chain. Dana just needs to beat her to death with a chain. It will be horrible brutal. Just what that bitch needs. Poor sweet Alice. She is sweet. But i wouldn’t want to fight her. Not one bit. I’m sorry you had a shitty day magoose. I hope your day gets better. I LOVE YOU
WOW! I didn’t think i could be mad and laugh at the same time. Again, awesome job. I love it! Great job MaGoose! I agree with HF I LOVE YOU!
I’m sorry you’re having a bad day, babe. Here’s hoping it gets better. This chapter was an important step for Dana, I just hope she continues to let off steam once in awhile. LOVED her reaction when Alice walked out of the ocean. Big hugs for you dear.
I actually thought Shane was making a move on Dana. But then it all became so real. The anger and the guilt and the tears. This is so real. Dana would never hurt Alice. And she would NEVER, not for a single second, hurt Alice like Jackie. Keep them safe and keep the love alive.
Thanks you letting help dana get frustrations out and being a true friend!! see boo is good for alice! :)
How nice of you to still take time to post when you are having a crappy day. I hope things get better soon. This was another great chapter, pummeling that punching bag was a great way for her to try and diffuse some of her anger towards Jackie. Hmm I wonder would a punching bag of your own help with your bad day or maybe what you need is to go indulge in some Season 2 Danish goodness!
buy that house Dana! Well I’ve no words except i love it and I hope Alice will continue to feel better. GO DANISH!!!
Hopes that the new day is better to you…see I knew that boxing is cathardic, glad that Shane brought out all of Yodaness..that triumberate of friendship is amazing and sorely missed. Wicked chapter!
wow wow wow wowHOT ALICE with her shirt and shorts clinging….. *drooling*okay, Dane, you so buy that house. I’m so glad to see Alice being hot other than vulnerable. A needs to find her wits back. :)
Sorry didnt comment ur last part just caught up …. Well done GREAT as ever :). Liked this chapter especially, pretty funny, “I’m so buying this house.” lol Reli good updates cant wait for ur next one PPS :) X
nice work magoose..your story rocks!! and i could just imagine dana’s face upon seeing all the “stuff” haha hiularious..so sad that she cried. :)ppwyc (please post whenever you can)
BAHAHA! Classical, “i am so buying this house” and “checking out her rack” bahahaha has to be the funniest couple of paragraphs in the whole story. Oooh the mental images I have =0 can you blame Dana??? Oooooo I must apologise for my lackage of commentage in the previous great post, I have been ill but I am now HEALTHY so yay i’m back and hurrahalot or something. Darn me for being so late on the comments though!! GREAT POST! I alwyas knew Dana packed some punch …she is a knock-out ;) (I couldn’t resist) Thanks!!