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Closure – Chapter 28
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“I actually have a hair appointment and Carmen is setting up for a gig. Al? Do you mind going with Dana?”
Alice felt relieved and a bit guilty. She could have stayed and taken a cab. She knew her friends were just trying to let her save face and she loved them for it.
“Not at all. I’m a little wiped out myself.” She said with a tremor in her voice. Before she left, Alice gave each of her friends a long hug to try and express her thanks for everything.
Alice was quiet on the way back to the beach house. Dana understood that Alice had a lot going on in her mind right now and simply held her hand and stroked it with her thumb. She knew Alice had a scheduled therapy appointment in the morning. Dana hoped that would be soon enough.
Alice headed right to the bathroom when they got in. Dana hesitated for a moment and then followed. Alice was pulling out one of her prescription bottles from the cabinet.
“You OK, Al?” Dana asked tentatively. “We could go to the doctor if you want. Maybe try to see Abby?” She moved forward and held Alice lightly around the waist.
“I just… I know I shouldn’t, but, it hurts and I really need to sleep right now. I’m not sure if I will be able to without some help.” She looked in the mirror back at Dana and Dana could see the pain and despair in her eyes.
Dana turned her around so she could look at her directly. “Al. I don’t think one pill to help you sleep will be a problem. You have been really careful about when you use them — almost too much so sometimes. I saw some days when I knew you were in pain and you still didn’t take any pills.” Dana gave a slight smile. “I thought about coating one in tuna to get you to take it like I used to do with Mr. Piddles.”
“Thanks, Dane.” Alice said softly. Dana pulled Alice into a proper hug and was overjoyed when she felt Alice melt into her. They stayed that way for several minutes — each drawing strength and comfort from the other. Dana whispered in Alice’s ear “Can you do me a favor?”
Alice leaned back to look at Dana with a surprised and pleased expression. “Of course! Anything!” Alice ran her hands up and down Dana’s arms.
“I need to lie down, too. Could I… Maybe…” Dana looked sheepishly at the ground and fidgeted slightly. “Maybe you could sleep with me and we could hold each other? I need you near me right now.” Dana peeked up to see Alice’s expression. There was a small grin on the writer’s face. “No problem, Dane. Just try to keep your hands to yourself this time.” Both girls grinned.
Dana reached over and got a glass of water for Alice. “Let’s go ahead and drug you up so you won’t feel it if I do try something.” That caused both girls to smile. Dana cupped Alice’s face in her hands and gave her a gentle kiss on the forehead. Alice took the pain pill and then went to change into comfortable clothes. She joined Dana in her bed a few minutes later and curled up against Dana’s side.
They both slept better than they had in weeks.
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Great chapter goose. I hands down understand dana keeping her hands to herself with Alice sitiutations. But i would so let her be all over me.
This a huge step for alice, mighty proud of her. glad she has therapy in the am, she will be able to work this out. she had to get her anger out, too bad for jackie,NOT!! u are just making me fall inlove with dana all over again, so cute! :)
Good work on Alice’s reaction. It isn’t easy fighting back and it does produce a shock to your system. And the victory party was okay.
I love this story! Thanks for posting such wonderful chapters, I head straight for this story when I see you have added a new piece
Gr8 update sweety!!! I just love this story,keep up the gr8 work!!! PPS
They are so great together Glad also that Alice asked Dana to sleep with her They both needed that. Happy that she is being careful with the pills. Bravo for the gang. thanks
They are so great together Glad also that Alice asked Dana to sleep with her They both needed that. Happy that she is being careful with the pills. Bravo for the gang. thanks
All hail the conquoring heroes and a great chap!!!!….maybe I can interest you in an asian style mixed veg stir fry on a bed of angel hair pasta to go with your salmon? And I think I know what happened, she hid in the freezer and got locked in, the fan which has a loose screw and makes a horrenous noise caused her to go nutty..tried to fix it got shocked, fell and smacked head on fish while being impaled by asparagus and froze like an ice cube..see so not my fault :D hehe 5 for 5
Heya Ma, just wanted to pop in after catching up. Good stuff! Can you say DRAMA? I just love Alice and how easy it is to use that character in stories. Post soon!
This is a wonderful update – thanks and keep it coming – Dana won’t be able to keep her hands still I’m sure.
You have to know by now that I like all your chapters, whether they’re awww-inducing or not. And come on, it wads the smackdown everyone was waiting for? How could I not like that? This is the perfect follow-up to it, lots of cute little aww-parts. I just love this story.
“I thought about coating one in tuna to get you to take it like I used to do with Mr. Piddles.” LMFAO, it’s funny but its also SOO true. I love the sense of humor and seriousness you manage to balance so well. Thank you so much for this post, and i’m looking forward to screaming out loud at work some more, good thing i’m alone right now or they would all be staring at me because i’m smiling so frickin’ huge! :D!!LOVED IT, PPS!
Hello MaGoose, that was just amazing. Tina is right no one will ever mess with this family again (or will they :P)and I think that Alice is finally realizing that this is in fact her family… no matter what happens she will always be accepted here. I love how everyone worked it out to make Alice feel a little more comfortable upon leaving… that was just so sweet, and that ending… well that is what real love is all about… a connection that is neither verbal or physical… just there. Brilliant and just so very powerful… so no more fighting :P… I want more fighting… and you did is so well :P… hehe… can’t wait for what you’ve got. Sincerely, JC
Awww, cant reli say anymore than that there just so awww reli do love the way thy are with each other. Soooo cute. Cant wait for next post :) Love it x
that was great and I can’t wait to see what will happen next but I don’t think that we have seen the last of jackie just yet so please post soon great update I love it.
I’m so glad they finally caught Jackie. Since she is not a threat anymore, will Alice go back to her own place or will she be staying at Dana’s? I’m curious to find out. :)