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White Lie 7
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“Sure,” she replied as Brenda intertwined her fingers with those of Tina’s right hand and coaxed her away subtly. “I’ll find you when we take a break again, okay?”
And they were gone.
Bette looked at Kit.
Kit’s raised eyebrows and crossed arms said loud and clear what was on her mind.
“I know I said I wouldn’t bring it up again,” Kit said. “But if you think waiting is going to solve any problems, I’d say we’re going to have a disaster on our hands…”
“I’ll just wait until she’s alone,” Bette admitted. “I’m not going to drag her off the dance floor to make some bold declaration.”
Kit sighed. She’d seen this tear at her sister for far too long. Just when resolution seemed at hand, she was putting it off. There was nothing for Kit to do but be there to pick up the pieces if it didn’t work out to Bette’s satisfaction.
“I’m going to get a martini,” Bette said, then thought twice. “You don’t mind do you?”
“Knock yourself out,” Kit replied. “I’m driving. If it’s going to grow you a spine to say what you need to say to her, then go for it.”
Bette contemplated responding, but thought better of it. She made her way to the bar and patiently waited to be served.
“Kit where did Bette go,” Tina asked a few scant minutes later. “She wanted to talk to me.”
“She’s just getting a drink,” Kit replied. “She’ll be right back.”
“We’re actually going to go,” Tina said. “We’ve been here a while and my ears are starting to ring. Let her know I’ll call her in the morning.”
“Wait, Tina, I don’t know, but maybe it was important for Bette to talk to you tonight?” Kit was desperate to keep Tina there, just until Bette returned.
“Get her to call me on my cell if she needs to,” Tina said. “I have it with me.” She pulled it from her small purse and made a point of checking to see it was on. “All set Kit.”
“Let’s get out of here,” Brenda ran her hand down Tina’s arm and took her hand again. She turned to Kit. “It was nice to meet you.”
“Yeah, you too,” Kit replied. She didn’t know what else she could do to stop Tina from leaving. Fake a heart attack?
Tina waved goodbye in addition to her verbal farewell. They turned and weaved around the clusters of partiers towards the exit and were too soon out of sight.
Kit searched the crowd in the direction of the bar wondering where the hell her sister was.
(tbc)
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I haven’t read the story yet, but the Dr. Seuss revisit is wonderful! Now, on to the story!
No, no no! Tina can’t leave! PPS
What a way to leave it.Let Tina come back into the club to talk to Bette.
you can be so naughty swimmie!! but i love it. cant wait to see what direction you take this. but whatever it is itll be great. thx
Ohh man, are you IC? Can these kids ever get it right? Tina wants Bette. Bette hesitates but finally frees herself. Now, it sounds like Tina is going to go home with Brenda.. which means she likely won’t brush her off easily. Now I kind of feel bad for Bette..which is pretty much the polar opposite of how I feel in almost ever story based on S5. Normally I think she is a dumbass trying to pretend things are working with Jodi..when they clearly aren’t working regardless of the Tina factor. So, cool for you for changing my mind in a story.
Dont let her leve please. Bette really needs to see her and talk to. Is all of Bettes dreams walking out the door. thanks
Tina get your ass back in there.
Oh! Oh! I’ve got an idea! Let Tina and Brenda get separated just as Brenda heads out of the door of the club. Then let the door monitors let someone else come in before Tina can go out. Meanwhile, Bette sees Tina and grabs her before she can leave. Now, Brenda is on the outside while Tina is still inside with Bette. And, since the club is filled to capacity, Brenda can’t get back inside!!!!!!!!! It’ll work! I know it will! Ok, so I’m desperate! Man, I hate to see these two keep missing the friggin boat.
YOu CAN NOT let tina leave!!!!lol u get the idea..:)
You can’t let Tina leave like that!!! Bette needs to talk to her(and what do they need to talk about??? LOL)I really hope that Kit finds Bette in time before Tina and Brenda actually leave from the club. Thanks! : )
Hahaha! Now if Kit could have summoned some ninjas, they could have kept Tina at the club. Then again, perhaps Brenda is a pirate and would have fought off the ninjas. She does not seem to have booty but she is possessed of a ginormous chest. Oh, the drama this would cause.
man.. heartbreaking..
No, No, NO! Tell me Bette is working the valet parking and she’ll catch Tina at the door!!!!
Oh damn…a cliff hanger. I hope you update soon…this was sooo good!
damn! a cliffhanger!
maybe bette is outside or she saw them leaving and had left too….i hope they will talk before dr. brenda shows her augmented twins
More, more, more. Real soon.
As always, I enjoy what you’re doing, Swimmie, and how you’re doing it. Thanks!
Oh no don’t leave Tina, this is bad and where the hell is Bette lol. Please post more, thanks!
DAMMIT! I truly hope it isn’t too late for Bette to go after Tina. I fear that Bette may shut down and not tell Tina now that she thinks Tina is happy with Brenda. ACK!
SH*T!!!!! Kit should have tackled Tina to the ground and sat on her until Bette returned! UGH! As for Brenda, somewhat cute but a little too ditsy…kick her to the curb and bring on the Alpha one. Thanks for the Dr. Seuss in your AN’s. Too cute. PPS
Swimsicle you tease, why must you stop there! Thanks for a great update! PPS
Oh My, Oh My, Oh My…where tangled webs lie. If Tina would wait, surely she’d catch Bette’s bait, and a happy ending for all, and Bette and Tina would surely have a ball! Clearly, this is why I am a fan, not a writer! PPS
omg u have me on the edge of my seat…someone delay T…C’MON Kit dream up something quick. PPS
OH i KNOW: LET the surgeon get an emergency call on ‘her’ cell…
Isn’t that always the case. Just when you are ready to take the plunge or next step you are stopped dead because you took too long to get there. Loved the poem and of course the chapter.
Ok! So, you have warned me about your sense of hunor and I have a feeling after reading this chapter I should take your advise and stop reading this story.
Okay JKS….indulge me in my lame Dr. Seuss attempt to comment on your chapter. **clearing my throat…AHEM*** Pick up the pace Bette, hurry on the double. Tina’s leaving the bar and Brenda is trouble. Justkeepswimming, this story is wonderful and we know how you love to tease. But what we all really want is for you to post soon, please?***walking away mumbling, “never said it was going to be any good…..”***
Aw, heck. That was some dreadfully poor timing on Bette’s part. She should have jsut gone to the dance floor and cut in, but shoulda, woulda, coulda… Bette needs to call Tina’s cell right away. Like, before Tina gets to wherever Brenda wants to take her. Please post soon, swimmie. Cheers
Instructions to Kit: Yes, DO fake having a heart attack or choking or passing out. Instructions to Bette: Abort martini mission and haul a@@ to go get your woman. Instructions to Tina: Leave your clutch or your purse or your EARRING, so you MUST return to the bar immediately…..
WTF Don’t go, Tina! Nuuuuuuuuuu! And cute poem!
Dammit to hell. Bette’s timing sucks, she needs to get her sh*t together like, now :) Great chapter.