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The Island – Chapter 7
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Alice’s statement sobered Harrison up quickly. “That seems like a very bad idea, Alice. I don’t want to leave you alone with her. Based on her psychological testing, I don’t think she will try anything, but, you can never be too sure.” Harrison said with alarm. He had assumed Alice would not want to pursue Dana and they would all just leave.
“Trust me, Harrison. She won’t hurt me. But I would be lying if I didn’t say I wasn’t interested and want to know a bit more.”
Harrison knew he would not win this argument. He could tell when Alice had her mind set. However, he was going to have several beefy guards nearby.
“OK. Use your panic button, if needed and I’ll have guards nearby.”
Alice rolled her eyes. “Thanks, Harrison.” She said as he handed over the key. “I know it will be fine.”
They moved back into the entry room. Alice caught some angry looks directed at Dana from the guards. She leaned over and whispered to Harrison. “Make sure there is no retribution for this and that this story doesn’t spread beyond those who know it now. Understood?” Alice said this with a thread of steel in her voice. For all her youth and small stature, Alice could present a formidable presence. Yet another trait she got from her grandfather.
“Yes, boss.” Harrison indicated that the guards should follow him and left Alice and Dana alone.
Alice squatted down to bring her head on level with Dana’s. She then reached down carefully and gently cupped Dana’s chin. Dana gave a slight shudder at the close proximity and contact. She lifted Dana’s head until their eyes met.
“I’m going to let you loose now. Please behave, OK? I really don’t want the goon squad back in here.” Dana didn’t trust her voice and just gave a quick nod of her head.
Alice moved behind Dana and unlocked the wrist and legs restraints. She backed up quickly as Dana sprang to her feet. She relaxed a little as Dana stretched and tried to work out the stiffness. Dana then stopped and stood at attention.
“Please, Dana, relax. This isn’t a parade.” Dana blushed down to her roots and moved to the at-ease stance.
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Big Grin Chapter :D. This was so good, humor, cuteness had it all lol. U definately made up for ur cliffhanger ending :). Love how honest Dana was with Alice, must have been hard. And u captured the good kind of akwardness that they wud have had at the end and both being left with thoughts of nothing but the other :).Cant wait for ur next post to see what happens next. Love it as usual x
awesome chap MaGoose..love how you bring out Dana’s inherent goofiness, her parting shot was too funny…hmm eclairs, haven’t had one of those in must be twenty yrs, now I am hungry….
awww, I’m sorry my geek-speak confused you before! And yeah, I totally love this. I think I rely a little too much on canon a lot of the time, so this is interesting to me. It’s very well-crafted and I like the dynamic you’re setting up between Danish. This one was fun, I like how Dana is so cute and direct about things. Putting the bigger éclair on Al’s plate is aww-worthy. And use of the term inside-meltworthy is win, lol.
Oh goody! I went to sleep early and i decided to sleep in a bit this morning because its friday and i regret it! I missed out on being first, LoL! Wow, Dana is very intimidating, especially to make Alice cautious of her..she must be a beast! Hopefully Alice will let Dana kick the crap out of Gabby, that would be good, or even throwing her in the snake pit for hours until she breaks! I’m so happy that things worked out the way they did and we got a sneak peek at some of the Danish sparks that i’m hoping are soon to come. Awesome job MaGoose, serious. Thank you so much for another interesting and excellent chapter!
HDD HDD!!!! WoooHooo MG u out did urself on this one!! I loved the way Alice made Dana relax and enjoy herself,made me smile! Darn it MG u make me want to HDD all day now LOL. Thanks for the excellent chapter and can not wait for ur next!! PPS
I love this Danish already. I’d babble but I’ve embarrassed myself a little too much from past comments so I’ll leave it at that. Oh and the last part is so cute. *wub*
Love you and your genius BABE. This story is greatly amazing. I love it.
My goodness. You know what? The Island is the story that I look forward to… Man, you light my imagination!! And tell ya what, there ain’t nothing wrong with posting fast!! :) I’m glad that you outlined the story and quick to post. Makes me muy happy. Hee… I actually laughed when Alice was jumpy when she let Dana free. Hahaha how funny is that. And that A thought Dana even sits attention! lol priceless. This is just too good. I’m glad we know why Dana didn’t want to come up to Alice… I would’ve been hurt if Dane rejected me. *tears* lol But what a cute reason for being afraid. Guess Alice knows by now Dana’s goofiness. DANISH ROCKS MY BOAT. And you are the captain of it. ;) Thanks for wonderful story. Keep the great work up!!
MaGoose, I was about shut down for the night and here you are. You had me smiling all the way through. “This isn’t a parade”. hahaha. staring at A’s ass, returning salutes, figuring out the knobs in the shower and so on. Aside from the humor, the drama is equally captivating. Alice offering D a shower was a great move. Love D’s directness and honesty which really paid off tonight. I do have to hand it to D that she said out loud that she “wouldn’t be good enough.” The ending was perfect. So well crafted, MaGoose, salute to you again. Never in my wildest imagination, you could come up with this turn of happy event. Fantastic. Can’t wait till your next post. May I have an eclair too? Thank you and good night.
I’m really getting into this, love it and love all your writing… but deep dowm I know that what I love most of all are kiss/hug/shake hands dances!!!!
Hello Goose… OK… I won’t retire… hmmmm… but you sure are making it hard… I’m envious really I am… the shade of red is the envy I have for your story… hehe… love it so much… hmmmmm… can I have a chocolate éclairs as well they sound nummers… hmmmmm… I really like how honest and straight forward these two are with one another… well yeah after that first bit of Awkwardness… this so freaking rocks… love it and love it more… Super(star)… JC