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When the Day Leaves You, Final
August 18th.
Tina followed Shane into the large living area and twirled around, as if she were overwhelmed by the grandeur of it all. “You live here?”
Shane laughed and walking backwards, said, “Yeah, I’m renting it from a friend. So, do you want anything to drink? I have, well, I don’t know what I have.”
“No, I’m fine, thank you.”
Tina awkwardly stood in the middle of the room as Shane searched the refrigerator. “Listen, you must be sick of me by now; I’ll leave you alone so you can get some rest.”
Shane shut the refrigerator and frowned, “Oh, okay, then I guess I’ll just see you on the 23rd. Now, remember, it’s 7:30 sharp, so, don’t be late.”
Tina laughed and reaching out, pulled Shane into a hug. “I really hope I get to see you before then. I’d really like to.”
Shane reluctantly put her arms around Tina’s body. “Well, you have my number. Just call if you need anything.”
Tina ran out of the house and jumped into the passenger seat of Bette’s car. “So, is it as nice on the inside as it is on the outside?”
“Even nicer,” Tina said, reaching for the seatbelt.
“Amazing.”
Tina touched Bette’s hand, “If you’re so curious you should have come in with us. Honestly, I don’t understand why your being like this…”
“Being like what?”
“Being like—an ass, to her,” Tina said, as she rolled her eyes. “She’s not going anywhere, so, you might as well get to know her. You might even end up liking her, or, maybe that’s what scares you?”
Bette looked up at the house. “She’s the product of an affair our parents had many years ago, Tina. They made a fool out of my father—your mother. I’m not like you, I don’t have it in me to just let it roll off my back, I’m not built that way.”
Tina concentrated her gaze on the scenery as they drove down the winding hills. Bette, noticing the silence, looked over and said, “What?”
“It’s nothing, it’s just—aren’t you the product on an affair?”
Bette walked into the bedroom and smiled, “Are you sure you’re alright? I can make you something.” Tina looked up from her book, “I’m really okay, I don’t need anything—except maybe for you to settle down and come to bed.”
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(41 votes, average: 3.29 out of 5)
Glad your going to be writing more of this…I so love it! PPS
WOW!!!! That was great!!! But there is going to be a part two to this story right. We need to know if Shane is OK and that B&T are happy. PLEASE Thank you
Ohhhh, I so glad you’re continuing with this story. Hopefully Shane will recover quickly and the procedure will work for Tina. I hope Bette comes to accept Shane as her sister…afterall, the sins of the parents are not their children’s. Excellent update Girl!
I am reallying enjoying these stories. Can’t wait for the next!
They all just came together as sisters so I have no doubt that things will go well for them for a bit. Please let Shane recover quickly and pps.
Cliff hanger is hard on some old people heart. Is Shane going to be okay. Is Tina also thanks
I hope Shane really is ok. I am eagerly awaiting the sequel.
so so good!!! PPS
Hopefully Shane will be okay to reunite with Tina and Bette. Glad that Tina did well and hope that the procedure works well for Tina.
Great story. I’m glad you will write a Sequel
oh shyt, shane beta b okay…look 4 ward to next part of this story.
This was a great chapter and a great story! I really loved it!! Glad you`re gonna write a sequel because we need to know if Shane`s okay and if it will work for Tina and she and Bette will be happy! And hopefully Bette will accept Shane as her sister because she can`t accuse Shane on the affair of her mother. PPS
Need to know if shane will be okay and if tina will recover fully! :)
Another nice cliffhanger, girlporter. Things looked bleak in the early chapters but now, I’m as hopeful as Tina and Shane that things will be okay. Thank you for weaving this tale and I’m certainly looking forward to the continuation of this story. By that time, I hope Bette has cooled down without the help of a joint. Great job, girlporter! PPS :>
i am also glad your continuing with this story… now i know you will keep shane and tina both safe… a little drama is ok… loving this… PPS