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The Island – Chapter 5
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Dana settled in quickly to her new living space. She had a bunk, wall locker, and foot locker. The understanding was that as you advanced in the guards you would get more privileges and more privacy. Some guards worked up to have their own room in two years — although the average was three. Dana intended to make it in one. Or less.
Dana had that mindset as she prepared for the first training session of the day. It was hand-to-hand combat.
The guards had some downtime, but, when they were not assigned to a post, there were various training exercises planned to keep them in top condition. Today’s was a deceptively simple exercise. The guards were paired up and fought until one brought the other down. The trick was to bring the person down without causing major harm. Several of the senior guards were on hand to watch for problems since the exercise was done without wearing pads. Dana almost groaned out loud when she was paired up with Devaux. She hated that bitch with a passion. In part this was because she never fought fair. She once questioned a fellow guard as to why someone who seemed so beneath the talents of the other guards was kept around and was simply told that the boss liked her.
The whistle blew and the girls started circling.
Alice entered the room and moved to sit on the bleachers. She went un-noticed so far as everyone was concentrating on the battles at hand. She quickly scanned the room and found Dana.
Gabby and Dana were in a heated contest. Dana had the upper hand several times only to be countered by a low blow or illegal hit by the other woman. The senior guards seemed to miss it every time.
Alice saw it though. She was very familiar with Gabby’s tactics and sense of entitlement and couldn’t wait to see how this Dana Fairbanks handled herself.
Dana tried a standard move, knowing that Gabby would once again block it illegally. She then used Gabby’s momentum against her to slam her hard against the mat and win the match. Alice was extremely impressed. It was then that one of the senior guards noticed her presence.
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You were not kidding about a new chapter… Yay!Very well written. Of course, I would like more as soon as possible.I wonder, how Dana going to get out of the situation if Alice puts the moves on her…?
Gabby needs to be killed and thrown into a wood chipper so dana can bath in her blood. It would make a good way for her to die. Poor Dana all worried as usual.
OMG, right off the bat, Gabby against D. Unbelievable!! Not so good an impression about A when D was told that “the boss liked her” I sense that Gabby would pay back D at some point, drama. Then you gave us Gabby planting seeds in D’s head. Evil, but evilly good though. I too thought about the “meet all the new employees” as an excuse to see D in private. You did a fantastic job with their first greeting. Was it “love at first sight”? very sweet. I fear that D would face a uphill battle when A pursue her because of A was the boss. As much as A was a private person, under all these watchful eyes, I hope D was up for the challenge. I am sure Harrison and Shane would lend their helping hands to protect these two. So glad to see Harrison played a bigger part in this story. I am not big on matchmakers but in this case, thank you to Harrison bringing D to the island. MaGoose, thanks for your back to back posting. Absolutely love this story and definitely looking forward for more. My time away was quiet and wished I could have read some of the stories. But I certainly enjoy being back and start reading again. Can’t wait for your next post. Thank you.
Damn MaGoose awesome two chapters..was sorry to see her grandfather pass so early, but Alice and Shane really seem to complement each other well for the business…Gabby Effin Deveux!!! man the shits gonna hit the fan :D
My, my… My Gabby is jelous, jelous, jelous. I think Dana and Gabby will always be ‘cat and dog.’ Even from the L word, it’s apparent. But what a way to have a bad impression on Alice though!Innocent Dana is going to try to please Alice and it’s gonna play out that Alice is so down-to-earth,(which she is) and D is gonna make a fool of herself.lol Awwww…. boss and employee relationship is so hard. Don’t ya think. But more exciting I guess!!! lol hee heee I’m so glad I checked the site tonight.:) I look forward to the next one.;)
WOOT! I’m am sad that Gabby is sticking around but sooo frickin excited that Dana slammed her %&&*!@ to the mat, i would have smacked her in the ear hole and ripped her face off. I also liked how Dana was chosen over Gabby, YAY! Hopefully we see how you handle the whole employer-employee thing, this is going to get interesting and i’m stoked. Fantastic job Magoose, can’t wait to see what else you have in store!
ah poor dana. screw gabby for messing with her. great update. i love how quickly you are posting too! keep it up!
Augh! Nadia and Gabby.. eek! This is go0oooddd.. me likes very much and you’re posting fine, thank you. As usual I have no idea what to say lol but yeah, DANISH forevah!! heheOh and welcome back hail_danalice. :)
Do you think that if I set up an office with a computer and a mini fridge, stocked with whatever you wanted I could keep you at my house busily writing, so I could read as much as I wanted? Hopefully it doesnt sound too forward, I just really like this story…
:D Ur a quick worker lol. Wooo on the little duel D and Gabby had, specially tht D won wen Al was watching. Stupid moron had to go and put doubt in Dana’s mind thou .. typical, Gabby tht is not Alice. I hope Dana stills goes to Dinner thou, i think althou she mite not think she wants it … she does lol. Loving the chemistry and cant wait to see it continue and blossom :) Genius at work as usual lol PPS X X
that was great and I can’t wait to see what will happen next great update I love it pps
HAHAHA jealous Gabby,loved it! Dana is one lucky woman to be invited to “Dinner” with Alice,can’t wait to read about this! Im excited and thanks for that, it’s what I needed before work.PPVS
Damnit! I was so busy this weekend and missed your last post but I’m caught up now and they were both awesome! Fucking Gabby. lol. Very true to the character tho. I can’t wait to see where you take it! PPS
Hello Goose, ok… whoosh finally I’m here… sorry I missed the boat … looking back why is the Island getting smaller… I’ll be good… please let me stay on the island… they are HOT I tell you… I must stay… jumps over board swimming towards Island when Tiger sharks eat me… but just before that Bette saves my ass… NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO… ok… I’m done with that… I’ll be good and be here prompt each and every time you post :P… hehe… well as for this one… AAAAWWWWWWEEESSSSOOOOMMMMEEEE… this one was freaking awesome… yep… I love how you have Alice all superior well cause she’s hot you now… hehe… and little Dana is about to get schooled… hehe… I love how you have all these characters interacting… Nadia and Gabby… hmmmmm… fun fun fun… cannot wait for more… and just so you now… you don’t need to fix anything… this one is fucking brilliant… keep on trucking… JC (hmmmm stoopid stars… don’t let them bog you down… you hear me :P)