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The Island – Chapter 12
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The next time Dana woke up it was some time in the morning. It took a minute or two to realize she was not in the barracks and to recall the beating. She quickly recognized that she was in Alice’s bedroom and that the other woman was not there. The bedroom was dim, but, Dana could see sunlight streaming through the window in the adjacent room. She guessed it was late morning. She wasn’t sure how she came to end up in Alice’s bed, but, she did know it was not where she belonged.
She moved slightly and felt the pain. Her whole body felt bruised. She saw the cast on her left arm and the felt the soreness in her ribcage. Must be broken ribs. There were several other bruises, but, nothing that looked serious. Dana shifted again and let her body adjust to the aches. She tried to sit up, but, the pain in her ribs was a bit too much. She thought if she could stand that she would be able to walk OK. She just needed to figure out a way to get out of the bed.
Dana also realized that she had not showered since that massive workout and that she stank. That gave her the final motivation to get out of the bed and start her day. That meant getting out of this amazingly comfortable bed and getting back to the barracks. She gathered her strength and started to roll off the bed, but stopped immediately when she heard Alice’s voice.
“You stop right there, missy!” Alice said firmly as she strode into the bedroom. Dana looked over sheepishly. “Lay back down.” Alice’s tone held no room for argument.
Dana started to roll back over and realized she was stuck. No matter which way she moved she experienced pain. Alice saw the look on Dana’s face and rushed over to help. “Come on, baby, let me help you.” Dana felt her face get hot at the endearment and Alice’s closeness. She was able to settle back into the bed with the assistance of the other woman with little pain.
Alice sat next to Dana on the bed and gently moved a stray lock of hair behind the other woman’s ear. “How are you feeling?” Dana felt a lump in her throat form at the compassion Alice was showing. It had been a long time since anyone cared for her like this.
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awesome chapter!!!!!!health inspector be damned, I’ll just roll em in breading and claim they are giant fish sticks…ooh you can ship them off to the desert and they can guard the dunes :D
“New story where Gabby isn’t quite so despicable”, sounds good but please take your time on this one coz I love it. MaGoose, you have become a fantastic Danish story teller. I truly appreciate your dedication. Here is what I think, you can hold a drawing for 4 lucky readers to join A & D in their bed for a picnic with all your delicious desserts. lol. I love this very attentive A taking care of D. There was great interaction between them. LMAO with D wolfing down her food. The web cam and saving it to her video ipod were quite clever. I am with NKL sending Gabby and Nadia to Siberia. I sure hope that A would not have second thoughts in the future. And Harrison, he was terrific with his job and love him even more for thinking ahead for A & D. Looking forward to more updates. Thank again MaGoose.
Hello MG… see as you are always there with the wow wow wow… I am always steering the rear… haha… thats funny… I can see that smile… ok… this story freaking rocks… absolutely amazing… you have so many tiny details put into each and every scene that just makes it more of an experience… your grasp of the surroundings and the characters are inspiring… when the time comes I’m calling you for Danish Advice… yep… expect that call hehe… ok when are you going to be the reason behind a poll come on you have to have something… keep on rocking my friend… JC
This Story is one of the best out there in the moment and one of the few where waiting for an update is hard…The story so very well written and MaGoose if it’s wine you need to keep writing I stand bye my word you can get every bottle I have in the house…
awwww, so sweet. I’m glad Alice convinced Dana to stay. I just hope there are no further attacks from co-workers. I can see some jealousy over Dana being Alice’s “personal assistant.” I also find it interesting that Dana wants to dole out some payback. Also, where’s Shane? I heart her, please bring her back. And I suppose I can wait on the Dana clone. Can’t have you over-exerting yourself or anything. Damn, I’m overly perverted tonight, sorry. I
magoose – love this story. i was missing it in your absense but the 8 pages makes up for it. i wish i was in the big bed with alice and dana :) post soon.
I’m so happy you’ve updated. You totally made my day :) And 8 pages… :D My smile got wider by the second. Just like in “Closure” I love Nurse!Alice hihi… Though I wouldn’t want to get all beat up for it. I’ll just paint bruises on or something. Or just complain about a very bad headache (and rub my tummy :P) Anyway I hope they send Gabby and Nadia to Syberia or something, just somewhere nice and cold *devilish smile*. I also like the easy banter they’ve got going on already. Hehehe “just save it to my video Ipod for a lonely night” cracked me up. MaGoose you rock and as always it was great… I’m seriously addicted to this story.
WOOOHOOO u posted YEAH! I really enjoy reading this story. I am soooooo glad Dana is staying in Alice room! I really love that Alice finally admit she is In -Love with Dana!!! Im going to have a great day now and Im going to be HDD while I work. THANKS MG!!!! PPS
I love this story and I can’t wait to see what will happen next but I feel that we will still see a bit more of gabby so pps so I can see if I am right or night great update
I’m HERE! I’m HERE! Whoosh, almost missed the Danish boat to the island. So is there any chance of getting a live feed from that bedside camera? LoL the playful flirting is really distracting me from my thoughts…’hypothetically..it could fit 6 people.’ HAHAHA can i be one of those? Great job Goose, im really feeling the determination and understanding that they have for themselves and with each other. Note: Gabby betttttter get some type of a ‘formal’ payback from Alice and Dana or something, i mean c’mon?! Excellent update. SOOO excited for the next post, thank you so much!
LMAO at Akshunjack. Camera’s huh? OoOo you naughty woman you. Ma, love that Alice is willing to care for Dana, and do what she can. No doubt, those feelings will continue to grow more and more. When I read Danish fics that really create that love between them, I feel sad we have all been denied that chance to see it on the show. However, thanks to the Danish writer’s on the site, they will always be together. Post soon, and thanks for a great update! Eight pages to boot! :-)
Oh Yeah I am caught up again…Amazing as usual I must say. As for the bed ale to fit 6 people? I would cut it down so it could only fit 2. Or maybe one when Dana is feeling better…No problems being a minimalist. Nice job
Hey I have hand to hand combat experience maybe Alice will take me in Gabby’s place. Then me her and Dana can have a picnic with SHANEY. sorry. Off in my own little world again. Goose love the update as usual. I hope to see more soon. YOU ARE MY BUDDY PAL FRIEND
Hey. haven’t been well enough to comment but I’m following. It is amazing to have these new writers and have some old ones back, me’s just a little shy with the comments these days but ’nuff ’bout mweeh.lol. I love the drama MaGoose. You write the stories very well. Beginnings, specially not the one we see on the show and made in a different situation, jobs, time, etc, but wit the characters having the same characteristics are really really interesting, and to have it to work is even more awesome. I love how protective Alice is to Dana coz usually in stories, Dana is the protector, in this it’s like, they really are partners, equals and stuff. Thanks a bunch-ah-hugs for posting. much xx’s