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The Island – Chapter 7
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Alice gave a little laugh and said “Much better” under her breath. She moved back around to stand in front of Dana.
“Follow me, please.” Alice said in a tone that brooked no argument. She then turned around and walked into the bedroom, knowing that Dana would follow behind. Dana paused momentarily at the door and then entered the spacious bedroom. The bed itself was enormous — much larger than king-size. The room was so large, though, that the dimensions of the bed seemed normal. Dana had to stop herself from gawking and proceeded to follow Alice into the adjoining bathroom.
The bathroom itself was bigger than Dana’s living room in the house she grew up in. It still managed to be very cozy with relaxing blue accents and fresh flowers in vases scattered around the room. Dana stopped when Alice stopped and stood at attention once again. Alice was bent over and rummaging in a drawer. Even in her stressed-out mindset, Dana had to appreciate the beautiful ass her new employer had.
Alice stood up and Dana forced her eyes back straight ahead. She heard Alice sigh loudly as she moved in front of her again.
“Listen, Dana, I work very hard and I know you do, too. I like to relax at the end of the day. That is a bit hard to do when I have to worry about returning salutes.” Alice gave a soft smile to make the rebuke gentler. “Please. Relax.” And Alice reached out to briefly stroke Dana’s arm and both girls once again felt that jolt of electricity.
Alice gave a shaky breath and composed herself.
Dana felt herself start to lower her guard a bit. Alice noticed and gave a grin. “I have a couple work things to finish before dinner and you, my friend, need a shower.” Dana blushed but returned Alice’s smile.
“That would be nice. Thank you, Miss.”
Alice’s smile lit the room. It seemed they were making some progress. She didn’t have any pressing work to do, but, wanted Dana to be as comfortable as possible for their “date” and she thought a nice shower would help the other woman to calm down a bit.
“I’ll leave you to it, then. All the soaps and things are in the shower there and I put some fresh clothes and towels on the bench. They are hairdryers and brushes and stuff over there.” Alice slipped her hands into her back pockets in a nervous gesture she thought she outgrew.
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Big Grin Chapter :D. This was so good, humor, cuteness had it all lol. U definately made up for ur cliffhanger ending :). Love how honest Dana was with Alice, must have been hard. And u captured the good kind of akwardness that they wud have had at the end and both being left with thoughts of nothing but the other :).Cant wait for ur next post to see what happens next. Love it as usual x
awesome chap MaGoose..love how you bring out Dana’s inherent goofiness, her parting shot was too funny…hmm eclairs, haven’t had one of those in must be twenty yrs, now I am hungry….
awww, I’m sorry my geek-speak confused you before! And yeah, I totally love this. I think I rely a little too much on canon a lot of the time, so this is interesting to me. It’s very well-crafted and I like the dynamic you’re setting up between Danish. This one was fun, I like how Dana is so cute and direct about things. Putting the bigger éclair on Al’s plate is aww-worthy. And use of the term inside-meltworthy is win, lol.
Oh goody! I went to sleep early and i decided to sleep in a bit this morning because its friday and i regret it! I missed out on being first, LoL! Wow, Dana is very intimidating, especially to make Alice cautious of her..she must be a beast! Hopefully Alice will let Dana kick the crap out of Gabby, that would be good, or even throwing her in the snake pit for hours until she breaks! I’m so happy that things worked out the way they did and we got a sneak peek at some of the Danish sparks that i’m hoping are soon to come. Awesome job MaGoose, serious. Thank you so much for another interesting and excellent chapter!
HDD HDD!!!! WoooHooo MG u out did urself on this one!! I loved the way Alice made Dana relax and enjoy herself,made me smile! Darn it MG u make me want to HDD all day now LOL. Thanks for the excellent chapter and can not wait for ur next!! PPS
I love this Danish already. I’d babble but I’ve embarrassed myself a little too much from past comments so I’ll leave it at that. Oh and the last part is so cute. *wub*
Love you and your genius BABE. This story is greatly amazing. I love it.
My goodness. You know what? The Island is the story that I look forward to… Man, you light my imagination!! And tell ya what, there ain’t nothing wrong with posting fast!! :) I’m glad that you outlined the story and quick to post. Makes me muy happy. Hee… I actually laughed when Alice was jumpy when she let Dana free. Hahaha how funny is that. And that A thought Dana even sits attention! lol priceless. This is just too good. I’m glad we know why Dana didn’t want to come up to Alice… I would’ve been hurt if Dane rejected me. *tears* lol But what a cute reason for being afraid. Guess Alice knows by now Dana’s goofiness. DANISH ROCKS MY BOAT. And you are the captain of it. ;) Thanks for wonderful story. Keep the great work up!!
MaGoose, I was about shut down for the night and here you are. You had me smiling all the way through. “This isn’t a parade”. hahaha. staring at A’s ass, returning salutes, figuring out the knobs in the shower and so on. Aside from the humor, the drama is equally captivating. Alice offering D a shower was a great move. Love D’s directness and honesty which really paid off tonight. I do have to hand it to D that she said out loud that she “wouldn’t be good enough.” The ending was perfect. So well crafted, MaGoose, salute to you again. Never in my wildest imagination, you could come up with this turn of happy event. Fantastic. Can’t wait till your next post. May I have an eclair too? Thank you and good night.
I’m really getting into this, love it and love all your writing… but deep dowm I know that what I love most of all are kiss/hug/shake hands dances!!!!
Hello Goose… OK… I won’t retire… hmmmm… but you sure are making it hard… I’m envious really I am… the shade of red is the envy I have for your story… hehe… love it so much… hmmmmm… can I have a chocolate éclairs as well they sound nummers… hmmmmm… I really like how honest and straight forward these two are with one another… well yeah after that first bit of Awkwardness… this so freaking rocks… love it and love it more… Super(star)… JC