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Keep Bleeding Love Ch.3
Alice drove home, slowly, in a trance. Seeing Dana healed her and broke her all at the same time. She flipped through the stations to listen to a song when Wonder Wall filled the car. Alice sang the lyrics gently to herself as she took her exit. "And after alllllllll, you’re my wonder wallllllll."
Dana stood outside of The Planet, letting it all sink in. She looked down at everything that was on the ground of Alice’s. She scooped it all up and took it into the coffee shop with her, to be greeted by ice cold glares. Kit looked like she could kill Dana, and Shane looked like she was going to. Dana opened her mouth to speak but was cut short by Shane. "You. This is all your fucking fault, over something that could’ve and should’ve been prevented. Lara was an easy excuse and you know it." Lara walked up behind Dana and wrapped her arms around the tennis champ.
"I don’t think that’s your place to say Shane." Right then, in front of everyone, was the complete wrong time for Lara to even think about speaking. Shane took a step toward Lara, and Kit was quick to grab her up. Kit was talking Shane down, when they turned around to see Lara and Dana yelling about something.
"All you are is an escape, I can’t do that to you. It’s not fair." Lara’s eyes were filled to flowing when Shane and Kit came over. Lara took off her apron and handed it to Kit, before storming out.
Alice walked through the door of her apartment and sat her keys in the bowl. "Fuck, Alice. Is this really how you want to feel?" She let the question sink in. "No, this is how I deserve to feel like this." She slothed her way around the house, getting a shower, food, and flopping in bed to watch T.V. She flipped through the channels until she found C.S.I. and snuggled in to watch.
"FUCK!" Dana screamed as loud as she could and collapsed against the wall and slid down it. She sat on the floor crying and shaking. "FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK." Dana jumped up off the floor and walked out of the shop to scream until her lungs gave out and she was wobbling from exhaustion. Shane walked out to watch as Dana punched a light post a good 10 times before sitting on the curb and cursing herself.
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(20 votes, average: 3.50 out of 5)
Love all the posts, but, try not to burn yourself out! I love that the gang is supporting Alice, but, I am starting to feel bad for Dana. What can I say? I love both my girls and want them happy together. Great ending to the chapter. You do an amazing job writing the emotions — I’m right there with them. I hope they go somewhere to talk. And get Dana’s poor hand looked at. Thank you!!
danish_always, you outdid yourself. Seriously, you should listen to MaGoose We want you around for a long time. This chapter was well written with plenty of drama. I agree with D that it was not Shane’s place to judge her relationship with A. But on the other hand, they were all good friends and I would let this one go because Shane had only good intention. Glad to see the entire gang together to look for D. I too felt bad for D and hope her hands were not hurt badly which might impair her tennis. Thanks again and have a good night!
excellence, excellence, excellence. Alice can’t stand Dana being hurt, now can she? lol…. Wow, I feel like snuggling into my bed and watch a movie! What a great idea!
This is great. Really, seriously great. I’m really sad for Dana, but glad that Alice found her…although I kinda agree with her telling Shane that it’s not her problem. because it’s not, after what Dana did to her. Still, Shane knew that Alice could find Dana, so I guess I forgive her, lol. Have I mentioned yet that I adore this story? And slow down, child. I love the quick updates as I know we all do, but speaking from experience, it’s REALLY hard to keep up this pace. I don’t want you stressing yourself out! We can wait, I promise. No matter how impatient we seem, you take all the time you need.
I just found this and am so excited. Welcome Danish Always to the danish writingness. I am HF as everyone calls me. The once quick but now lazy writer. I will bow my head to you and smile at your wonderful story
Poor Dana and her hand,awwww. Thanks for the quick update but like everyone please pace urself! U are doing a awesome job at writing this and please post at a confortable pace.
Well CRAP! i wrote this super comment and much to my amazement it was on the other post! WTP! anyway i guess i’ll say it again…FANTASTIC JOB, i really do like a careless Alice and angry Dana