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To be with you
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To be with you
She stumbled in the direction of the sharp sound that had woken her, hit her toe against the cabinet that had been standing there for ages, and cursed at her own stupidity as she opened the door.
The harsh ‘What?!’ directed towards the person who had dared to ring her doorbell at this hour, died on the verge of Bette Porters lips as she made out the silhouette she would recognize above all others.
‘T…’
She merely whispered, as the woman turned around to face her…
‘The weather is awful’
The blonde shivered as she made her way passed her best friend, trying to sound casually as if she wasn’t barging in, in the middle of the night…
She had had no idea who to turn to as she had closed the door of the apartment in which she and Eric had spend 3 years of living together…
Well, closed…
Slammed more like…
But she thought herself allowed that little indiscretion under the circumstances in which she had found him… Or maybe she should say… Them…
Yet her feet had brought her to the only place that made sense, and as she had stood in front of the building, she knew she longed for nothing more than to see those deerlike eyes in compassion…
They had been best friends forever, since the moment Bette’s father had moved into the house next to theirs when they had been 9, and they could tell each other everything… In fact it had been Bette who had warned her that Eric might be cheating on her, a thought she had discarded with a wave of her hand as if scaring away an annoying bug.
She shook her head, as if she was a dog, the droplets of water that she had collected in her hair and on her skin swirling around as her brown-haired friend tried to wrap her sleepy mind around what was happening…
‘T?’
She repeated the one-syllable nickname she had given her friend so long ago, and her heart made the familiar air-loop as she saw the curve of the womans neck, the shape of her cheek, the color of her eyes, all combined together in the beauty that stood, dripping from the rain, in front of her…
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i agree with the others, this is great as a stand alone but would love to see more ;) really wonderful how you convey their emotions…would love to see what follows “love’s true kiss”….glad to see you back & can’t wait for another post on whatever you desire
waooooooo!*blusshing.. im so lucky, sooooooo lucky, thanks so much for give me the amazing oportunity and the wonderful honour to have you in my life…thanks for been the light when everything was dark…..you are my everything…..ik jou voor altijd van jou…EIFEUNA, i love u more than words can express….
Always late to the party…but you both know me well enough to know why! LOL! I can’t believe it was one year ago that I read that story you posted here for that amazing woman you have in your life. I remember it so well, and while I am sending my thoughts privately to that woman, I can’t help but comment on the amazing talent you have for writing my friend! Your heart shows, and in the hands of gogk, it’s safe. *HUGS*
Hey my young friend,Have missed your stories. Love after 20 yrs that Tina knows that someone loves her ,for each little flaw and her faults she loves Tina and always has. Such a beautiful love story. thanks and expect more from you.
Cute story is cute. :D Roll on, L5!
Absolutely, this story cries out for a sequel! Nicely done JustLoves!
Beautiful. So glad to see u back.
Woah, simply amazing!
WOW!!!! That was Amazing!!!! Hope there is more to this wonderful story!!!! Thank you
WOW! Such a charming and emotional story! We miss your writing! You should come back with more! PPS Lucero & Marsha (JC’s Salsa Aunties from Mexico City)
WOW, I hope that you will continue with this. It would be nice to see how they became the Bette and Tina that we love. Besides you do a wonderful job of bringing Bette and Tina together for the first time.
Wow! What a start – will you ever continue? I love your stories!
Gosh I could relate to Tina in this chapter.I am glad that Bette was able to honest with Tina.I hope to read about them as a couple.
That was a wonderfully heartfelt chapter! I hope there is more to come after this.
Bravo! I would gander a guess that that was language of the heart — such passion JLBT! Your true love is a lucky woman :)
BRAVO! Absolutely beautiful, romantic, and loving. Thanks so much for crafting such a tender story. Let’s see more from you eh? What a heartfelt message to the love of your life in your author notes. Way to go girl.
Hey JustLove, Wonderfully written and beautifully crafted. Just adored how Bette finally pulled TIna towards her, after so many years of gently pushing her away, and took the first step,. This is bound to be a great romance. Please continue it soon as I demand a sequel. Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
Breathtaking… wowow!! :)
I echo the others…please continue. You have created such vivid emotions between these two–would love to read where you take them next :). Thanks!
It’s so wonderful to see a post from you. You have always been one of my favorite authors and this story is a testament of why. I just love a story that can bring me to tears and you certainly did that with this one. I hope to see more frequent posts from you in the future. Best wishes to you and your lady! Love is a wonderful thing!
That was beautiful!!!!
my heart wrenched with each word… each sentence and it wrenched even more when… you have no idea how much it hits home *tears* Hey you, miss your writing so much, don’t disappear on us for so long again. Am really happy for you and gogk. Happy Birthday Gogk!!
BEAUTIFUL, JustloveB+T ! Love it ! Please please please keep writing this story as you said yourself it was just the beginning… Oh, and welcome back by the way ! It’s great to see a new from you. I really hope you stick around. Thank you for sharing this with us.
Seriously, you do realize we need more of this, right JLB+T ? You have to find a way to update this story. ( That said, I hope I don’t sound like I’m threatening you, huh ? I mean, I’m really grateful that you treated us with this wonderful chapter and this is great as it is, as a stand-alone, but you know how fans are… It’s just ever enough ! Wink ! ). Thanks again !
The circumstances sucked, but way to go Bette. I so know how hard it is to control and keep hidden how you really feel about someone, because its a friend, or they’re involved and you only want them to be happy. Looking forward too more.
As you guessed, I meant ” never enough ” of course…
That was awesome and beautiful, love it. Hope you will post more, thanks!
Beautiful! Amazing!
WOW – so powerfull……really great. Do continue
wow. It really is just the beginning, I would like to see a sequel, but I prefer to see the continuation of The Beginning Of A Friendship, Like A Fairytale and Reunions Reunite! PPS! =)