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Closure – Chapter 28
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An ambulance attendant checked out Alice, Dana and Shane. Alice’s nose wasn’t broken and it had finally stopped bleeding. Dana had a deep bruise on her arm. Both she and Alice had several cuts and scrapes. Shane had actually kicked Jackie so hard that she had hurt her toes and was walking with a limp. They all declined the offer to go to the hospital and were patched up. Jackie would be spending a couple nights in the prison ward of the hospital herself. The gang headed back over to The Planet. Kit treated them like returning war heroes and fussed over each one. She even found an extra wait-staff shirt so that Alice could change from hers that had blood on it.
When things settled down Alice said sincerely. “Thanks, guys.”
Tina said “Well, you can bet that nobody in WeHo will be messing with our family anymore!”
Carmen showed up and fawned over Shane’s bruised toes. They kidded around about getting Shane steel toe sneakers for Christmas. Tina joked about the various patterns and phrases she drew on Jackie’s car with the knife. Everyone was in high spirits to realize that this ordeal was finally over.
Alice got more and more quiet as the late lunch wore on. Despite the icepack she got from the paramedic, her nose was bothering her. Although it was not broken, it was very tender. She could also taste blood in the back of her mouth and it put her off eating. Dana noticed that Alice was not doing well.
She leaned over and whispered to Alice “Want to get out of here, honey?”
Alice just looked back at her with pleading eyes. Her friends had just risked themselves to help her and here she was leaving in the midst of the victory celebration. She was worried they would be upset with her. Dana read her like a book.
“Guys?” Dana got the attention of the other girls “I am going to head out. Apparently tennis training doesn’t cross-over to boxing very well and I need to get some rest.” Dana looked at the other women pointedly.
Her friends could see Alice looking at her hands uncomfortably.
“No problem, Dana.” Bette said. “I’m sure Alice would like to stick around, but, neither T or I can run her out to the beach this afternoon. Shane? Carmen?” Bette gave Shane a look that she picked up on immediately.
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Great chapter goose. I hands down understand dana keeping her hands to herself with Alice sitiutations. But i would so let her be all over me.
This a huge step for alice, mighty proud of her. glad she has therapy in the am, she will be able to work this out. she had to get her anger out, too bad for jackie,NOT!! u are just making me fall inlove with dana all over again, so cute! :)
Good work on Alice’s reaction. It isn’t easy fighting back and it does produce a shock to your system. And the victory party was okay.
I love this story! Thanks for posting such wonderful chapters, I head straight for this story when I see you have added a new piece
Gr8 update sweety!!! I just love this story,keep up the gr8 work!!! PPS
They are so great together Glad also that Alice asked Dana to sleep with her They both needed that. Happy that she is being careful with the pills. Bravo for the gang. thanks
They are so great together Glad also that Alice asked Dana to sleep with her They both needed that. Happy that she is being careful with the pills. Bravo for the gang. thanks
All hail the conquoring heroes and a great chap!!!!….maybe I can interest you in an asian style mixed veg stir fry on a bed of angel hair pasta to go with your salmon? And I think I know what happened, she hid in the freezer and got locked in, the fan which has a loose screw and makes a horrenous noise caused her to go nutty..tried to fix it got shocked, fell and smacked head on fish while being impaled by asparagus and froze like an ice cube..see so not my fault :D hehe 5 for 5
Heya Ma, just wanted to pop in after catching up. Good stuff! Can you say DRAMA? I just love Alice and how easy it is to use that character in stories. Post soon!
This is a wonderful update – thanks and keep it coming – Dana won’t be able to keep her hands still I’m sure.
You have to know by now that I like all your chapters, whether they’re awww-inducing or not. And come on, it wads the smackdown everyone was waiting for? How could I not like that? This is the perfect follow-up to it, lots of cute little aww-parts. I just love this story.
“I thought about coating one in tuna to get you to take it like I used to do with Mr. Piddles.” LMFAO, it’s funny but its also SOO true. I love the sense of humor and seriousness you manage to balance so well. Thank you so much for this post, and i’m looking forward to screaming out loud at work some more, good thing i’m alone right now or they would all be staring at me because i’m smiling so frickin’ huge! :D!!LOVED IT, PPS!
Hello MaGoose, that was just amazing. Tina is right no one will ever mess with this family again (or will they :P)and I think that Alice is finally realizing that this is in fact her family… no matter what happens she will always be accepted here. I love how everyone worked it out to make Alice feel a little more comfortable upon leaving… that was just so sweet, and that ending… well that is what real love is all about… a connection that is neither verbal or physical… just there. Brilliant and just so very powerful… so no more fighting :P… I want more fighting… and you did is so well :P… hehe… can’t wait for what you’ve got. Sincerely, JC
Awww, cant reli say anymore than that there just so awww reli do love the way thy are with each other. Soooo cute. Cant wait for next post :) Love it x
that was great and I can’t wait to see what will happen next but I don’t think that we have seen the last of jackie just yet so please post soon great update I love it.
I’m so glad they finally caught Jackie. Since she is not a threat anymore, will Alice go back to her own place or will she be staying at Dana’s? I’m curious to find out. :)