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Can She Ever Love Me? Chapter 5
CHAPTER 5
Carmen is back on the East Coast. She is taking a taxi cab ride to her psychiatrist appointment. Carmen has been seeig Dr. Jaspercat for over 2 years now. She is trying to understand why does the things she really cares about seems to fail. Carmen is wondering was it something about herself that kept people from wanting to get close and personal in her life. Was she so broken inside that she throws off negative vibes to people? After the wedding, Carmen was trying to deal with all the emotional hurt she felt from Shane. While taking her taxi ride, she thinks about seeing Shane for the first time in years.
CARMEN POV
I cant believe, I just lost my mind and went ballistic on Shane. She was trying to apologize and explain everything, but I wouldnt let her do it. Why did I do that to her? Shane was so hurt until i could see it in her eyes. Wow, she is still so beautiful to me. The smell of her body and hair still drives me crazy. To be honest with myself, I still hold mad love for her. Noone can ever compare to Miss Shane McClutcheon. The way she would hold me and caress me told me, I was her precious jewel. Why did you leave me, Shane? I know, I shouldn’t of said yes to your marriage proposal, but i hated seeing you suffer over Dana’s death. We should of waited until you were stronger to deal with a life long commitment. Its all my fault, and now look at me. Well, lets see what Dr. Jaspercat has to say to me today.
As Carmen walks into the office, the receptionist smiles and offers her coffee or tea.
RECEPTIONIST: Hi Ms. Morales, can I get you any coffee or tea.
CARMEN: (Smiling) No, Im okay…but thanks anyway.
RECETIONIST: Dr. Jaspercat will be with you shortly.
CARMEN: Okay, thanks.
After about 10 minutes of waiting and looking through magazines…the receptionist calls Carmen.
RECEPIONIST: Ms. Morales…Dr. Jaspercat will see you now.
CARMEN: (Walking through the Dr’s door) Well, hello Dr. Jaspercat.
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(25 votes, average: 3.44 out of 5)
she was feeling love :D x
Nice chapter.. Like it when we get inside Carmens head=) PPS
i like your take on the story! Carmen is having a hard time to cope! PPS
I love itttt! :D post soooooon :* there’s a cliffie there and i should be mad, but nah.. LOL. XD
lovin it!!!
Ah~ i really like the POV things.Carmen is so in love with Shane. Dr. Jaspercat can see it. haha~Thanks for the update.