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The One Thing That Stays Mine – Chapter 2
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Shane arrived at Alice’s apartment earlier then they originally planned. Alice had called with the bright idea of having Shane do her hair, seeing as how the purpose of the dinner was to gain clients.
"This was seriously a great idea, Al. You sure you don’t care what direction I go?" Shane was pouring some product into her hand as she waited for the blonde’s reply.
"Do your worst…well not literally your worst because we’re trying to impress…but you know…go nuts!" Alice slipped into her robe so her hair wouldn’t get messed up when it was time to get dressed and plopped down on a stool they had taken into the bathroom.
Shane walked up behind her and started running the product through Alice’s long blonde locks, smiling as she started to purr.
"Mmmm…that feels good. Can’t wait for my massage! Yaaaaay!" Shane rolled her eyes and playfully tugged on her friends hair.
"Owww! No hair pulling missy!"
"You know you like it." Shane teased.
"…true enough, but we have places to be and people to impress! Make me look beautiful already."
"That’s not gonna be hard to do babe, but I suppose we should get started." Shane said as she began to work her magic.
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Twenty-five minutes later, Shane was finished and both women admired her handy work in the mirror.
"Dayum. I’m a hottie." Alice smiled brightly as she checked herself out. Shane simply nodded and whistled, thinking how the blonde had know idea just how gorgeous she really was.
"You should get dressed. We have to leave soon." She started to put her stuff into her work bag as Alice nodded and disappeared back into her bedroom.
Shane hurried up and got dressed as well and had her hair and make up ready in less then ten minutes. She looked in the mirror and shrugged her shoulders.
"Good enough" She said to herself. She was wearing black pants and a white collar shirt that she knew she paid too much for, but loved the way it fit her, a silk blue tie, and a fitting black jacket.
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Twenty minutes later, just as Shane was about to yell at Alice to hurry up, the blonde emerged from her room and Shane lost her voice. She held nothing back as she blatantly stared Alice up and down, taking in the masterpiece that this woman truly was. She was wearing her black cocktail dress and three inch black pumps. The dress was short but not untasteful, loose but still managed to hug the blonde’s sensual curves in just the right way, and her breasts…Shane wasn’t sure how they were even still in the dress but she frankly didn’t give a fuck. Her neck and shoulder’s were exposed, revealing the creamy, smooth skin that made shane involuntarily lick her lips. And she just kept on staring…and staring…until the sound of someone clearing her throat brought her back to earth.
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YAY! I actually beat MaGoose! Nothing like a bit of friendly competition! So yeah the pairing is a little hard for me to imagine because i do love Alice and Dana sooo much but you are doing a wonderful job! There were even a few ‘piss my pants’ parts with the whole Alice dialog!’Alice sang this last part with the punk sign in the air and Shane couldn’t help but laugh as she finally turned the car off.’ and ‘You toooootally want me right now, dont’cha?’….. Excellent update! As for your previous stuff or crap as you called it…i’m not a quitter at anything but it was def a challenge trying to weed through everything! LoL Cant wait for you next post!
Alice and Shane are so funny together. Yet could get serious if they keep on. thanks
I would totally spend my life opening doors for Leisha just to get a look at that luscious ass! LOL I’m hoping the next post will be sometime before next month! HA. Well maybe sometime before next week, but no promises. And, am I wrong, or are you cooking up this little confection on company time? SWEET! PPS
I second bettyvhall’s comment. Keep up the good writing and PPS!!
Stupid busy work day that let akshunjack beat me to #1… Grumble… Hee! Random Danish sex scenes would be funny. But I think this story is standing fine on its own. I’ll just imagine them for now. ;-D This is another great chapter, suzieb_33!! Love the teasing banter between the girls and how there are occasional steps over that friendship line. Shane’s reaction to the dress and Alice’s reaction to Shane’s reaction were written perfectly. Great touch with Alice singing. You are doing a great job with this — I can see the scenes playing out in my head. I really look forward to where you take this. You mention drama and I see many ways that could possibly play out. Thanks so much!!
Woooohoooo I love they way u write,I Miss you too sweetie!! U need to come out and vist me and Sammy.Yes the weather is gr8 here,Lower 80s. Thanks for this story and i can not wait for your next update!!! Love ya!!!
OMG, I think I’m a having a cuteness overload. Shane smitten is just adorable, and Alice is adorable the great majority of the time, so…yeah. Have I mentioned yet that I love this? Because I really, really do. And who cares whether or not it’s realistic for the show, it’s fanFICTION, lol. I dig Shalice and I don’t care if that makes me weird, lol. I have no idea on where you should take this since every time I try to write Shane I fail miserably, but I think the direction you’re heading is great. Again, it’s great to have you back! I missed your stuff!
hehe Alice calling Shane a smart ass..reckon it takes one to know one :DGreat update!!
Now you really upset me, lol. Please don’t call your fics CRAP. I may not be smart or have the best taste in reading, but god, those are some of the best Danish fics I’ve read. Still don’t like the idea of shalice and I’ll never see them more than friends. But I take back what I said in my last comment about shalice never happening on the show, with IC you never know, lol. As for the direction , I think you know what I want, but since that’s not possible in this, I’ll wait and hope for a Danish story!!!
suz – you write so well I can actually see it in my mindseye. Fantastic, humorous and I love it – even though it’s not Danish, but anything written by you has got to be great.
Love it! Keep up the good work.
So I read your story, and because you are expecting some awesome witty comment guess what you aren’t getting one….
Oh Pookie… where to start… How about the JEW song. You realize every time you sing it to me now, I’ll just be thinking of Shalice hotness right? And Danish will always have my heart, but Shalice definitely has a lust factor to them that no one can deny. And I love you for writing a story about them. Maybe I should start writing again just to rival you and piss you off when I come up with great ideas and use them before you… Now I’m just rambling. I’m drunk. I apologize. It’s taken me way too long to write this. If I left all my typos in, it wouldn’t be English…. I LOVE YOU!! :-P