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    Keep Bleeding Love Ch.3

    Story written on April 9, 2008 by danish_always.
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    Alice heads home, Dana does some thinking, and Shane says her peace with both.

    Alice was snuggled into bed with Ben and Jerry. She had put in a movie and was watching it when her cell phone rang. She saw Shane’s number and answered hesitantly. "Yeah." Shane’s voice was calm but hurried. "Alice, you got to come down to The Planet, Dane’s destroying shit, it’s not pretty." Alice thought a moment before her stubbornness took over her heart. "Fuck that, it’s not my problem anymore." She hung up the phone, and stretched out, and fell asleep for a nap listening to her phone vibrating on the nightstand.

    "Dana you’ve got to stop." Shane was making an attepmt to get Dana to calm down. "Fuck you Shane, why don’t you calm the fuck down, huh?" Dana’s tears were flowing as she climbed into her Mercedes. Shane tried stopping her but Dana was out of sight before she knew it. She made yet another call to Alice, this time with luck.

    "STOP FUCKING CALLING ME SHANE!" Shane was taken back, but didn’t let Alice hear it. "You shut the fuck up and you listen to me. Dana’s hand is pretty fucked up, she was punching shit, it was bleeding. I tried to calm her down but she just drove away. You need to pull your head out of your ass and find her. NOW!" Shane hung up on Alice, and Alice darted from bed. The thought of Dana hurt, alone somewhere, turned her stomach.

    Cruising through the L.A. traffic in rush hour sucked, but it was worth it to find Dana. Alice was on the phone calling everyone. "Bette, oh my god thank you. Dana’s on the loose and shes hurt. Help me please." Alice hung up. Within 15 mins everyone was in cars and looking for the white Mercedes. "Come on Dane, where the fuck are you." Then it hit her. The canyon.

    Within 5 minutes Alice was whipping the Mini into the parking lot next to the infamous car of Ms.Fairbanks. Alice stopped and took off out of the Mini leaving the door open and everything. She ran the trail for a few minutes until she saw Dana, crying on a bench overlooking the city. "Dane?"

    Dana thought her mind was playing tricks. She did a double take then stood up to walk to Al. They met half way in the middle and were looking at each other when Alice noticed Dana’s hang. "Fuck Dana what’d you do." Alice reached for the hand, but Dana drew it back."I let you go, that’s what I fucking did." Alice looked at the pain in Dana’s eyes and wrapped her up in hug. By this time Carmen, Jenny, Bette, Tina, Kit, and Shane were all there watching. When they went for the hug, the hoots and hollers from the family startled them and they felt like awkward teenagers. "Shut the fuck up guys." Both Dana and Alice were crying, but they managed to walk past thier friends, hand in hand back to the cars.

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    1. Love all the posts, but, try not to burn yourself out! I love that the gang is supporting Alice, but, I am starting to feel bad for Dana. What can I say? I love both my girls and want them happy together. Great ending to the chapter. You do an amazing job writing the emotions — I’m right there with them. I hope they go somewhere to talk. And get Dana’s poor hand looked at. Thank you!!

    2. danish_always, you outdid yourself. Seriously, you should listen to MaGoose We want you around for a long time. This chapter was well written with plenty of drama. I agree with D that it was not Shane’s place to judge her relationship with A. But on the other hand, they were all good friends and I would let this one go because Shane had only good intention. Glad to see the entire gang together to look for D. I too felt bad for D and hope her hands were not hurt badly which might impair her tennis. Thanks again and have a good night!

    3. excellence, excellence, excellence. Alice can’t stand Dana being hurt, now can she? lol…. Wow, I feel like snuggling into my bed and watch a movie! What a great idea!

    4. This is great. Really, seriously great. I’m really sad for Dana, but glad that Alice found her…although I kinda agree with her telling Shane that it’s not her problem. because it’s not, after what Dana did to her. Still, Shane knew that Alice could find Dana, so I guess I forgive her, lol. Have I mentioned yet that I adore this story? And slow down, child. I love the quick updates as I know we all do, but speaking from experience, it’s REALLY hard to keep up this pace. I don’t want you stressing yourself out! We can wait, I promise. No matter how impatient we seem, you take all the time you need.

    5. I just found this and am so excited. Welcome Danish Always to the danish writingness. I am HF as everyone calls me. The once quick but now lazy writer. I will bow my head to you and smile at your wonderful story

    6. Poor Dana and her hand,awwww. Thanks for the quick update but like everyone please pace urself! U are doing a awesome job at writing this and please post at a confortable pace.

    7. Well CRAP! i wrote this super comment and much to my amazement it was on the other post! WTP! anyway i guess i’ll say it again…FANTASTIC JOB, i really do like a careless Alice and angry Dana

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