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The Island – Chapter 5
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“Miss Piezecki! I didn’t know you would be visiting today. Is there anything in particular that brings you here?”
“Hey, Sam. Would you mind bringing over the girl that fought Gabby? I would like to congratulate her. It is not often someone slams Devaux to the mat.”
Sam somehow refrained from smiling as she headed over to the two women. They were toe-to-toe and Gabby was complaining over the move Dana used.
“Break it up you two. Someone here wants to see you.” Sam nodded towards the bleachers. Gabby lit up on seeing Alice and gave a little squeal of delight. She started over and was stopped abruptly by Sam. “Not you, Devaux.” Man. That was fun. “Fairbanks! Head on over and introduce yourself.”
Disappointment quickly washed over Gabby’s face only to be replaced by anger — anger at Dana and anger at Alice. She turned and stomped off.
“Hurry up, Fairbanks. She doesn’t like to be kept waiting.” She finally did smile as Dana sprinted over and slid to an awkward stop a couple feet in front of Alice. She immediately stood at attention.
“Relax, please.” Dana moved to an at-ease position. Alice stood, stuck out her hand and said “Hi. I’m Alice Piezecki.” Dana looked at her hand like she had never seen one before. She quickly recovered and held out her own (after wiping it quickly on her shorts) “Dana Fairbanks.” She then clasped hands with the blonde.
Neither knew what hit them. At that moment, they both felt a tremendous surge of energy and they looked deeply into each other’s eyes. The held hands for longer than necessary when Dana finally (and reluctantly) pulled away. “Sorry” she mumbled.
“No need to be, Dana.” Alice replied in a shaky voice.
Dana was not prepared to meet Alice Piezecki face-to-face. She was even more breathtaking than in the photos she was shown as part of her training. Even in the simple t-shirt and jeans she was wearing. It certainly did nothing to damper the raging crush that Dana already had on the woman. Thank goodness she had just completed a hard workout and had a reason for her heart to be pumping like crazy and to be breathing hard.
“I read over your dossier and I am very impressed by everything you have accomplished so far in your training.” Dana felt herself blush at the compliments from this beautiful woman and willed herself to stop so she wouldn’t make an even bigger fool out of herself.
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You were not kidding about a new chapter… Yay!Very well written. Of course, I would like more as soon as possible.I wonder, how Dana going to get out of the situation if Alice puts the moves on her…?
Gabby needs to be killed and thrown into a wood chipper so dana can bath in her blood. It would make a good way for her to die. Poor Dana all worried as usual.
OMG, right off the bat, Gabby against D. Unbelievable!! Not so good an impression about A when D was told that “the boss liked her” I sense that Gabby would pay back D at some point, drama. Then you gave us Gabby planting seeds in D’s head. Evil, but evilly good though. I too thought about the “meet all the new employees” as an excuse to see D in private. You did a fantastic job with their first greeting. Was it “love at first sight”? very sweet. I fear that D would face a uphill battle when A pursue her because of A was the boss. As much as A was a private person, under all these watchful eyes, I hope D was up for the challenge. I am sure Harrison and Shane would lend their helping hands to protect these two. So glad to see Harrison played a bigger part in this story. I am not big on matchmakers but in this case, thank you to Harrison bringing D to the island. MaGoose, thanks for your back to back posting. Absolutely love this story and definitely looking forward for more. My time away was quiet and wished I could have read some of the stories. But I certainly enjoy being back and start reading again. Can’t wait for your next post. Thank you.
Damn MaGoose awesome two chapters..was sorry to see her grandfather pass so early, but Alice and Shane really seem to complement each other well for the business…Gabby Effin Deveux!!! man the shits gonna hit the fan :D
My, my… My Gabby is jelous, jelous, jelous. I think Dana and Gabby will always be ‘cat and dog.’ Even from the L word, it’s apparent. But what a way to have a bad impression on Alice though!Innocent Dana is going to try to please Alice and it’s gonna play out that Alice is so down-to-earth,(which she is) and D is gonna make a fool of herself.lol Awwww…. boss and employee relationship is so hard. Don’t ya think. But more exciting I guess!!! lol hee heee I’m so glad I checked the site tonight.:) I look forward to the next one.;)
WOOT! I’m am sad that Gabby is sticking around but sooo frickin excited that Dana slammed her %&&*!@ to the mat, i would have smacked her in the ear hole and ripped her face off. I also liked how Dana was chosen over Gabby, YAY! Hopefully we see how you handle the whole employer-employee thing, this is going to get interesting and i’m stoked. Fantastic job Magoose, can’t wait to see what else you have in store!
ah poor dana. screw gabby for messing with her. great update. i love how quickly you are posting too! keep it up!
Augh! Nadia and Gabby.. eek! This is go0oooddd.. me likes very much and you’re posting fine, thank you. As usual I have no idea what to say lol but yeah, DANISH forevah!! heheOh and welcome back hail_danalice. :)
Do you think that if I set up an office with a computer and a mini fridge, stocked with whatever you wanted I could keep you at my house busily writing, so I could read as much as I wanted? Hopefully it doesnt sound too forward, I just really like this story…
:D Ur a quick worker lol. Wooo on the little duel D and Gabby had, specially tht D won wen Al was watching. Stupid moron had to go and put doubt in Dana’s mind thou .. typical, Gabby tht is not Alice. I hope Dana stills goes to Dinner thou, i think althou she mite not think she wants it … she does lol. Loving the chemistry and cant wait to see it continue and blossom :) Genius at work as usual lol PPS X X
that was great and I can’t wait to see what will happen next great update I love it pps
HAHAHA jealous Gabby,loved it! Dana is one lucky woman to be invited to “Dinner” with Alice,can’t wait to read about this! Im excited and thanks for that, it’s what I needed before work.PPVS
Damnit! I was so busy this weekend and missed your last post but I’m caught up now and they were both awesome! Fucking Gabby. lol. Very true to the character tho. I can’t wait to see where you take it! PPS
Hello Goose, ok… whoosh finally I’m here… sorry I missed the boat … looking back why is the Island getting smaller… I’ll be good… please let me stay on the island… they are HOT I tell you… I must stay… jumps over board swimming towards Island when Tiger sharks eat me… but just before that Bette saves my ass… NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO… ok… I’m done with that… I’ll be good and be here prompt each and every time you post :P… hehe… well as for this one… AAAAWWWWWWEEESSSSOOOOMMMMEEEE… this one was freaking awesome… yep… I love how you have Alice all superior well cause she’s hot you now… hehe… and little Dana is about to get schooled… hehe… I love how you have all these characters interacting… Nadia and Gabby… hmmmmm… fun fun fun… cannot wait for more… and just so you now… you don’t need to fix anything… this one is fucking brilliant… keep on trucking… JC (hmmmm stoopid stars… don’t let them bog you down… you hear me :P)