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    Something so right – chapter 42

    It was typical of Bette’s insecurities that she had misinterpreted Tina’s brief silence for condemnation – Tina was kicking herself for not instantly reassuring the woman she loved that she was not in trouble or even dumped.

    The taxi travelled on for several miles – Tina was pretty sure that Bette was being taken home. She hoped so – that way she could reach Bette and make her listen to reason. Just as Tina was starting to relax a fire engine came up behind her causing her to swerve to the side of the road to let the fire crew passed. Then the car in front stalled and Tina was forced to curse for several minutes until she could resume her pursuit of the brunette. Tina knew that she was just going home anyway.

    In another five minutes Tina pulled up at the complex where Bette lived. She got out of the car – making sure that the small gift that was going to be the main item she handed her lover was tucked into her pocket. Tina reached Bette’s apartment and knocked on the door -several minutes passed as Tina grew increasing concerned. After another few minutes one of Bette’s neighbours opened his front door

    “You just missed her Tina “
    “What ?”
    “I saw her Saab gunning out of the car park about five minutes ago “

    “Oh fuck “ Tina slumped against the door “Are you sure it was her ?”

    “I was looking out of the window – we are waiting for the pizza delivery van so we’ve been looking for ten minutes – saw you arrive and then a few minutes later saw her leave – you must have missed each other by 90 seconds “

    “Okay – thanks very much -enjoy your evening “

    Tina ran down the stairs in frustration – Bette had used the lift while Tina had run up the stairs. And what was utterly terrifying was the fact that Bette was now driving her top of the range Blue Saab while she was drunk as a skunk. And she was upset – Tina had to find her fast.

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    Tina got into her car and started cruising around. Bette lived in a quiet part of LA and at night the roads were deserted. But Tina knew that her search was probably futile. Tina had been driving for half an hour when she suddenly had a brain wave – again it was probably pointless but she headed to the beach and started slowly driving up the highway. Bette loved the beach and they had shared some amazing experiences – like in Hawaii. Tina was doing her best to be patient but she was worried sick – Bette was drunk and upset – it was a potentially fatal combination. Tina turned the radio on while she drove hoping to get a glimpse of Bette’s car. After an hour when Tina was thinking of turning the car round and driving back when she spotted a sign that gave her an idea. It was typical of Bette to go to a place where she had happy memories – and the memory that she would have of Zuma Beach county park – the place that they had first kissed.

    Comments

    1. Yeah, Bette acted like a complete idiot. I hope she gets the confidence to stand up for their relationship better.. but maybe it will come with settling in together more. Love this couple.

    2. That’s not the alpha Bette we know. Come on Bette, you would have normally told that waitress yourself to take a walk. And no drinking and driving. Thankfully she has Tina, cos she’s the only one who’s ever been able to calm and balance Porter.

    3. YESSS!!! Minor crisis averted. Thank God Bette didn’t get into an accident. This is a very sweet chapter just the same. Happy birthday indeed, Bette! And I wish them many more lovely adventures/milestones together as live-in lovers. Thanks for the daily posts, ally! :)

    4. don’t these women have cellphones? Bette’s is usually attached to her arm. Never mind. Very dramatic and scary; Bette has to be watched obviously because her fears take her over. Plz continue the birthday with a nice hangover and some loving.

    5. What’s the spotlight and where? I’m so glad Tina could see what was happening – and Bette so self-destructive – driving when shitfaced. Thank the goddess your drama queen self didn’t take us down a more negative road. You know how to keep us edge and not push off over it.

    6. I hope Tina did them both a favor and opened Bette’s window-just in case. The fresh air won’t hurt her anyway, but if she should wake up feeling a bit queasy, let’s hope she has the presence of mind (tough when you’re reeling drunk) to puke out the window and not DOWN it. Hard to clean, smells bad. For a long time. But I really don’t like Bette being so cravenly insecure.

    7. I doubt Bette will even remember most of this in the morning, but when she sobers up T needs to kick her ass for driving drunk. Ally I loved the birthday present idea – that was great! I’m addicted to you Ally…it feels so wonderful to be able to read your stories again after going for three weeks + without them. You are amazing! Thanks so much!

    8. Thank goodness nothing happened to Bette while she was driving. That was a nailbiter. Poor Tina – probably worried the woman sick. Maybe Bette could show Tina her appreciation once she sobers up.

    9. Wow, this is one insecure Bette Porter. She needs to be comfortable enough with Tina that every little thing that happens doesn’t make her feel like she’s going to lose her. At some point Tina will get sick of this “woussy” behaviour. Gret chapter Ally!

    10. You got me holding breath until I turned to the 3rd page on the proposal. And I think “what am I going to do with you” will be my spoken expression for sometime. So touching!

    11. Wow that was intense! Love it though and can’t wait for more! PPS oh and Bette is going to have one major hang over, poor Tina is going to have to take care of her:)

    12. I am relieved that Tina saw the whole event. Bette needs a spanking but good for driving drunk, I am glad that Tina made it clear it was unacceptable behavior. I hope Tina can help Bette work on her insecurities.

    13. I’ve always read and loved your stories, but I’ve been too lazy to post. Great chapter as usual, tough I’d like to see alpha Bette back, she’s been a bit of a wuss for a while now :D PPS!!

    14. Beautiful chapter, I’m glad they are going to move in together. Thank goodness Tina was the rational one tonight. Still can’t get over Bette drinking and driving…hopefully her 30s will bring her more common sense. Great post–thanks ally

    15. Gosh, Bette needs to stop running when she thinks things have gone badly. All she needs to do is stop and talk to Tina and for goodness sakes listen. Very emotional with a good lesson. PPS

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