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White Lie 7
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There was no other way to describe her. Bette looked hot
This was a woman on a mission.
She and Kit had arrived just before they drew the red velvet rope across the doorway of the club denoting capacity had been reached.
Bette started looking for Tina as soon as her eyes had adjusted to the dark room. It was a huge space, and already filled with people. This might not be as easy as she thought.
“Do you want to split a bottle of mineral water?” Kit asked as she headed towards the bar. “I have to have something to drink.”
“That sounds good,” Bette replied. “I’ll wait here and see if I can see Shane wandering around.”
“Shane? Girl I know you’re not looking for Shane the way your eagle eye was scoping out the room when we walked in,” Kit shook her head. “You’ve only been single for two hours and already you’ve got something on your mind.”
“Don’t be ridiculous Kit, I’m just seeing who I know.”
“Okay, if you wanna play it that way, it’s fine with me,” Kit replied. “I’ll figure it out soon enough though. You know I always do.”
She smiled and walked toward the bar to get their water.
Bette hated it when those around her could read her actions so easily. She far preferred being mysterious and something of an enigma. No such luck with Kit though.
“Hey,” Shane arrived at her side and nudged into her to notify her of her presence. “Where’s Jodi?”
“She’s at her studio, getting some work done,” Bette replied. She wasn’t in the mood to detail the break up. “She wasn’t interested in coming out tonight.”
“Too bad,” Shane replied, fighting to be heard above the music. “It’s a good venue. Lots of … interesting people.”
“How are the vows of celibacy?”
“Great. I’ve never felt more clear-headed,” Shane replied, distracted by someone over Bette’s shoulder. “I have more energy than I know what to do with though, so I’m going to go dance.”
“Have you seen Tina here by any chance,” Bette asked, trying to sound nonchalant in her query.
“Shit yeah, she’s out on the dance floor with her new date,” Shane said back. “They look like they’re having a great time.”
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I haven’t read the story yet, but the Dr. Seuss revisit is wonderful! Now, on to the story!
No, no no! Tina can’t leave! PPS
What a way to leave it.Let Tina come back into the club to talk to Bette.
you can be so naughty swimmie!! but i love it. cant wait to see what direction you take this. but whatever it is itll be great. thx
Ohh man, are you IC? Can these kids ever get it right? Tina wants Bette. Bette hesitates but finally frees herself. Now, it sounds like Tina is going to go home with Brenda.. which means she likely won’t brush her off easily. Now I kind of feel bad for Bette..which is pretty much the polar opposite of how I feel in almost ever story based on S5. Normally I think she is a dumbass trying to pretend things are working with Jodi..when they clearly aren’t working regardless of the Tina factor. So, cool for you for changing my mind in a story.
Dont let her leve please. Bette really needs to see her and talk to. Is all of Bettes dreams walking out the door. thanks
Tina get your ass back in there.
Oh! Oh! I’ve got an idea! Let Tina and Brenda get separated just as Brenda heads out of the door of the club. Then let the door monitors let someone else come in before Tina can go out. Meanwhile, Bette sees Tina and grabs her before she can leave. Now, Brenda is on the outside while Tina is still inside with Bette. And, since the club is filled to capacity, Brenda can’t get back inside!!!!!!!!! It’ll work! I know it will! Ok, so I’m desperate! Man, I hate to see these two keep missing the friggin boat.
YOu CAN NOT let tina leave!!!!lol u get the idea..:)
You can’t let Tina leave like that!!! Bette needs to talk to her(and what do they need to talk about??? LOL)I really hope that Kit finds Bette in time before Tina and Brenda actually leave from the club. Thanks! : )
Hahaha! Now if Kit could have summoned some ninjas, they could have kept Tina at the club. Then again, perhaps Brenda is a pirate and would have fought off the ninjas. She does not seem to have booty but she is possessed of a ginormous chest. Oh, the drama this would cause.
man.. heartbreaking..
No, No, NO! Tell me Bette is working the valet parking and she’ll catch Tina at the door!!!!
Oh damn…a cliff hanger. I hope you update soon…this was sooo good!
damn! a cliffhanger!
maybe bette is outside or she saw them leaving and had left too….i hope they will talk before dr. brenda shows her augmented twins
More, more, more. Real soon.
As always, I enjoy what you’re doing, Swimmie, and how you’re doing it. Thanks!
Oh no don’t leave Tina, this is bad and where the hell is Bette lol. Please post more, thanks!
DAMMIT! I truly hope it isn’t too late for Bette to go after Tina. I fear that Bette may shut down and not tell Tina now that she thinks Tina is happy with Brenda. ACK!
SH*T!!!!! Kit should have tackled Tina to the ground and sat on her until Bette returned! UGH! As for Brenda, somewhat cute but a little too ditsy…kick her to the curb and bring on the Alpha one. Thanks for the Dr. Seuss in your AN’s. Too cute. PPS
Swimsicle you tease, why must you stop there! Thanks for a great update! PPS
Oh My, Oh My, Oh My…where tangled webs lie. If Tina would wait, surely she’d catch Bette’s bait, and a happy ending for all, and Bette and Tina would surely have a ball! Clearly, this is why I am a fan, not a writer! PPS
omg u have me on the edge of my seat…someone delay T…C’MON Kit dream up something quick. PPS
OH i KNOW: LET the surgeon get an emergency call on ‘her’ cell…
Isn’t that always the case. Just when you are ready to take the plunge or next step you are stopped dead because you took too long to get there. Loved the poem and of course the chapter.
Ok! So, you have warned me about your sense of hunor and I have a feeling after reading this chapter I should take your advise and stop reading this story.
Okay JKS….indulge me in my lame Dr. Seuss attempt to comment on your chapter. **clearing my throat…AHEM*** Pick up the pace Bette, hurry on the double. Tina’s leaving the bar and Brenda is trouble. Justkeepswimming, this story is wonderful and we know how you love to tease. But what we all really want is for you to post soon, please?***walking away mumbling, “never said it was going to be any good…..”***
Aw, heck. That was some dreadfully poor timing on Bette’s part. She should have jsut gone to the dance floor and cut in, but shoulda, woulda, coulda… Bette needs to call Tina’s cell right away. Like, before Tina gets to wherever Brenda wants to take her. Please post soon, swimmie. Cheers
Instructions to Kit: Yes, DO fake having a heart attack or choking or passing out. Instructions to Bette: Abort martini mission and haul a@@ to go get your woman. Instructions to Tina: Leave your clutch or your purse or your EARRING, so you MUST return to the bar immediately…..
WTF Don’t go, Tina! Nuuuuuuuuuu! And cute poem!
Dammit to hell. Bette’s timing sucks, she needs to get her sh*t together like, now :) Great chapter.