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Something so right – chapter 42
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SOMETHING SO RIGHT
Chapter 42
Bette pushed the girl away in a split second – she rubbed her mouth trying to take the taste and feel of someone else’s lips away from her own.
“You are just gorgeous “ the girl said
“And she is spoken for “
Bette looked in horror at Tina who was standing a few feet away and looking mighty cross.
“Tina “
“You know that she arrived with her girlfriend and you still pulled that stunt “
The waitress looked rightly embarrassed
“I “
“Save it – just fuck off out of my sight “
Tina stood with her arms folded looking angry at the young girl who hurried passed her and disappeared into the restaurant. Bette felt a sense of shame burning through her body – she had done what she had vowed she would not. All she could see was that she has betrayed every promise that she had made to the woman she loved so much.
“I am so sorry – I don’t know what happened “
Bette started crying – the alcohol heightening her sense of fear that she was about to be dumped by the woman she loved so totally and utterly. It was terrifying how quickly you could lose the thing that you most valued in the whole world – and Bette was feeling physically sick that she had lost Tina.
“Bette “
Bette didn’t hear the gentleness in Tina’s voice – she was so absorbed with how she had fucked up. The others had been so right – she wasn’t capable of being loyal to only one woman
“I will pay for the party – I am sorry Tina “
Bette started searching through her jeans for money -she pulled out some notes and coins but she was drunk and the money scattered. She looked at it not knowing what to do. Tina shook her head and bent down to start picking the money up to help Bette who looked so devastated. When Tina stood up and turned round expecting to see Bette the brunette was missing
“Oh Bette – what the hell am I going to do with you ?”
Tina went back into the restaurant and looked around – Alice saw her and came across
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Yeah, Bette acted like a complete idiot. I hope she gets the confidence to stand up for their relationship better.. but maybe it will come with settling in together more. Love this couple.
That’s not the alpha Bette we know. Come on Bette, you would have normally told that waitress yourself to take a walk. And no drinking and driving. Thankfully she has Tina, cos she’s the only one who’s ever been able to calm and balance Porter.
Great post! Thank goodness Bette didn’t get hurt in her stupidity. Glad that Tina could find her. Love this story!
I love Tina like that! It’s a really great story! Thanks.
YESSS!!! Minor crisis averted. Thank God Bette didn’t get into an accident. This is a very sweet chapter just the same. Happy birthday indeed, Bette! And I wish them many more lovely adventures/milestones together as live-in lovers. Thanks for the daily posts, ally! :)
Awesome as usual ally. so where is our alpha bette?:)PPS
don’t these women have cellphones? Bette’s is usually attached to her arm. Never mind. Very dramatic and scary; Bette has to be watched obviously because her fears take her over. Plz continue the birthday with a nice hangover and some loving.
What’s the spotlight and where? I’m so glad Tina could see what was happening – and Bette so self-destructive – driving when shitfaced. Thank the goddess your drama queen self didn’t take us down a more negative road. You know how to keep us edge and not push off over it.
Very nice recovery ally,
I hope Tina did them both a favor and opened Bette’s window-just in case. The fresh air won’t hurt her anyway, but if she should wake up feeling a bit queasy, let’s hope she has the presence of mind (tough when you’re reeling drunk) to puke out the window and not DOWN it. Hard to clean, smells bad. For a long time. But I really don’t like Bette being so cravenly insecure.
I doubt Bette will even remember most of this in the morning, but when she sobers up T needs to kick her ass for driving drunk. Ally I loved the birthday present idea – that was great! I’m addicted to you Ally…it feels so wonderful to be able to read your stories again after going for three weeks + without them. You are amazing! Thanks so much!
wow, its sad to see bette so unsure of herself. i mean, a little confidence would help. maybe when she sees tinas love and knows it to be true. thx
Thank goodness nothing happened to Bette while she was driving. That was a nailbiter. Poor Tina – probably worried the woman sick. Maybe Bette could show Tina her appreciation once she sobers up.
Wow, this is one insecure Bette Porter. She needs to be comfortable enough with Tina that every little thing that happens doesn’t make her feel like she’s going to lose her. At some point Tina will get sick of this “woussy” behaviour. Gret chapter Ally!
Glad that crisis is over & all is well. What is a bin lorry? I need to watch more British tv. LOL!
You got me holding breath until I turned to the 3rd page on the proposal. And I think “what am I going to do with you” will be my spoken expression for sometime. So touching!
Awesome.
That was awesome and glad they are ok. Now let see some B&T’s hot loving coming please, thanks!
Wow that was intense! Love it though and can’t wait for more! PPS oh and Bette is going to have one major hang over, poor Tina is going to have to take care of her:)
I am relieved that Tina saw the whole event. Bette needs a spanking but good for driving drunk, I am glad that Tina made it clear it was unacceptable behavior. I hope Tina can help Bette work on her insecurities.
Most important part…Tina and Bette are moving in together!!!!!!!
Great post. Keep up the good work. I’ve really enjoyed all your postings-every one of them. Thank you.
I’ve always read and loved your stories, but I’ve been too lazy to post. Great chapter as usual, tough I’d like to see alpha Bette back, she’s been a bit of a wuss for a while now :D PPS!!
Beautiful chapter, I’m glad they are going to move in together. Thank goodness Tina was the rational one tonight. Still can’t get over Bette drinking and driving…hopefully her 30s will bring her more common sense. Great post–thanks ally
A very touching post.
Good save. I was worried.
Gosh, Bette needs to stop running when she thinks things have gone badly. All she needs to do is stop and talk to Tina and for goodness sakes listen. Very emotional with a good lesson. PPS