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Closure – Chapter 29
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The next couple days passed quietly at the beach house. Alice was edgy and Dana had a good idea why.
One night, over dinner they prepared together, Alice started the conversation that Dana had been dreading.
“I think it’s time for me to move out.” Alice fought to keep the tremor out of her voice that told of impeding tears.
“Al… You don’t have to. You know I bought this house. There is no timetable to leave…”
Alice cut her off. This was hard enough. “I know, Dane. But… My life has been on hold and it has put your life on hold. This has been great and it really helped me and definitely kept me safe. But I need to get back to my place. I don’t think it’s fair to either of us to keep playing house.”
Dana couldn’t stop the tears from falling. “So. When are you going to move out?”
“I’m already packed.” She gave a grim smile. “It didn’t take too long.”
Alice could see the upset she was causing Dana and tried to explain her decision. “Please understand that I do not want you out of my life. I finally got you back as a friend and I will not let you go again if I can help it.” Dana wiped the tears from her eyes.
“Just friends?” Dana asked pitifully.
Alice was tearing up at this point, too. “I know you want more, Dane. I would like more, too.” Dana’s bright blue eyes shot up at this point and her face showed hope which was slightly tempered by Alice’s next statement.
“I’m not ready, Dane. I’m not ready for a relationship at all. And, frankly, I need you to be ready if we are going to try again.” She cut Dana off before she could say anything. “I know all this shit with Jackie has stirred up a lot of feelings in you towards me. God knows the feelings that I have for you never went away. I just need you to take some time and make sure it is me you want and not the damsel in distress. I don’t think I could handle losing you from my life again.”
“Forgive me if I am blunt, but, that sounds like Jackie talking.” Dana said softly.
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Alce has a lot to get over,but with Dana on her side, she could whip the world. How long can they keep Jackie in jail. thanks
aww, I feel so bad for both of them. Such a pivotal moment in Alice’s recovery. Good to know that Dana’s there for her through it all.
Yet again AWWWW i can’t say how much I love the way those two are with each other, I know i say everytime lol. Dana is well perfect with Alice and although Dana has made mistakes she sure is makin up for it now, you couldnt ask for anything more from her. AWWWWWWW lol sorry. PPS cant wait!! :D
Bingo! Their faith is in their love. And their love is their strength.
great chap, good to see them really opening up to each other….aw I’m just a teddy bear when ya get to know,with a very vivid imagination..er ok and a temper but hey at least you weren’t supjected to the extremely dirty mind I’m also known for :D
alice has a long wat to go yet but she will get there with the help of her friends great update pps
woot. I love it. Poor Dana and alice. hey but cuddely is better then i am going to runaway now
Thanks fore tis chapter Magoose. Have I told you already that I really want this Dana? lol So sweet. I heart it, thanks
Alice and Dana together can pretty much accomplish anything! I’m glad to see them taking the time needed to ensure everything will be fine. I really want to rip Jackie’s FACE OFF! for doing that to Alice and bruising Dana! Oh and by the way, i got some frickin’ could not ship notice in the mail…something about live animals or humans or something! I dont see what the big deal is, poke some holes in the box and send her to me BABY!! YEAH!!! Great job, cant wait to see the next post!
How sweet was this chapter! the heart conversation was great and alice is right she needs her autonomy back, before getting together with dana. dana needs to support alice when she can and let her have some time to get feet back on the ground…. i know alice need a visit with boo,lol. :)
oh and if you find yourself in Southern Ontario come by my restuaruant..(we’ll skip the freezer) I’ll cook ya a meal that you’ll swear is better then sex…