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High School Life: Part 16
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Breathing in his scent I close my eye using all my power not to kiss him.
“You want me as much as I want you Alice, we’re meant to be together.” His hand reaches up to my face resting it on my cheek. Breathing in thoughts of Dana consume my head.
Her touch, her smell, everything about her I love and drives me crazy. Reality seems to hit me in this second and I push Derek off of me. “No!”
He looks at me angry but doesn’t say anything for a while. “This, this Dana! She more than a friend isn’t she?”
I look at him panic setting in, I know this face, the way he’s speaking. Exactly like the night he hit me. “…. No she’s just a friend I told you.”
“DON’T LIE TO ME ALICE!” He steps closer shouting at me. Flinching I step back the panic rising with every second.
“Derek please, don’t shout! Dana is just a friend I’m not lying.”
“Yes you are! I read the text I’m not stupid. Except your trying to make out that I am stupid!”
I look at him his face full of rage, terrifies me I back myself onto the couch not wanting to look him in the eye. “Derek I’m not trying to make you look stupid, I would never do that I swear to you!”
“Prove to me then that she is just a friend!” He walks over to the couch his face still full of rage.
I look at him scared, “What… what do you mean prove it to you?”
His hand runs up my leg slowly, refusing to look me in the face. “I think we both know you’ve missed me really and this would prove that this Dana is just a friend like all those other dykes you know!” His hands move over my body, making me sick to my stomach with fear as he leans in beginning to place kisses on my neck.
“Derek … please …don’t!” I beg him, plead with him to stop wishing that there could be another way.
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Wow, just in the nick of time. Thank you for bringing D & S over quickly to stop the attack. Derek would most likely be back for his second round. I think adult intervention is called for. Derek needed to be arrested for attempted rape. Lenore needed to be around. Poor A, she simply could not handle this mess alone. I am concerned about Sharon discovering D spending all her time with A. It would not be good if Sharon ever found out A’s story. Would she restraint D from seeing A? I will patiently wait for this story to unfold. Love that D being there to take care of A though. Excellent work again SummerBreeze and thank you!
Derek needs his ass beat. I think Shane and Dana should shoot the jerk. Poor Alice. At least Dane and Shane showed up just in the nick of time woot. Summerbreeze I love this story. Two updated in one weekend is awesome
Woo hoo!! So glad you plan to continue. And thanks so much for not leaving us hanging too long. Derek needs to spend some time in jail and make a few “special friends” in there. Good for Al to give him a swift kick in the nuts. Hopefully it will neuter him. I am so impressed that Dana had the foresight to call her mom and let her know she would be late so she could stay with Alice. I hope they consider calling the cops on him. Great chapter, *+*SummerBreeze*+*!! It kept me on the edge of my seat. Can’t wait to see what happens next. Thanks!!
haha I agree with Haruka shoot the jerk. That was the first thing that popped into my mind. Violence much? Maybe Dana can do it, and then her dad can get her charges dropped….
UGH! Dana just needs to ram a f*cking tennis ball in his mouth and beat him senseless with a freaking sledge hammer or soemthing, WTH! Ok moving on, most of what i wanted to say has already been covered and i have to agree..2 updates in one weekend is sh*tHoT, thanks so much for another excellent update, lok forward to more. Great Job.
Poor Alice, derek need to be in jail and gone forever. Glad Dana and Shane is there to in time to stop that baster, Im with HarukaFairbaks shoot that fucking jerk. Please post more, thanks!
ha boot to the nuts!! bugger needs worse then that, glad Dana and Shane got there to help…they should shove a tennis racket up his ass and send him to Wimbledom….great effin’ chap
Derek is a jerk,He needs his A$$ kicked and some jail time. Maybe he could be someone Bit$h in jail. and wont be so handed with his hands to hit. Glad that Dana is staying with Alice. thanks
So, no Dana for me, after all… lol. I was a little harsh on Al, I should have known she would come around. Glad she didn’t kiss that jerk, but what followed made me sick. Hope he doesn’t get the chance to do it again. The “I love you”s and “Anything for you baby” were so sweet, almost made me forget about the ugly part. Thanks a lot for deciding to continue!
love the story but i want to kill derek