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High School Life: Part 17
Continuing From Alice’s Point Of View:
Opening my eyes slowly the events of the night before come rushing back, sitting bolt up right in my bed I look round to take in my surroundings. The pain from my mouth suddenly hits me. “Ohh fuck.”
Crawling out of bed slowly the smell of fresh coffee hits me. Putting my glasses on I head to the kitchen. “Mom?”
Walking into the kitchen I see Dana a smile instantly gracing my face.
“Morning sleepy head.” She smiles at me brightly making my insides melt.
“Morning, that coffee I smell?” I sit down at the breakfast bar yawning trying to hide the pain it causes.
“Certainly is, just for you.” She smiles at me again walking over taking a seat at the breakfast bar, looking at me she leans over and moves some of my bed hair from my face. “You look cute in the mornings.”
I laugh a little “Wish I could believe you on that one.”
Pouring me a coffee she looks at me again. “Listen Al, about last night.”
Looking at her I fidget uncomfortably, “What about last night?” Taking the cup of coffee she hands me I try not to look her in the face.
“Well I just think it should be reported … to the police or least tell your mom about it.”
I continue to look at whatever it is I’m looking at on the breakfast counter. “I don’t want to report it and my mom doesn’t need to know, she’s busy with work.”
Dana sighs a little reaching over and taking my hands in her own. “Al, seriously baby he cant get away with what he’s done to you and if I see him he wont!” She breathes in deeply appearing to try and calm herself down. “By telling the police and your mom then at least they know, your mom can decide to get someone to keep an eye on you or keep an eye on you herself and the police can do what they have to do.” She places her hand ever so softly under my chin making me look at her. “Please, do something.”
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Sharon Fairbanks, what have you done? That’s so cruel. I wonder if she actually read all the other messages A left. Love the drama though. Excellent job, SummerBreeze. Although I have reservation with A not going to the police. How scary it was for A to have to deal with Derek without any adult intervention. Maybe Sharon could redeem herself and step up the plate once D told her the incident. Having said that, I have great faith in you taking good care of the girls. Maybe Sharon could redeem herself and step up the plate once D told her the incident. Howie was a real rascal, lol. Can’t wait for more. Thank you very much!
WEll pissy! Freaking Sharon! i have to echo HD..nailed it spot on. Frick Frack…still cant believe that BS, PPS and let us know whats going on. Thank you so much!
So excited for an update, *+*SummerBreeze*+*!! Dana is being so sweet with Alice. I hope she can convince her to tell someone in authority about Derek. The “sorry” thing was a nice touch of humor. I wish Alice had explained that the reason she stopped Dana from going any further was because of the a-hole Derek. I know Sharon is Dana’s mom and the Dana is still underage. However, the text message went way too far. I also hope this doesn’t drive Alice to Derek. Take care of our girls, OK? Thanks for another wonderful chapter. Can’t wait to see what happens next.
Sharon Fairbanks is evil. She is messed up. I love this story. Dana and Alice are awesome. Don’t get them all sad.
Bloody hell…sending that text Sharon makes the wicked witch look like a saint..so cruel….great chapter though!!
wha …??? this sad very sad sob sob
How can some people be so mean? Come on, Alice! You can’t possibly believe Dana sent you the text, can you? Hope she doesn’t do something stupid, like going back to Derek… Oh man… drama, drama, drama… I hate drama, but I love it too, lol. Great job! PPVS
wooo whta a chapter, u just cant leave us all hangin like this lol
sharon fairbanks is a bitch and don’t like her. Hope Alice and Dana are ok!