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Be Be Your Love
"Be Be Your Love"
First Look
“Oh my God Tina! TK! How have you been?? God, it’s been so long. We missed you, so much!”
Startled, I looked up from my book as I heard Alice scream her name. Oh my God she is here. She is really here. She came back. God she looks beautiful.
I missed looking at that beautiful smile, those sparkling warm hazel eyes. She looks even more beautiful now than when I first saw her. This is the exact place, the far corner of the café where I am sitting now, when I first saw her almost four years ago.
Since then I have always admired her, adored her from afar and I will also go as far as to say even had a huge secret crush on but never found the courage to come right out and tell her. Maybe she knows. At least I thought she suspected something then before she went away two years ago.
God is that my heart beating so fast. I feel a rush as she scans the room and her eyes land on mine. I am transfixed. All my thoughts seem to have come to a halt. It amazes me that she still has that effect on me where everything else besides her ceases to exist. I feel the blush rising on my cheeks as I am once again blessed with that loving gentle smile after all this time. I can’t help but return it to its gracious owner.
After a while when I am certain that I am bordering staring at her I reluctantly tear my eyes away from her engaging hypnotizing look and return to the now nonsensical meaningless words in front of me. I can still feel her gaze burn into me.
I reach out my shaking hand to take a sip from my hot coffee cup to arouse me out of this stupor. Fuck what is happening to me. I know she can sense the effect she is having on me and I bet it makes her smile inwardly at how incapable of anything she makes me feel, how just by her mere presence she renders me powerless and speechless.
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Cool start. Hmm, I think I want to see Tina draw this Bette, who appears utterly shy around her, out. Normally I don’t like dual points of view in fics, honestly, but this sort of let us know initially that Tina has the same feelings for Bette. Hope to see more of this.
I love it! Your writing is very sensual. I hope you continue with it.
Oh..you soo need to continue with this!
Can’t wait to see what comes next. They are both shaken by this turn of events.
That was great start my friend, beautiful, love it. Please post soon, thanks!
I’m totally with Audi on this one. DPOV, for me anyway, can be taxing to read if I have to sit through the same dialogue twice. This was pretty straight-forward though, and really sweet. Time for Tina to pull Bette forward!
Interesting start.
great start. I was glad to read Tina POV as well. Good to see they are both really crazy about one another. pps
Hey Tanish! Missing your other story but this is sure a great start! I love your style, its deep and emotional, and draws u in… Pls post more soon!
This was really beautiful. Please continue!
The adoration both Bette and Tina feel for one another is wonderful. I can’t wait to see Tina draw out the shy Bette you have portrayed.