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How could you forget us? Chapter 23
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Chapter 23
In her post-climax daze, Helena began to drift off to sleep. Bette held her placing gentle kisses on her head. “Honey, if you are going to make that meeting you need to get up.”
Shaking off the sleep that was calling her, Helena quickly kissed Bette on the lips, “It is never a quickie with you, it’s always a longie”. Helena dragged herself out of bed and began to frantically look for the robe she was wearing earlier.
Bette chuckled to herself watching in delight a disheveled Helena rushing to get herself together. “Do you know you are totally cute when you are like this? I particularly love your cute little ass turning around aimlessly.”
Helena looked at Bette with feigned contempt. “I suppose you will explain to my mother why I am late.” Then reconsidering her statement she wagged her finger at Bette, “Don’t you dare say anything to my mother.”
Bette laughed as she watched a side of Helena that she had never seen. Helena in full panic mode. Normally so calm and cool, Helena was totally adorable rushing about. She watched Helena rush down the hallway to the bedroom she was staying in and heard the shower come on. She layed in bed briefly then decided to join Helena in the shower. She wanted to make it as difficult as she could for Helena to leave her for a stuffy meeting that might eventually steal her away to New York.
She looked at the movement of the silhouette of Helena through the glass enclosure. The glass had become steamy but it was just enough to watch Helena wash herself. She found herself once again getting aroused. Helena was startled as Bette opened the door, both from the rush of cold air as well as the presence of Bette in the stall with her. Grinning and looking mischievously Bette teased, “I thought I might help you with your shower”. Saying this she took the soap and ran it over Helena’s breast.
Helena grabbed to soap from her and smiled, “Your help I don’t need”.
Pouting Bette responded, “Well I thought maybe I could conserve water by taking a shower with you,” as she leaned in to suck on Helena’s neck.
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oh hell YEH can i get an amen…sorry, ahem…ok…gathering my reservedness, which i know is somewhere on my european side…sorry, nope, can’t find it…s** that was beyond hot, because it was toooootally real and toooootally believable and tooooootally how these characters would be combined with fantastic writing combined with a writer with a naughty mind. don’t deny it captain…wow, now if thats what happens when we all post in one night, i think we should make it a regular occurance. cheerio captain squirl, i will be reading that one again i’m sure;)
great update squirl. How can Helena even contemplate leaving that women? Bette is too sexy to be legal!
i so love this story…but think that H should stay in NYC…it’s time that B make a tough choice or two…she ain’t at Burger King…she can’t have it her way all the time…
U know u r making me cry here, don’t you??? But I have to say you make them beautiful & believable. pps
S this was a chapter that was so sexy and at the same time how Bette was afraid of Helena taking the job, but at the end supported her and seems like almost making Helena be sooo late for her meeting..
Hello Squirl, I love how you are showing just how much this decision is maturing their relationship. I think that Bette is finally letting go of her selfishness just enough to realize that Helena needs to be supported, needs her support and her love to finally do something with her life. I think that this is the first step for Bette’s emotional evolution, her first real act of emotional “love” she is willing to let Helena go, to flourish, to spread her wings and fly and become the women she has always known her to be. I think that Helena is finally realizing just how much Bette is trying to become a stronger and more faithful and trusting person, she is seeing her willingness to give up anything to be with her and ultimately her willingness to let Helena go in order to show her just how much she is “In Love” with her. This is the sacrifice that Helena has been waiting for all her life someone to give for her completely with no strings attached and I think that this time for Bette there are no strings. I love how you layer the physical love between these two woman and show just how deep their emotions rest. Sincerely, JC
Hello again, Bette letting Helena finally see her fear and worry is such a powerful moment in their relationship, these are the two emotions that we as humans guard so severely that we don’t even let ourselves realize we are hiding them… Sincerely, JC
I love the way you write these two. It’s just amazing! I agree with chocolatechild, Helena should stay in NYC… PPS
My only questions is WHY would anyone want to say “No” to Elizabeth “I’m one of the fucking hottest women alive” Porter? Such a terrific story Squirl. Helena is breaking my heart though. If she leaves Bette for a job, I think I will be physically ill. Please get her on the jet back to California asap! Oh, and I definitely want more make-up sex…please…
East, you crack me up. They’ve made up. The next sex is the “I love U” anytime anywhere sex ;-)
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Squirl, that was a really great update! Very hot and sweet. I love this story in every way possible. I hope you’re going to entertain us further with more chapters to come!pps!
Oh, c’mon Squirl! That wasn’t enough make-up sex. Bette has a lot of making up to do! As hot as these to are together, I’ll take the everyday “I love you” type though.