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An Unexpected Turn Chapter 1
Entering her apartment brought everything back she tried to escape from. There wasn’t a single thing that didn’t remind her of Dana. How could she get through all of it? She had to be strong and she knew it would be one hell of an undertaking. Jumping on the bed and taking off her shoes, she fell asleep the second she closed her eyes.
A knock on the door woke her up. First, she couldn’t make out where she actually was. But as the knocks got louder, she found herself lying in her bed, still in the clothes she had on the day before. Staying in bed seemed comfortable. She decided to remain silent and tried to sleep. The knocks stopped shortly after. This was her last day off and no one was going to disturb her, not even one of her friends. Dana was the only one that had a key to her apartment and Alice could bet it wasn’t the athlete banging at the door. But it wasn’t important right now. She could deal with it tomorrow. She hoped she could get through this day without any breakdowns. Not that she already had one. Still, it could happen.
This was the first night she managed to sleep the night through until her alarm-clock went off, forcing the blonde to get ready for work at the radio station. She got into the shower, enjoying the hot water flowing down her body. After that, she walked to her dresser, took out a pair of jeans, a white blouse and got dressed. Taking her keys and her purse, she exited her apartment to get into her blue mini and drive to the KCRW station. She fought the urge to get some coffee in the Planet and decided against it when she spotted some of their friends sitting already outside at a table. She hoped they didn’t recognize her driving by. Arriving at the parking lot in front of the station building, she took a deep breath and got out of the car. A few people were running along the corridors, greeting Alice when they spotted her. Alice did her best to act as cool as she could. She had to keep up her façade in front of those around her. Being alone was a luxury in this business, especially when you had a boss like Ruth. Right after Alice entered her office, Ruth stormed in.
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(41 votes, average: 4.44 out of 5)
New Danish writer!! Yay!!! And welcome!! I do hope, though, that you don’t take us on quite the emotional roller coaster that brteyes is. This is a most excellent start!! Poor Alice. I like her getting away to the cabin. That was a great touch for her to get re-center in some way. I also like that she apparently skipped the drug phase in here. I have to wonder who was knocking on the door… One of the framily? I understand what Alice was thinking with Ruth, but, I feel so badly for her that she gave up the job she loved. “Stronger and selfish” — so un-Alice but, again, I understand perfectly where her head is at. Thank you so much for the new story! I look forward to taking this journey with you!!
woot woot woot– You rock! Please keep this up! New Danish wrter~ yeah, man. Makes me smile~ I hope Alice finds herslef worthy…. :(
Well I’ll be damned. Look at Alice go!!!! YES girl, never compromise yourself for any person or any thing. Loved watching as she stood her ground and chose principle over everything else. It’s a pleasure to see a new Danish writer, welcome to the site, and hope to see many more posts from you. There’s a great group of writer’s and readers here willing to lend support.
HAHAHAHAHA! “So sue me b*tch!’ Great line for a new Danish writer, WELCOME! Woot! Coming home to a fresh piece of Danish really helped my day. Great start. Always put yourself first–glad Alice is thinking this way. I wouldnt let some snobby lil you know what push me around either. Thanks for the new story. Cannot wait to see what road you take us down.
I am touched each time a new Danish writer enters the arena. Danalicious2, I have noticed your past and present support with your comments and am really thrilled that you decide to give a shot at writing. Lucky you that you have brteyes’ support. I feel the same as you said in your shout out regarding Dana’s death. Two years later, there is still plenty of Danish support. It is simply amazing. I am with MaGoose on your first post. I felt very bad what A went through during the 1st part of S3. If A needed to be “stronger and selfish”, we would welcome that. Please take your time in telling your story and I will be here to give you my 2 cents worth. Thank you very much.
I love the start of this story I hope that alice becomes a stronger person but I just hope that she does not become too selfish I think that it will take some time but she will get over dana
Welcome and yes as the others said it’s always great to get another danish writer… The story is really good so far and I am looking forward to read more from you…
I’ve been glowing since you posted this first chapter. I am so honored that you dedicated this chapter to me. This is a wonderful start to the story and now other’s will get to read your talent. There is no doubt in my mind that you will draw others in like you have me. You have so many that are encouraging you already and they’ll get to experience your brilliant imagination. Now for the chapter… I was wondering just like MaGoose who was knocking at the door. I love how Alice stood up to her boss, Ruth… makes me think of a certain person at work that makes me mad just to see her, lol. I hope Alice finds a better job and comes out on top. I already have a clue with what you’re going to do with this story. If anyone else reads this, just be warned that Danalicious has a bit of a twisted mind herself, lol. I guess I wasn’t supposed to say this, huh… oh well, I know you love me anyway, lol. Congrats on your very first chapter and story. I’m looking forward to sharing this ride with you. This is the first of many. Thanks for letting me be a part of what I know will be a Danish favorite. Just remember that I will always be your biggest fan.
Welcome as a Danish writer. I love the story so far. Keep up the good work
That was a wonderful start so please don’t stop there, still want to see how Alice and Dana get’s back after this…