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Scenario 1.8
"Where’s Bette?" Alice asked Tina as they wait for her in The Planet.
"She had a two-day-date with Jodi this weekend. Are you sure she’s coming?" Tina asked in return.
"That’s what she said." Alice stated.
Yes, Bette spent the weekend with Jodi and I have no idea what they did or where they’d go. And yes, it fucking hurts! After a night of making love with Bette I thought that Bette will choose to stay with me or even break up with Jodi but no, she went to be with her. But you know what hurts the most? She didn’t even said that she love me that night. The act was called "making love" and it felt like making love not just sex, but not hearing those three words kinda reminded me that I’m not that person in Bette’s life where she can whisper she loves me after showing it to me. Don’t get me wrong, I understand Bette and I know this is how’s it gonna be when I said I wanted to be with her again. I just didn’t know that it will hurt like this. Making love with het is almost hurtful as to not makw love with her. But you know what’s the really best paty of it all? It’s the after.. when I’m just lying there and she’s wrapped around my body. The sensation of knowing we both are naked is outdone by the sensation to feel her body pressed against mine. It’s such an incredible feeling, soft skin, the curves, goosebumps and tingling everywhere. It seems as if we fit into one another perfectly again. I knew that moment that it’s really her that I want to spend the rest of my life with. It’s her body that I want to curl up to at night. It’s her presence that I want, it’s her. I’m sure and I’m not going to back down now.
"Oh there she is!" Alice declared and Tina looked up to see Bette walking towards them, alone.
At least her girlfriend is not here, I won’t have to sit here and watch them together.
"How’s the date?" Alice inquired immediately. "Tina told me you had a two-day date with Jodi."
"It was fine." Bette answered, conscious of what to say because she know that Tina is wondering the same thing that Alice asked.
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(56 votes, average: 3.46 out of 5)
Wow that was great writing! I actually felt a tingle in my ear I could imagine it so vividly. PPS
You can’t leave us there.
WOW… dying to find out what happened did bette get rid of jodie? i hope so she told tina she loved her….:)
Hello x_krusty, I think your writing is brilliant, you now how to layer your writing with such intense emotions and longing that just instantly draws the reader (ME) in. I do hope that once you finish this brilliant story that you have something to follow it with cause your writing is to good to go missing. Congratulations on the nominations you have received. Much deserved. Sincerely, JC
I would have fainted. hope that Bette would give me mouth to mouth. Jesus. goosebumps all over/ thanks
Nuuuuuuuuuu you can’t end it there! D: We want to know if Bette dumped Jodi. lol
noooooo dont stop there please please post another chapter… pretty please
I am sure this is one time that Tina was happy about Alice asking so many personal questions. This was soooooo good. Thanks
Maybe Bette is ready to give her and Tina a chance. Wonder if Bette broke up with Jodi?????
I know, simply delayed… But you don’t know how incredible this actually is (in general and for me especially)! I told you that there’s no need to worry! Perfect!! Really! Thank you!!! ~sigh~
Can’t believe this is almost done, but you got a really nice story here Krusty.
Damn this is so good and hope Bette will get rib of jodi soon, and be with Tina. Please post more, thanks!
X–that is just wrong! leaving us all hanging with that! now, after these 1 or 2 chpts, R U going back to the other story? hope so! pps
Wow just what Tina needed to hear, but you can’t just leave us at this point. Come on another post very soon would be greatly appreciated.
Aww this gives me goosebumps..they are so adorable and Tina is breaking my heart she sounds so sincere awww..but she just can’t expect Bette to break up with Jodie cause she wants her back