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Chapter 29
Tina looked at the house in front of her, she made slow and tentative steps towards the back of the house as her heart beat increased. She wasn’t sure if it was the fact of seeing Lily for the first time since her diagnosis or the fact she was going to see Bette again.
The time with Bette at the beach was all that she hoped it would be and more, with Bette being understanding about Tina’s reasoning for needing time and the pending trip she was about to take.
Their hug on the shoreline was something she had craved from the moment she stepped out of Bette’s embrace at the hospital. Yes, she had needed the time to process the what-if’s but she had also needed those moments of comfort that she had only found when she looked into Bette’s eyes, the moments that had come into her life so recently that it still took her aback as to the speed at which her feelings for this other woman had grown.
“Tina dear…” Lily said with surprise in her voice.
“Oh hi…, I’m sorry, I was miles away…” Tina said with elements of surprise at Lily’s sprightly ness, “how are you?”
Lily brought Tina into an embrace, “I’m okay dear…, more importantly, how are you?”
“Lily…” Tina admonished, shaking her head at the woman who dismissed her own circumstances in favour of enquiring at Tina’s disposition.
Lily smiled at her, “come and sit dear, I’ll get some tea…”
“Why don’t you let me make it?”
“Actually I was going to get madam to make it…” Lily winked with a chuckle from Tina.
Bette heard the voices before she saw that they had visitors, it was a voice she would have recognised anywhere in any situation, that slight chuckle that lit up those hazel eyes, that smile that made her heart beat that little bit faster…
“Bette…?” Lily called.
She walked to the back door as she heard her name, all the while wiping her hands on the towel as she stepped onto the decking.
“T…!” Bette said with a wide smile, “what a nice surprise…” she added as she walked towards Tina, who was sat on the swinging bench while Lily sat in her usual rocking chair.
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Ahem…..perhaps Lily has some advice (If you know what mean) to pass along to the young lovebird? It’s not like all things sex and romance and life got invented in 1970. Maybe she should pass her tips along to Tina. Could get a little awkward getting down to the real nitty gritty with Bette after all.
Jo, that was beautiful! But damn you I’m going to be so sad when you let Lily go.
This such a great story. Looking forward to more
What a heartwarming story telling. And yes, so looking forward for more.
Jo… you posted! Thank you! Excellent chappy as always. Here patiently waiting for the next one! =)
YES!!!! Okay mate, you have me smiling big with adding that part with Bette grabbing the cheeks of her JEAN ass!!! LMAO! Thanks for the lovely chapter, and I’m definately one of the happy ones to know you are going to continue to stretch this one out. Can’t wait to read more. Have a fabLUous weekend. x
Yaaaay! You are extending our fav story of yours! Thanks, dear friend. We truly appreciate it. There is so much more potential you can develop in this wonderful story. Thanks for reconsidering not wrapping up. Sincerely, Lucero & Marsha – From Mexico City
Yaaaay! You are extending our fav story of yours! Thanks, dear friend. We truly appreciate it. There is so much more potential you can develop in this wonderful story. Thanks for reconsidering not wrapping up. Sincerely, Lucero & Marsha – From Mexico City
A HAPPY-SAD SORT OF TALE…LOVE IT.
I’m going to miss Lily but how wonderful that she get’s to be a part of Bette’s happiness. It’s a true gift to bear witness to those you love, fall in love. PS.
I love Lily and am sad that she is going to be heading into the everafter. I am glad that Tina is letting Bette in and explaining what she needs so that they can move forward. FANTASTIC chapter!
Nice post. Lily is such an appealing character.
JO! Loved the update. I like how you have taken the time to develop these characters. I only hope that Bette doesn’t completely fall apart after Lily’s death. I think she’s such a fantastic character! I can’t wait for more!
Too bad Tina never got to see Maxy and Lily together. I guess in one way by watching Bette and Tina you get to see what Maxy and Lily were like. Now hurry up and get Tina back from her trip free from all that bound her to the prick.
Another beautifully written chapter Jo! I’m really happy to hear that you are not going to shut this story down. It’s been great so far and I am always looking for more!
That was great and beautiful!
Thank you Ms. Jo for posting another chapter of one of my favorite stories on this site. And so happy to know tht you will spare Lily for yet awhile longer.I wish we could keep her and not let her go But alas life is not like that either, is it. Grand story and your ability to make the dialogue so realistic, it’s as though we’re sitting and tallking with them in a group, you make us feel a part of it all. Great writing to be able to put us in the scene, testament to your awesome talent. PPS
beautiful
ei…um this is a really out of the blue question but um is hindsight finished?
I’m so very happy to see this post and know that it’s going to continue for a while longer! I check for this one all the time. I love how tender and caring this story is and Lily is the best! Let Bette and Tina enjoy some more time with her. PPS!!
Wow Jo, you don’t know how much this story arouses our emotions, it’s like we are really living with these people, you are incredibly talented Hun, I don’t think reading the chapter once is enough, I can’t find anything not in it’s place, everything is perfect in this dazzling story and I feel the same about Lilly as you do. Post soon dear, you have eager readers waiting for you here.With all my love
Sooooo glad you decided not to let go of this story quite yet… I just love it, and you have so much here that I’m relieved that you’ll keep us on this journey a bit longer… After all, now that all the turmoil is nearing the end, it’s time to enjoy B&T finally getting together. They deserve it, just like in the show! Oh and you got us hooked to Lily, please don’t let her go just yet… Thanks for this update Jo, I missed LS a lot! I really like how you’re making this “I love you” moment a huge thing, it’s too often abused or declared too early in my opinion… It’s taking its full meaning in this story. I also love how your B & T are portrayed as complex individuals before being a couple… I really think that what makes a love story that bit more beautiful is the very fact that it’s the actual encounter of two unique personalities, and by taking your time and these various turns in the telling, you’re giving us an even more beautiful tale! Thanks a lot! ;)
Hooo Jo… I’m so glad that you decided to keep going on that story… you really frightened me on the last post, when I thought that you would “wrap it up” in one single post, when there is now room for more happiness… :-) And for Tina and Bette to share it with Lily is such a good thing, for them, and for Lily too… “going away” when you know that the people you love will take the relay is soooo much easier :-) — Thanks for that beautiful story…… and yes, we are just a bunch of horny dogs (or bitch ;-)) — but, did you not build your palmares on that ?!! and you did it so well :-D
Thanks for the update Jo and for keeping Lily around a little while longer.
Damn, woman, you are the romantic, aren’t you? PPS.
WOW!!! Jo, that was so wonderfully writen!!! I will hate to see Lily go. But glad she will be with the one she loves. Thanks