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    The Island – Chapter 3

    Story written on April 2, 2008 by MaGoose.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=69098
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    How does Alice fit into the story?

    Alice Piezecki was born into a life of privilege and luxury — although she didn’t know it for the first ten years of her life.

    Alice never knew her father.  He died before she was born and her mother never talked about him.  Her mother passed away when Alice was six and Alice was placed in the foster care system.  It was a nightmare.  She imagined that it was what prison would be like, but, with smaller people.

    The one bright spot was her friend Shane.  They bonded immediately when Alice came to the group home.  Shane made sure to show Alice the ropes.  She tried to protect the other girl when she could, but, Alice had a rough time of it nonetheless.  Alice became very street-wise and self-sufficient.  Then came that amazing day shortly after Alice turned 10.

    Alice got word the she needed to report to the Head’s office.  She was outside with Shane at the time going over some homework.  As soon as Alice heard those words all the blood left her face and she almost passed out.  You never wanted to get sent to the Head’s office.  Nothing good ever came of it.  Alice had been able to avoid it so far and wondered what might have caused the summons.  She didn’t have time to worry over it — she had to haul ass and get over there.  Shane gave her a quick hug and promised to be nearby.  Shane knew every nook and cranny of that old building that housed the group home and Alice felt a bit better knowing her friend wouldn’t abandon her.

    Alice got to the Head’s office and spent a few seconds straightening her uniform and making sure her hair was decent.  Alice’s hair had a mind of its own sometimes and she had been reprimanded by teachers in the past.

    Alice knocked lightly on the door and waited until she heard the command to enter.  She took a deep breath and opened the door.

    The Head was seated behind the old, oak desk.  Alice didn’t recognize her at first since it had to be the first time she had seen her with a smile on her face.  At least that it was Alice determined that odd grimace-type thing to be.

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    1. Sorry didn’t comment on first installment, but can’t let this one go by without thanking you for writing another wonderfully compulsive story – looking forward to more MaGoose.

    2. WOW! So this means..if Dana and Alice eventually get together…oh wow! This is definitely going to get interesting in one way or the other. Cant wait to see where you take this…especially with this ‘island’ Thanks for another fantastic post MaGoose! As always, you’ve got me curious!

    3. Okay. SO in love with the Shane Al friendship thing. The Danish is going to be on the way. High level security office Fairbanks of to body guard for the heiress prehaps? Sorry. I am just jumping around here. Where do you come up with this stuff goose. I SO FREAKIN LOVE YOu

    4. As an adopted person, I can understand and relate to how Alice felt with this. Kids her age shouldn’t have to have a heightened instinct for survival. They should be home, in school, getting into tiny trouble with other kids. The kind of stuff we take for granted. Can’t wait to see how Danish develops from this. PPS.

    6. So now we have three of the gang Plus Harrison. The plot thicken So the grandfather is rich,mega rich. and only the master of mystery MaGross know why,when or what is going on Thanks so much for posting

    7. Goose,u really make me smile!!! I totally LOVE this story and u are one hell of a writer,very talented!!!I can’t wait to see where you take me with this story and I am HOOKED!!! HDD alll the way baby!! PPVS

    9. OMG Magoose!!! I love thee!!! *squeal* I’m so glad I decided to log in today. Look how many comments you’ve got. WOW for Magoose. This is amazing– So Shane and Alice must be really thick, hee. On the Island….. wow wow wow wow, I can’t wait to see what will happen. I mean…. you are so great that you inspire me to write fanfic myself. :) tee hee… So 10 year old Alice was mature and smart :) She must be a young lady by when she meets Dana, hmm? Like a well educated and eligant (can’t imagine eligant with her quirky character, but…lol) heiress. YUMM I want another of your story, right now! :) Plz Post Soon, I may go crazy if you don’t. heehee

    10. Hey Magoose, all i can say is im very sorry i didnt comment on ur second installment i havent been on the site for a while. This story has me hooked, Completely!! I love it and love the history ur givin us on Alice etc. Love how Edward took Shane as well. Completely in love with ur story and can not wait to get to the island and how A nd D meet etc. Cant wait!!! :D:D:D lol xxx

    11. I so would have kicked Al’s ass if she hadn’t taken Shane with her, lol…Glad I didn’t have to :) I can’t help but smile at the thought of Shane rich and educated. So happy both Dana and Alice choose the island (it probably wouldn’t have been a Danish story if they hadn’t, but I’m still happy, is that weird?). Can’t wait to see what this island is. After that, hopefully, Alice and Dana can finally meet, which I’m so excited about. Thank you!!!

    12. how the crap have I not commented on this yet? It’s great. I’m sorry, I’m kinda dumb. I do love this though! And how cute that she took Shane with her. That is definitely awww-worthy. Yay for you and yay for this.

    13. …Ok…I’m officially ridiculously excited about this story! It’s very clever and well written and I will be not so patiently waiting for the next chap! PPS and keep up the great work! :-D

    14. frickin loved the chap!! Al and Shane as kids was too cool, can only imagine what they did to get rid of the governesses….whenever you end with the island, I keep picturing Tatoo–‘de plane boss de plane:D

    15. this is awesome. i love that alice wouldn’t leave without shane. i can’t wait to see what happens and to learn more about this secret organiztion. but who takes a job without asking about the job description and duties?

    16. MaGoose!! Loving this story it’s amaazzzinng!! I’ve read your other story closure too which I also thought was brilliant! I love your writing style you really are talented! I started reading your and HarukaFairbanks little merged story and I love it and love Lexie lol I don’t know how you juggle these amazing stories at one time!!! much love xx

    17. dayumm can’t believe I missed the second chapter. I’m really looking forward to the next posts of this story. Tis be awesome. Thank you.

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