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How could you forget us? Chapter 23
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Helena felt herself becoming aroused again and moaned, “Bette, God you are so incorrigible” Forcing herself to show some restraint Helena pushed Bette away, “I know what you are doing. You are trying to make it impossible for me to accept this position. I thought you said you would support what ever I decided to do.”
“I did. I just never said I would make it easy for you to contemplate separating from me.”
Helena kissed Bette deeply and quickly, “Leaving you, separating from you, being apart from you is never ever easy.” Then grabbing Bette’s hand that was now cupping her breast and playing with her nipple, Helena continued, “But despite that I have a meeting to go to.”
She quickly jumped out of the shower and began to dry herself off. Bette left the shower too and came over to assist Helena in her drying off process. Bette’s attempts however were in a more seductive, slow mode. Finding her arousal heightening Helena scolded, “Bette, please don’t.” Pointing a finger across the bathroom, Helena said, “You stay over there and keep your hands to yourself.”
Bette smiled and moved across the room and leaned against the sink. She began a slow and erotic toweling off. First drying, one breast then another, then slowly she ran the towel between her legs, moaning and grinning as she did so. Helena stopped, stared and said softly, “Fuck”. Coming to her senses she shook her head and turned her back to Bette, “No. No, you are not going to entice with that. No, I will not fall for that.”
Bette continued her tease but this time describing what she was doing, “Are you saying you won’t fall for me drying myself off as my nipples harden from the touch of this ultra-soft towel caresses. Or will you not fall as I dry the moisture that is between my legs. Right now I can’t tell if it’s from the shower or is it from looking at your naked body.”
Helena stopped briefly and glanced at Bette from the side of her eyes, “Neither, you will not entice me with either, nor with the way the water streams from your hair down your face and drips onto your chest. You won’t entice me with that either.”
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oh hell YEH can i get an amen…sorry, ahem…ok…gathering my reservedness, which i know is somewhere on my european side…sorry, nope, can’t find it…s** that was beyond hot, because it was toooootally real and toooootally believable and tooooootally how these characters would be combined with fantastic writing combined with a writer with a naughty mind. don’t deny it captain…wow, now if thats what happens when we all post in one night, i think we should make it a regular occurance. cheerio captain squirl, i will be reading that one again i’m sure;)
great update squirl. How can Helena even contemplate leaving that women? Bette is too sexy to be legal!
i so love this story…but think that H should stay in NYC…it’s time that B make a tough choice or two…she ain’t at Burger King…she can’t have it her way all the time…
U know u r making me cry here, don’t you??? But I have to say you make them beautiful & believable. pps
S this was a chapter that was so sexy and at the same time how Bette was afraid of Helena taking the job, but at the end supported her and seems like almost making Helena be sooo late for her meeting..
Hello Squirl, I love how you are showing just how much this decision is maturing their relationship. I think that Bette is finally letting go of her selfishness just enough to realize that Helena needs to be supported, needs her support and her love to finally do something with her life. I think that this is the first step for Bette’s emotional evolution, her first real act of emotional “love” she is willing to let Helena go, to flourish, to spread her wings and fly and become the women she has always known her to be. I think that Helena is finally realizing just how much Bette is trying to become a stronger and more faithful and trusting person, she is seeing her willingness to give up anything to be with her and ultimately her willingness to let Helena go in order to show her just how much she is “In Love” with her. This is the sacrifice that Helena has been waiting for all her life someone to give for her completely with no strings attached and I think that this time for Bette there are no strings. I love how you layer the physical love between these two woman and show just how deep their emotions rest. Sincerely, JC
Hello again, Bette letting Helena finally see her fear and worry is such a powerful moment in their relationship, these are the two emotions that we as humans guard so severely that we don’t even let ourselves realize we are hiding them… Sincerely, JC
I love the way you write these two. It’s just amazing! I agree with chocolatechild, Helena should stay in NYC… PPS
My only questions is WHY would anyone want to say “No” to Elizabeth “I’m one of the fucking hottest women alive” Porter? Such a terrific story Squirl. Helena is breaking my heart though. If she leaves Bette for a job, I think I will be physically ill. Please get her on the jet back to California asap! Oh, and I definitely want more make-up sex…please…
East, you crack me up. They’ve made up. The next sex is the “I love U” anytime anywhere sex ;-)
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Squirl, that was a really great update! Very hot and sweet. I love this story in every way possible. I hope you’re going to entertain us further with more chapters to come!pps!
Oh, c’mon Squirl! That wasn’t enough make-up sex. Bette has a lot of making up to do! As hot as these to are together, I’ll take the everyday “I love you” type though.