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The Performance of a Lifetime – Chapter 5
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The butler opened the door to their room and Tina and Bette walked inside. Tina looked at the bed and saw that it was indeed a beautiful canopy bed, the wood gleaming, obviously well tended for. She noticed that it was narrower than she was used to. Two people could sleep side by side without touching but they’d have to keep pretty still. She noticed the door to the room had no lock. She turned and saw Bette staring at the door too a small blush tingeing her face.
“I won’t be able to sleep on the floor.”
Tina nodded nervously.
“No lock on the door.”
They were looking everywhere but at each other. Alone in that bedroom, next to the bed they were going to be sharing that night the silence between them was filled with electricity.
“Oh look. There’s a lock in the closet. Let’s go fucking sleep in the closet.” Bette said suddenly pointing at the lock on the thin wooden door.
“It was hard enough coming out the first time. I refuse to be shoved back in the closet.” Tina joked making Bette chuckle.
Their eyes met and the incongruity of their situation hit them at the same time. They began by smiling and soon they were both sitting on the bed, side by side laughing out loud. They laughed until the tension had dissipated between them.
“I don’t even know what was so funny.” Tina said after they had calmed down.
“Us, I think.” Bette replied with one last chuckle.
“Yeah.” Tina agreed softly while staring into Bette’s eyes. After a moment she turned her head away and got up from the bed. “I’m going to put that lock to good use and unpack.”
Bette blinked. “That is a good idea.” She said a little throatily and she got up following in the blonde’s steps.
They worked together in silence managing to keep out of each other’s way as they slowly but surely filled the closet up.
A knock sounded and then a second later the door opened and Alice entered the room.
“I don’t even know why you bother knocking Alice.” Bette said regarding her friend with annoyance.
“Did I interrupt something? Already?” Alice started singing cheerfully. “The love mansion…” to the Love boat theme song.
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There isn’t an instant where Jodi doesn’t make me horribly angry. PPS !!
Ahhhhh! I hate Jodi! beautiful writing as usual, sabina. The font is fine. It’s the craving for this amazing story that leaves me unsatisfied. PPS!
Even though I don’t believe for a second that Bette loved Jodi, this story is great. I just hope Tina kicks Jodi’s a*s. Great story.
OH, I feel the heat between B&T. I wish Bette would have said Tina’s name instead of Jodi’s. This is an amazing story.
Oh, I so love Tina. Walking up to Bette and laying one on her after visually dueling with Jodi on the other side of the pool. Love that alpha act! The sleeping arrangements are going to be interesting – particularly after that HOT kiss! Woo! PPS! Absolutely loving the story Sabina! Font definitely works.
bette should get over jodi already…jodi is a fool if she let bette go, and tina should come up with more of those little devilish plans
What a treat with two very pleasurable chapters! I just love Tina. The way you’re writing their cute, flirty relationship is so adorable. I get the feeling this will be four very long days for Jodi. Look forward to your next post.
I hate Jodi! I hate Bette’s lingering feelings for Jodi! That biatch ruins everything. Alice’s interest in other people’s relationships is such a realistic plot point. Definitely still digging this story.
I wish the whole story was done coz I am sitting here wanting to read on ….please help me get rid of my craving:-)
Jodi dear you gave Bette up to marry someone else…get over it! and I don’t think Alice is going to have to play maychmaker it’s already in the works by itself:) Love this story. PPS
Was there a reason Bette mentioned Jodi’s name??? Please post soon. This is intriguing.
WTF!!!! Bette you had your lips on Tina’s and her tounge in your mouth, and you think of Fucking Jodi!!! Alice you so need to whoop Bette upside the head!!! PPS!!! PPS!!!! PPS!!!!
The vindictive cow in me wants Tina to rub it in Jodi’s face but good. Like, obnoxious snogging and feeling up just shy of indecency, if Tina can get away with it, and Bette can forget about the blue-eyed, unjustly jealous, 4-day wedding participating monster that broke her in the first place. There. I’m all venomed out. For now. Naturally, what I really hope, is that Bette falls so completely for Tina that by the time those hasty vows are exchanged, Bette’s only thoughts will be that she had a narrow escape. Anyway, thanks, and post soon, sabina!
So glad to see another post from you so soon. I’m loving it all and especially loving Tina in this. Looking forward to more.
This is getting soooo good! Alice is funny. The font is perfect for these 40 something eyes. Thanks!
I did not realize that I had fallen so far behind. You are writing faster than I can read. Jodi is not a very nice person. She is the one that walked away now she is mad. Tina is a smooth worker, but that kiss just changed Bette and Tina’s relationship.
please post soon. can’t get enough of this story.
This is such a great story so far. It is a freshtake on a B&T meeting. I just love Alice.Her plots and schemes are just too funny. PPS
ARGH i hate jodie so much!!!this story is fantastic. alice is so funny her shane are too much,lol…. tina is playing the part perfectly wonder how long before the two admit they have a connection….:)
poor Bette doesn’t have a chance does she? I think she is under ms Kennard’s spell already. how is it that jodi is acting jealous at her own wedding party? Ass.
fuck jodie… tina should of said… bey babe fuck lunch… lets go back to the room… yeah… PPS
First, the font is fine, love it that way. Secondly, would somebody just slap the HELL out of Jodi for me. Never liked the woman and certainly never with Bette, under any circumstances. So happy she is jealous. If memory serves, she is getting married, so what is she jealous for, she left Bette. Goody gumdrops for her leaving. Now Bette has the lovely Tina and will have her as well, hopefully tonight, at least before they leave the festivities. Yea!! Love this story. PPS
wow; so y is jodi marrying janet then? as if i care!!! go tina, u ROCK! PPS I HAVE TO HAVE THE NEXT INSTALMENT NOW.
Jodi first might think a 4-day wedding would be a torture to Bette…but now the table seems to be turned:) Love this Tina in your story, PPS. Thanks.
LOL@superdaddy’s comment! Hopefully more of Tina and Tina’s kisses will erase Jodi from Bette’s mind and heart. Sabina, I’m really liking how your developing this. The wacky hijinx are so much fun! As are the kissing, and the sweetness, and the tension. Jodi’s jealousy is interesting. Can’t wait to see what happens next!
Tough luck Jodi, you had your chance and blew it! Yep, Tina’s in the house now…I think that she’ll be able to make our gorgeous brunette forget those clear blue eyes. She won’t just think she sees forever in Tina’s eyes, she’ll know she sees it!
This is still so much fun! Glad Tina is now seeing the sport in it all. Can’t wait to see where you go next.
ok, i’m 1492 to view this….i may not be columbus, but this story is one of the best recent discoveries on this site…this chapter sailed in b4 i had the chance to read & comment on ch4, so to go back to last ch, loved the interaction during the drive & as for T’s worries about packing pjs,i’m sure B can lend her some & maybe this could be the 1st appearance of the famous blue striped pjs…or they could both go w/out and due to the smaller size of the bed, their body heat can be one of the things to help keep them warm ;) now this ch, i love reading this story, but am always a little sad when i come to the end of the ch :( …i concur about Jodi & no rights to jealousy…hope T won’t freak out w/ B saying her name after their kiss….i also agree that while B may still hurt over being dumped, etc. i think this 4 day wedding will prove to enlighten her that she wasn’t “in” love w/ Jodi, but that she is now falling in love w/ T! Thx & PPS
Nice story, can’t wait to read more ;-) !!
Jodi sucks and so does her mama. This story, however, does not suck at all. It’s delicious! Thanks!
What the heck Bette, you just kissed Tina and you say that womans name? :)You have gotta post sooner than intended coz I seriously can’t wait for another chap Sabina.
You are a combination of fun and intelligence, your writings are funny and attractive all at the same time. wow, I loved that part when they kissed I think my face flushed reading what was going on between them. You are great Saby, post soon dear and make the chapter longer.Have a great week
You know that smile on my face? Still there… :) and like all the rest…you really must post soon…because i can´t wait either….
OMG…I love this story – can’t wipe the grin/smirk off of my face. I love the slow build of the heat between these two – love the story – love your writing…..can’t wait for the next chapter.
Bette, what the hell! Concentrate on Tina. Jodi is so jealous. Love how the story is unfolding. Thanks
I can’t wait for Bette and Tina to share the bed, pps. I love the font size, I can actually read it without wearing my reading glasses! :-)
I’m with superdaddy. How the hell could Bette notice Jodi after she’s been kissed by Tina? O.o
i just LOVE tina and her little devilish plans!!.. LOL.. can’t wait for your next post. love your story, please don’t take long to post again..
darn.. This is so good. I can’t believe I missed it. Please please post soon. Thanks
Tough luck Jodi you don’t get to have your cake and eat it to, you broke Bette’s heart and now hopefully Bette will let Tina have the time to fix it. And I hope that Tina will hang around and let Bette get her heart and head back in the right place. MARVELOUS chapter!