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    An Unexpected Turn Chapter 1

    Story written on May 4, 2008 by Danalicious².
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    Danish or not Danish: That is the big question here

    It was another sunny day in L.A. Like in most big cities people were walking through the streets, shopping or just sitting in a café to get some coffee and talking with their friends. But this didn’t include Alice. After the break-up with Dana four months ago, she isolated herself from her friends. And even in that long time, she couldn’t get over the fact that her ex best friend left her like all the other women before and went back to Lara, her ex. Not that Alice didn’t see it coming. All the signs were visible. First, there were these little dates Dana called “dinner”, encounters which were drawing suspicion in Alice’s mind. Dana’s whole attitude changed. She seemed to have more self esteem, her face lit up when Lara was around and her whole body language conveyed to Alice that Dana was slowly slipping away from her. This revelation took place just two weeks later. Although Alice knew what was awaiting her when Dana entered her apartment, she couldn’t stop the tears running down her cheeks. She begged Dana to stay with her. But that didn’t make any difference. It was over. When Alice told her that she wasn’t sure she could live without her, Dana replied back, “You can.” Alice really hoped that this was at least true. But nothing appeared to be the same. The colors around her faded. Everything seemed to be blurry and distant. And the most difficult thing for her was avoiding her friends. She wasn’t in the mood to talk about the break-up. Who would want to be in her position? No one! Not even Alice, who loved gossip about those around her. She didn’t want to be the main topic of discussion. It took her a day to finally decide that going away for two weeks was a good idea. Her mom, Lenore, had a little cabin around 60 miles away from L.A. Why not take the opportunity when it was a perfect location to get away from the issues that awaited her here? The only obstacle was her boss Ruth at the radio station where Alice worked. She hoped she could convince Ruth to give her some time off and find a bit of her old self again. It was impossible to think clearly when she couldn’t get away from everyone and everything that reminded her of Dana. No, she had to get away as fast as she could. Ruth gave her two weeks off, but not without asking her out why it had to be now. Alice hated lying but in this case it was allowed. She told Ruth that a family member of hers, which she was very close to, became very ill and that she had to be there for support. Even if Ruth was an evil witch on occasion, she managed to show some compassion and let Alice go. She stormed off to her apartment to pack some belongings so she could be on the road as fast as possible. The days went by like minutes and before she knew it… it was time to leave again. She wasn’t anxious about seeing Dana again. She feared it the most, but that’s how life sometimes was, so fucking sad and unfair.

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    1. New Danish writer!! Yay!!! And welcome!! I do hope, though, that you don’t take us on quite the emotional roller coaster that brteyes is. This is a most excellent start!! Poor Alice. I like her getting away to the cabin. That was a great touch for her to get re-center in some way. I also like that she apparently skipped the drug phase in here. I have to wonder who was knocking on the door… One of the framily? I understand what Alice was thinking with Ruth, but, I feel so badly for her that she gave up the job she loved. “Stronger and selfish” — so un-Alice but, again, I understand perfectly where her head is at. Thank you so much for the new story! I look forward to taking this journey with you!!

    3. Well I’ll be damned. Look at Alice go!!!! YES girl, never compromise yourself for any person or any thing. Loved watching as she stood her ground and chose principle over everything else. It’s a pleasure to see a new Danish writer, welcome to the site, and hope to see many more posts from you. There’s a great group of writer’s and readers here willing to lend support.

    4. HAHAHAHAHA! “So sue me b*tch!’ Great line for a new Danish writer, WELCOME! Woot! Coming home to a fresh piece of Danish really helped my day. Great start. Always put yourself first–glad Alice is thinking this way. I wouldnt let some snobby lil you know what push me around either. Thanks for the new story. Cannot wait to see what road you take us down.

    5. I am touched each time a new Danish writer enters the arena. Danalicious2, I have noticed your past and present support with your comments and am really thrilled that you decide to give a shot at writing. Lucky you that you have brteyes’ support. I feel the same as you said in your shout out regarding Dana’s death. Two years later, there is still plenty of Danish support. It is simply amazing. I am with MaGoose on your first post. I felt very bad what A went through during the 1st part of S3. If A needed to be “stronger and selfish”, we would welcome that. Please take your time in telling your story and I will be here to give you my 2 cents worth. Thank you very much.

    6. I love the start of this story I hope that alice becomes a stronger person but I just hope that she does not become too selfish I think that it will take some time but she will get over dana

    8. I’ve been glowing since you posted this first chapter. I am so honored that you dedicated this chapter to me. This is a wonderful start to the story and now other’s will get to read your talent. There is no doubt in my mind that you will draw others in like you have me. You have so many that are encouraging you already and they’ll get to experience your brilliant imagination. Now for the chapter… I was wondering just like MaGoose who was knocking at the door. I love how Alice stood up to her boss, Ruth… makes me think of a certain person at work that makes me mad just to see her, lol. I hope Alice finds a better job and comes out on top. I already have a clue with what you’re going to do with this story. If anyone else reads this, just be warned that Danalicious has a bit of a twisted mind herself, lol. I guess I wasn’t supposed to say this, huh… oh well, I know you love me anyway, lol. Congrats on your very first chapter and story. I’m looking forward to sharing this ride with you. This is the first of many. Thanks for letting me be a part of what I know will be a Danish favorite. Just remember that I will always be your biggest fan.

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