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Be Be Your Love
“Hey Bette”
That soft melodious sensuous voice falls on my ears suddenly and I feel my heart stop beating. After skipping a beat it starts thudding again against by chest. I must be shaking like a leaf. Suddenly it feels hot in here.
I slowly lift my gaze to meet her eyes. She…she looks divine not unlike from afar but I appreciate the view more from this close. Divine that’s the only word that comes to my mind…like a Greek goddess, that I have read in many a books, has landed on this earth once again to bless the earthlings with the gift of love and peace.
I feel my throat constrict and unsuccessfully try to clear it of the lump that refuses to leave. I cough a little trying to find my voice. She looks concerned at my condition but her eyes are still loving and warm. Finally I find the strength to utter the words to greet her. In spite of my conviction to appear strong and unaffected my voice comes out shy.
“T..Tina…hey”.
She again awards me with that full on dazzling smile and I find my heart smiling right along with her.
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Oh my God…there she is. Always so beautiful and surprisingly just so oblivious about it. She is sitting at that same place where I first saw her with a book in front of her. Her eyes meet mine as she looks up startled at Alice’s excited yelps welcoming me back.
How I have missed those deep soulful chocolate brown eyes looking at me with such devotion that she herself perhaps doesn’t recognize. As I enter the café she is the first one my eyes search for. I have longed to look once again into those deep pools of her soul that tell me so much.
She doesn’t realize how much I yearn to see within her soul so pure, so gentle, to be let inside the very depths of her existence. I don’t know how I have managed this long without her when all I could ever think of was her, her eyes pulling me in, telling me, wanting me to unravel the secrets of her heart like she wanted me to.
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Cool start. Hmm, I think I want to see Tina draw this Bette, who appears utterly shy around her, out. Normally I don’t like dual points of view in fics, honestly, but this sort of let us know initially that Tina has the same feelings for Bette. Hope to see more of this.
I love it! Your writing is very sensual. I hope you continue with it.
Oh..you soo need to continue with this!
Can’t wait to see what comes next. They are both shaken by this turn of events.
That was great start my friend, beautiful, love it. Please post soon, thanks!
I’m totally with Audi on this one. DPOV, for me anyway, can be taxing to read if I have to sit through the same dialogue twice. This was pretty straight-forward though, and really sweet. Time for Tina to pull Bette forward!
Interesting start.
great start. I was glad to read Tina POV as well. Good to see they are both really crazy about one another. pps
Hey Tanish! Missing your other story but this is sure a great start! I love your style, its deep and emotional, and draws u in… Pls post more soon!
This was really beautiful. Please continue!
The adoration both Bette and Tina feel for one another is wonderful. I can’t wait to see Tina draw out the shy Bette you have portrayed.