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    The Island – Chapter 3

    Story written on April 2, 2008 by MaGoose.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=69098
    Author Notes:

    How does Alice fit into the story?

    “Ma’am?  You called for me?”

    “Yes, child, please have a seat.”

    Every alarm in Alice’s body was going off.  Something weird was going on here.  Unfortunately, she had no choice but to go along for the ride.  Alice stepped into the room and noticed two other people.  One was a young man of about twenty.  He had a cheery, open face and Alice felt immediately comfortable around him.  The other person was an older man, maybe in his 60’s.  He had distinguished white hair and a very deep tan.  He seemed very dashing to the young girl.

    Alice took the remaining seat in the room which put her across from the two men.  She sat perfectly still and stared at her folded hands in her lap.  She willed herself not to fidget.  All the adults at the group home hated the kids to fidget.

    The Head spoke up.  “Sir?  May I introduce Alice Piezecki.  She is the girl you were inquiring about.”  Alice’s head snapped up at this.  Why would anyone be asking about her?  She was way too old to be considered adoptable.  She looked once again at the older man that the Head was addressing and as she looked more closely she noticed that he seemed friendlier than when she initially looked.  She also saw that he seemed to have the same chocolate-brown eyes that Alice had.  Who was this man?

    “Piezecki!”

    Alice stood quickly as if she had been shocked and gave a slight curtsey.  “Pleased to meet you, sir.”  She extended her hand.  Fuck.  She was going to get in trouble for not remembering to do that.

    Both men seemed shocked at that display.  The older man recovered quickly and shook Alice’s hand while the younger man eyed the Head with displeasure.  “I am pleased to meet you, too, Alice.  My name is Edward Stranton and this is my associate Harrison.”

    Alice repeated the curtsey and handshake with the other man.  She tried to steal a look at the Head to see how mad she was, but, forgot about that completely with the older man’s next words.

    Mr. Stranton looked at the Head and said, in a tone the brooked no argument, “I would like to talk to her alone.”  That tone made strong men weak in the knees and caused the Head to move quickly to get out the door and shut it behind her.

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    1. Sorry didn’t comment on first installment, but can’t let this one go by without thanking you for writing another wonderfully compulsive story – looking forward to more MaGoose.

    2. WOW! So this means..if Dana and Alice eventually get together…oh wow! This is definitely going to get interesting in one way or the other. Cant wait to see where you take this…especially with this ‘island’ Thanks for another fantastic post MaGoose! As always, you’ve got me curious!

    3. Okay. SO in love with the Shane Al friendship thing. The Danish is going to be on the way. High level security office Fairbanks of to body guard for the heiress prehaps? Sorry. I am just jumping around here. Where do you come up with this stuff goose. I SO FREAKIN LOVE YOu

    4. As an adopted person, I can understand and relate to how Alice felt with this. Kids her age shouldn’t have to have a heightened instinct for survival. They should be home, in school, getting into tiny trouble with other kids. The kind of stuff we take for granted. Can’t wait to see how Danish develops from this. PPS.

    6. So now we have three of the gang Plus Harrison. The plot thicken So the grandfather is rich,mega rich. and only the master of mystery MaGross know why,when or what is going on Thanks so much for posting

    7. Goose,u really make me smile!!! I totally LOVE this story and u are one hell of a writer,very talented!!!I can’t wait to see where you take me with this story and I am HOOKED!!! HDD alll the way baby!! PPVS

    9. OMG Magoose!!! I love thee!!! *squeal* I’m so glad I decided to log in today. Look how many comments you’ve got. WOW for Magoose. This is amazing– So Shane and Alice must be really thick, hee. On the Island….. wow wow wow wow, I can’t wait to see what will happen. I mean…. you are so great that you inspire me to write fanfic myself. :) tee hee… So 10 year old Alice was mature and smart :) She must be a young lady by when she meets Dana, hmm? Like a well educated and eligant (can’t imagine eligant with her quirky character, but…lol) heiress. YUMM I want another of your story, right now! :) Plz Post Soon, I may go crazy if you don’t. heehee

    10. Hey Magoose, all i can say is im very sorry i didnt comment on ur second installment i havent been on the site for a while. This story has me hooked, Completely!! I love it and love the history ur givin us on Alice etc. Love how Edward took Shane as well. Completely in love with ur story and can not wait to get to the island and how A nd D meet etc. Cant wait!!! :D:D:D lol xxx

    11. I so would have kicked Al’s ass if she hadn’t taken Shane with her, lol…Glad I didn’t have to :) I can’t help but smile at the thought of Shane rich and educated. So happy both Dana and Alice choose the island (it probably wouldn’t have been a Danish story if they hadn’t, but I’m still happy, is that weird?). Can’t wait to see what this island is. After that, hopefully, Alice and Dana can finally meet, which I’m so excited about. Thank you!!!

    12. how the crap have I not commented on this yet? It’s great. I’m sorry, I’m kinda dumb. I do love this though! And how cute that she took Shane with her. That is definitely awww-worthy. Yay for you and yay for this.

    13. …Ok…I’m officially ridiculously excited about this story! It’s very clever and well written and I will be not so patiently waiting for the next chap! PPS and keep up the great work! :-D

    14. frickin loved the chap!! Al and Shane as kids was too cool, can only imagine what they did to get rid of the governesses….whenever you end with the island, I keep picturing Tatoo–‘de plane boss de plane:D

    15. this is awesome. i love that alice wouldn’t leave without shane. i can’t wait to see what happens and to learn more about this secret organiztion. but who takes a job without asking about the job description and duties?

    16. MaGoose!! Loving this story it’s amaazzzinng!! I’ve read your other story closure too which I also thought was brilliant! I love your writing style you really are talented! I started reading your and HarukaFairbanks little merged story and I love it and love Lexie lol I don’t know how you juggle these amazing stories at one time!!! much love xx

    17. dayumm can’t believe I missed the second chapter. I’m really looking forward to the next posts of this story. Tis be awesome. Thank you.

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