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The Island – Chapter 1
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Dana Fairbanks had a very conventional upbringing. She lived in a modest house with her parents and younger brother in a small town in the Midwest.
She loved her family, but, felt distanced from them. Her brother was several years younger and it felt, at times, that the family consisted of just him and their parents. It was almost as if Dana was a visiting cousin or something. She tried very hard to make her parents proud of her and they were, in their own way. It was still hard to see her brother praised for getting a “B” on his spelling test when Dana had been a straight-“A” student since preschool. She wasn’t neglected and she knew her family cared for her, but, she never really felt truly loved.
Although she did very well in school, she really excelled in athletics. At one point she had hopes of using her athleticism to propel her out of the town, but, came to realize that it was unlikely. Her small high school was not on any college’s radar and her coaches were all at the end of their careers and couldn’t really do any networking for her.
It wasn’t that Dana hated the town she lived in. She actually liked it very much. She knew most everybody and had anything she thought she needed was within the city limits. Ever since she was twelve, though, she felt like she didn’t fit in the town anymore.
She went to a three-night sleep-away camp that year. And that was the first time Dana had kissed anyone. And it was a girl. The incident was life-changing.
After that Dana had struggled for several years trying to be conformist and fit in by dating some of the many boys that asked her out. The only long-term relationship she had with a boy was with a linebacker on the football team. The fact that he was gay made it the perfect relationship for both of them.
She finally came to admit to herself that she was a lesbian and it felt so good to stop trying to repress or change those feelings within herself. Not that she could tell anyone else or felt she could act on them at all. Not in this small town — even if she could find another lesbian here. It just felt good to come to terms with herself about her sexuality.
When Dana was sixteen, she went to a track meet several towns away and had to room with someone from another team. Her name was Melanie and she was a cute blond with long legs. She was Dana’s first lover. The other girl initiated it — Dana wouldn’t have even known where to start.
Melanie showed Dana a few things and Dana figured out many more on her own with her more-than-willing bed partner. It was a night Dana would never forget.
For Dana, it was a little awkward and a bit confusing and her bedmate seemed to have a better time than she did. But it cemented in Dana’s mind that she loved women. The next day Dana beat her new lover in the 200-yard-dash and they didn’t even speak for the rest of the trip.
She was resigned to getting a job at the local prison after high school graduation. It killed her a little bit because she was a competitor and hated to settle without a fight. Unfortunately she just didn’t have an opponent to beat in this case. She briefly considered joining the Army or Marines, but, could not stomach the thought of voluntarily getting into another situation where she had to hide who she was.
She still had a couple months until graduation. Maybe something would come up.
Thousands of miles away on a private island…
Harrison was reading through dossiers of thirty young women. All of them were athletic, intelligent, and attractive. They were also all very motivated to escape from their current situations. When he got to Dana’s file, he knew there was something special. He had this job for many years and trusted his instincts. He placed that folder in the small pile of possibles. “You, Miss Fairbanks, would be perfect.”
Little did Dana know that her life was shortly going to change in a way she could never have imagined.
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fascinating thus far! I keep thinking of Survivor though but ofc with a danish twist..is this where the story is going?
YAY! I’ve just been waitin fr the day u started this stry nd wat a great start, althou i wasnt ready fr it to finish u have definatley left me wantin more :) Brill cnt wait fr ur next post :) PPS and have a gd holiday :) x x
Wonderful start! I love Danish beginnings, even more when I have no idea where the story is going. The fact that you’re such a good writer is a big plus. Thanks for the new Danish! Have fun on your vacation! PPWYC!!!
Great start goose. I freaking love this story. Can’t wait to see where it goes. I have been bad. I haven’t been writing like I should be. SHame on me
Damn, 1 pg and you already got me hooked….hmm I think Harrison runs a ‘spy school’…
Nice start McGoose – looking forward to much more from you soon.
Well, my friend lets see where you take us on this ride. Ssmall town are terrible to live in. everyone knows everyones business. thanks
that was a great start and I can wait to see where you take this please post soon I love it so far
Hey girl, so I want to first off apologize for not realizing you were a writer! I saw your name and was like…I think she read my fic. I have been away from this site for too long it seems. lol. Anyway, I look forward to where you go with this! It’s an excellent start! I’m gonna go catch up on your other stuff while you’re on vacation with the fam! haha. Have a great Easter and PPS! :-D
OH YIPPY SKIPPY! Dana and Harrison goodness! SOO frickin excited MaGoose and glad to see that you have started another fic! WOO HOO for us readers, great..no outstanding, awesome, excellent start! Thanks for giving us another fantastic something? LoL to read!
ahh. Dana and Harrison.. This is a great start. I’m looking forward to more.
ooh good start im really looking forward to this now that closure is done!:( im going to have another guess as to what its about… maybe like survivor or reality type show where she meets alice! i cant wait and i hope you post soon!
Nice start sweetie!!! I can’t wait for ur next update (could it be b4 ur vacation pls hehehe) Happy Easter,and have fun!!! PPVS
Hello MaGoose, first I must say Thank you for your kind words… your mind is brilliant and I cannot wait to see what you have in store for us with this tale of passion and intrigue… :P… are we doing a spy story… that would be so freaking awesome… hmmmmm… where does Alice fit into this whole scenario… maybe another student… or maybe she is working for the other side… hmmm… remote island… kick @$$ agents… can anyone say super freaking duper awesome… I cannot wait to see how you unfold this story… booyaa… You my friend seriously Rock and Roll… or maybe its not a spy story and maybe it’s a super soldier story… or maybe he’s a mad scientist and she is his Frankenstein… hmmm… the wheels are turning… keep up Rocking it out there, I’ll be waiting. Enjoy your trip. Sincerely, JC
hmmm… i am very intrigued. post soon!