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Closure – Chapter 20
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“Bitch!” Dana screamed and took a vicious swipe at the punching bag. She kept pummeling it — trying to give it several hits for every mark she saw on Alice’s body.
Shane lied. It was only a small lie and done in her friend’s best interest but a lie nonetheless. The room was not completely sound proof. Shane was able to hear the screaming and the powerful hits on the bag. Shane made a mental note to never make Dana angry — girl could hit. She also knew more swearwords than Shane would have expected. That was not what she was listening for, though. That came about 20 minutes later. She went back into the room as soon as she heard Dana crying.
She sat down next to the athlete, wrapped her thin arms around her and held on tightly. Dana’s whole body shook with the force of her sobs.
“Why, Shane? Why would someone hurt Alice? God! She has to be the gentlest person I have ever met. She can’t even kill spiders.”
“Jackie is a predator and she saw someone she could take advantage of. But you got her away from that.”
“Maybe, but, it’s my fault she got in that situation in the first place.”
Shane rocked her friend. “I don’t think you can blame yourself any more than Alice can blame herself. Things happen. You are both working on it, though and trying to make it right.”
“And you know what the worst of it is? I’m worried that I am becoming like Jackie.” Shane gave a surprised look and Dana hurried to explain.
“No. Listen. What am I doing? I’m controlling everything she does. I don’t let her communicate with anyone unless I know about it. I won’t let her leave the house alone. Shit! I even lock her in the house at night. It’s like she just traded jailors. How am I any better than Jackie?”
Shane could not believe her friend was thinking like this. “Dana? Look at me. You are nothing like Jackie. Anything you are doing is only for Alice’s best interests. Everything Jackie did was for her own best interests.”
“Do you even think Jackie ever thought about how Alice felt? I mean except to use her emotions against her?” Dana saw the truth in those words. “And you are doing everything you can to not hurt her and make sure she is not hurt. You care for her as a friend. I don’t think Jackie really cared for her at all.”
The friends sat talking for about an hour more. It helped both of them immensely. They were Alice’s closest friends and had many of the same feelings of anger and guilt. Shane suggested that Dana might want to think about talking to a professional. Dana realized that it might be a good thing. The situation with Alice in addition to her continued romantic feelings toward the writer had her mind in turmoil a good portion of the time.
Dana was much more relaxed when they got back to the beach house. No one was inside when they arrived so they went out to the patio. Bette and Tina were building a sand castle with Angelica. Dana quickly scanned the beach for Alice. What she saw made her heart stop beating for a moment.
Alice was just walking out of the surf. She had on a t-shirt and shorts — not a bathing suit since she was very self-conscious about her bruises. Every inch of her was soaking wet and the clothes hung on her like a second skin. Dana could not think of when she had seen a more erotic site.
Shane got a good look at the situation (and a quick peek at Alice’s rack — she was only human) and turned to her friend. She then reached over and closed Dana’s mouth. “Careful. You don’t want any flies getting in there.” She joked.
Dana was still staring at the vision that was Alice as the writer sat down with Angelica to help with the sand castle using the shells she had just found.
Dana turned to Shane and said “I am so buying this house.”
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Good to have friend you can count on. poor Alice. I hope she will be alright and this Jackie needs to learn a lesson: never touch one from the gang. the cost is expensive
I love it! “I am so buying this house,” “flies getting in there”, and “knew more swearwords”, more laughs. I am so relieved that Shane gave D the opportunity to blow off some steam. That was really sad to see D breaking down. What D said about herself turning into a Jackie, I can understand that. Thank god Yoda was there again. Therapy was also a great idea for D. I just hope that Jackie would never find out about this dungeon. I am afraid that she might follow D one day and hurt her. So please keep this only between D & S. Thank you.
Chain. Dana just needs to beat her to death with a chain. It will be horrible brutal. Just what that bitch needs. Poor sweet Alice. She is sweet. But i wouldn’t want to fight her. Not one bit. I’m sorry you had a shitty day magoose. I hope your day gets better. I LOVE YOU
WOW! I didn’t think i could be mad and laugh at the same time. Again, awesome job. I love it! Great job MaGoose! I agree with HF I LOVE YOU!
I’m sorry you’re having a bad day, babe. Here’s hoping it gets better. This chapter was an important step for Dana, I just hope she continues to let off steam once in awhile. LOVED her reaction when Alice walked out of the ocean. Big hugs for you dear.
I actually thought Shane was making a move on Dana. But then it all became so real. The anger and the guilt and the tears. This is so real. Dana would never hurt Alice. And she would NEVER, not for a single second, hurt Alice like Jackie. Keep them safe and keep the love alive.
Thanks you letting help dana get frustrations out and being a true friend!! see boo is good for alice! :)
How nice of you to still take time to post when you are having a crappy day. I hope things get better soon. This was another great chapter, pummeling that punching bag was a great way for her to try and diffuse some of her anger towards Jackie. Hmm I wonder would a punching bag of your own help with your bad day or maybe what you need is to go indulge in some Season 2 Danish goodness!
buy that house Dana! Well I’ve no words except i love it and I hope Alice will continue to feel better. GO DANISH!!!
Hopes that the new day is better to you…see I knew that boxing is cathardic, glad that Shane brought out all of Yodaness..that triumberate of friendship is amazing and sorely missed. Wicked chapter!
wow wow wow wowHOT ALICE with her shirt and shorts clinging….. *drooling*okay, Dane, you so buy that house. I’m so glad to see Alice being hot other than vulnerable. A needs to find her wits back. :)
Sorry didnt comment ur last part just caught up …. Well done GREAT as ever :). Liked this chapter especially, pretty funny, “I’m so buying this house.” lol Reli good updates cant wait for ur next one PPS :) X
nice work magoose..your story rocks!! and i could just imagine dana’s face upon seeing all the “stuff” haha hiularious..so sad that she cried. :)ppwyc (please post whenever you can)
BAHAHA! Classical, “i am so buying this house” and “checking out her rack” bahahaha has to be the funniest couple of paragraphs in the whole story. Oooh the mental images I have =0 can you blame Dana??? Oooooo I must apologise for my lackage of commentage in the previous great post, I have been ill but I am now HEALTHY so yay i’m back and hurrahalot or something. Darn me for being so late on the comments though!! GREAT POST! I alwyas knew Dana packed some punch …she is a knock-out ;) (I couldn’t resist) Thanks!!