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Scenario 1.8
"That’s it? No details?" Alice asked.
"Nothing that I would like to tell you." Bette joked as she steal a glance from Tina.
"You’re mean!" Alice exclaimed as she turned her attention to Tina. "What about you? Dating anybody?"
Tina shook her head. "No, I’m not telling you."
"Come on, we want to know. Right, Bette?" Alice asked and Tina saw Bette nodding in accordance with Alice.
"Okay, I’m dating someone." Tina simply said.
"Oh really?" Bette asked Tina sounding almost too sarcastic.
"Yes and she is amazing." Tina said looking straight at Bette.
"Wait.." Alice said. "You’re dating someone and I have no idea! Who is she?"
"I can’t tell, I don’t want to jinx it." Tina said.
"I knew something was different when I saw you today!" Alice said, as she begin to interpret Tina. "It’s like you’ve just been fucked!" Alice joked and both Tina and Bette laughed.
"You can say that." Tina agreed and she blushed a little when reminded of the previous night she spent with Bette.
"So this is serious or what?" Alice asked.
"I love her." Tina simply said.
"Wow!" Alice exclaimed in disbelief. "You love her already? So you’re with her now? When can we meet her?"
"I don’t know.." Tina said. "I kinda don’t know where I stand with her."
"What does that mean?" Alice asked and Bette jumped in also.
"Yeah, what does that mean?" Bette asked and Tina felt Bette’s voice was washed with a bit of anger.
"It doesn’t mean anything.." Tina said almost directing her answer towards Bette. "It’s just that she holds the key." Tina said. "It’s up to her if she wants me, I’m just waiting."
"Oh my! Are you falling for a straight girl?!" Alice said.
"No, I think she’s gay." Tina said as she smiled.
"Good to know." Alice said on relief. "You’re really in love with her. Are you?" Alice said. "You have this sad look on your face just talking about waiting for her but you glow when you’re
talking about her."
"I don’t know why I love her so much, either!" Tina said. "There’s a possibility that she’ll never love me but I’m here, desperately waiting for her love."
Bette sat there looking at Tina while she talk about her.
"I keep on thinking that she’s not feeling these same intense feelings I have for her and it scares the shit out of me because I want her soo bad." Tina told Alice, aware that Bette is listening to her.
"Well, when you got it that bad. You have to step up a little. Do what Jodi did, plan a two-day get-away with this girl." Alice suggested.
"I can do that.." Tina said as she think of Alice’s suggestion. "Any idea what I should do?"
Alice started to give her ideas when she felt Bette leaning towards her and whispered something in her ear.
"I love you."
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(56 votes, average: 3.46 out of 5)
Wow that was great writing! I actually felt a tingle in my ear I could imagine it so vividly. PPS
You can’t leave us there.
WOW… dying to find out what happened did bette get rid of jodie? i hope so she told tina she loved her….:)
Hello x_krusty, I think your writing is brilliant, you now how to layer your writing with such intense emotions and longing that just instantly draws the reader (ME) in. I do hope that once you finish this brilliant story that you have something to follow it with cause your writing is to good to go missing. Congratulations on the nominations you have received. Much deserved. Sincerely, JC
I would have fainted. hope that Bette would give me mouth to mouth. Jesus. goosebumps all over/ thanks
Nuuuuuuuuuu you can’t end it there! D: We want to know if Bette dumped Jodi. lol
noooooo dont stop there please please post another chapter… pretty please
I am sure this is one time that Tina was happy about Alice asking so many personal questions. This was soooooo good. Thanks
Maybe Bette is ready to give her and Tina a chance. Wonder if Bette broke up with Jodi?????
I know, simply delayed… But you don’t know how incredible this actually is (in general and for me especially)! I told you that there’s no need to worry! Perfect!! Really! Thank you!!! ~sigh~
Can’t believe this is almost done, but you got a really nice story here Krusty.
Damn this is so good and hope Bette will get rib of jodi soon, and be with Tina. Please post more, thanks!
X–that is just wrong! leaving us all hanging with that! now, after these 1 or 2 chpts, R U going back to the other story? hope so! pps
Wow just what Tina needed to hear, but you can’t just leave us at this point. Come on another post very soon would be greatly appreciated.
Aww this gives me goosebumps..they are so adorable and Tina is breaking my heart she sounds so sincere awww..but she just can’t expect Bette to break up with Jodie cause she wants her back