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Bette walked in the house, “Al what’s up?” She smiled at Alfred.
“How was your… vacation” He asked, Bette looked at her shoes.
“It’s my fault I should’ve known better…” Alfred shook his head.
“It was ok, I had Alice and Tina.” Bette assured him.
“And Johnny Walker.” Alfred said, “I saw the bottles in the trash.”
“Yeah, he came by for a little while… “ Bette said embarrassed.
“How much chocolate have you had today?” Alfred smiled.
“Well I don’t think you should check my glucose level right now… I’m developing diabetes as we speak.” Bette smiled.
“Then I should not give you the truffles I bought.” Alfred smiled.
“Oh you should! Defiantly!”
“No I think I’ll eat them.”
“Oh please at your age? You’ve got a figure to think of.” Bette smirked.
“You did not make fun of my age AND my figure.”
“Give me!” Bette insisted.
“No.” Alfred smiled.
Bette stared him down, Alfred just looked at her. Bette decided to change tactics. She gave him her best puppy look “Share?” She asked. Alfred raised an eyebrow. “I’ll make coffee…” Bette offered.
“Fine.” Alfred smiled, “But I get first pick.”
“There are two layers?” Bette asked. Alfred nodded. “Then fine.”
“Bette?” Alfred called after her. “You ok?” he looked at her.
She looked at his eyes and felt the tears coming, “I’m getting there.” She whispered.
“Good,” Alfred said hugging her.
Tina came home and saw Bette and Alfred sitting down having coffee and laughing like two old friends. She still wasn’t used to it. “Hi.” She smiled.
“Tee, come here, join us, have some truffles!” Bette smiled.
“Are you sure?”
“Of course Al doesn’t need so much sugar.” Bette smiled. Tina sat down.
“Oh, I got you some painting for your auction.” Bette said.
“Great, I still can’t believe you all are going to be auctioned.”
“Yep, that’s us you screw one of us we bring the rest” Bette smiled.
“Bette why don’t you give Tina some of your old paintings.” Alfred said.
“You paint?” Tina asked.
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Yeah, is it soon now. So glad to see Tina stay strong, and I was even happier that Bette showed up, I was hoping she would. Tina will definitly be better off without Kelly and Kathy, those aren’t friends, they’re users. Too funny with the “God” status.
I do believe “soon” has arrived. Tina will forget those user friends she has had when Bette makes love to her for the first time. And she will have morerespect for herself as well. I’m happy that Bette showed up when she did. She is a great confidence booster for Tina which she won’t need for very long. Great post. PPS
this is getting better and better!!!! the post was awsome and 10 pages went so fast.the “gos” status was so funny. way to do tina!!!!! im so happy she didnt lose it and stay strong and more happy that bette can.im seeing tibette sparks all over! geek in pink i love u!!!!!!!!great story!!
love that bette went to the bar and claimed tina. hats off tot ina for rejecting evrything kathy and kelly where trying to push on her! tina is changing and when will it be “soon”? :)PPS
Soon = now , right. I liked how Bette made Tina make her own decision and she was doing really well on her own at the club but it was also great for Bette to show up to “make new memories”. So I say SOON is NOW. Oh come on!!! Thanks for the post.
I hope soon means next chapter!!!! Glad Bette went to shebar. Bye Bye to Kelly and Kathy. Great Update!!! Thanks
Yeah Tina, drop them bad apple friends like a bad habit! and I’m with Bette is it soon yet???
But hey, they are going to sleep, SLEEP! Love this story and this Bette is just… *sigh* Just adooore your sense of humor. Keep it coming, will ya? Great job ;)
I think it is definitely soon, now, right now! lol. I love the story and the pace. keep it up
Uff, I hope you wont have them fall out big time at that auction!PPS
please let it be soon. though I am really enjoying the kissing and teasing too. Tina is really growing – and Bette was great then too. Hope that’s the last we see of Tina’s friends…
Soon can’t come soon enough! Don’t torture us with another Tina downfall, please…please…please. I want to see happy and in love Tina – the Tina getting her life together. Loved how Bette came to her rescue. Could we have “soon” before the auction… PPS
Soon…very soon???? pps
awesome!!!!! I enjoyed this chapter sooo much. Back off Dembo!! Bette is Tina’s property now.
Great chapter, I am so glad that Bette was able to make Tina see the type of people she was hanging with. What kind of friend can see that you are happy and in love but still try to make you fall back into your old destructive ways. Instead of being so polite about it Bette should have said “step off bitches!” I sure hope soon comes soon. PPS
Soon…soon…soon…good thing Tina is with God…
I love this chapter! Tina is growing by leaps and bounds. I was glad to see that Bette followed Tina to the bar after Tina confessed what she was scared of. Going to read more!
I hope that’s the last of Kathy and Kelly. What losers. Although they are good for a laugh. Thanks for posting.
soon? I am glad that Tina put kelly and Kathy in their place. She has found what she was looking for. PPS :o).
I hope it’s SOON!!! PPS
sooooooooooo, is it ‘soon’ now???!!!! pps
Bette and Tina are so cute