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    Don’t Go (4)

    Story written on August 20, 2008 by tunafish.
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    coming home!

    4

    "Home sweet home," Alice announced cheerfully as she nudged Dana through the doorway. Dana was less animated, though. She was observing the various little changes in her house since they’d left while they walked through the hall. The mail was a making huge, seemingly unmanageable pile at the door. The answering machine was blinking with several messages.

    "Oh shit, sorry Dane. I totally forgot about checking this shit," Alice said ruefully, casually pressing play on the answering machine as she tread into the living room. She unceremoniously dropped the several bags she was carrying and flopped onto the couch facedown. Dana stood in the doorway and smiled at this, not really paying attention to the messages till she heard a very familiar voice. She cringed. Lara. Going on about how she can’t stop thinking about her, how she wishes Dana was with her… coming home? Dana’s eyes widened and she urgently looked to see how Alice was taking this. She was now sitting up. She looked Dana in the eye and raised her eyebrows.  Her face was unreadable.

    "I’m going to go put this stuff in the bedroom," she mumbled, slowly walking upstairs. Oh shit. What does that mean? Is she angry? Should I say something? Should I stop her? Crap, she’s already upstairs.

    Dana groaned, hastily pounding ‘stop’ on the machine and rushing to follow Alice. She slowed her pace as she walked into the bedroom and spotted Alice putting clothes away.

    "Hey," Dana tried, sitting down on the bed. Alice hadn’t looked up or stopped putting things away.

    "Yea?"

    "Are you mad?"

    "What? Why would I be mad? Crazy.."

    "I don’t know… but, are you?" Dana said, throwing the question back at her.

    "Pshh…  I don’t know why you’d even think that, Dane. Crazy," Alice repeated, roughly shoving a shirt into the sock drawer.

    "Right. ‘Cause, you know, I’d understand if you were… just a little bit angry. I’m kind of mad."

    "Oh really? Why?" Alice pressed skeptically, finally meeting Dana’s gaze.

    "Well, she just kind of left. It got too hard for her, and she left." And you stayed.

    "That’s a bit harsh. You were pushing her away," Alice said with a frown.

    "I….I know. But I was pushing everyone away, especially you. But you never left," Dana breathed, moving to stand in front of Alice.

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    1. tunafish, my guess is IC went temporary insane, or got jealous at ED/ LH/ KM having to much fun, or wanted higher ratings, or hates us Danish fans? I can go on and on. Regardless of her wrongful decision, it was ED’s loss and ours too. Although life goes on, I will never forgive nor forget. Enough ranting for today. So happy that D was out of the hospital. Now they would need some heart to heart talk. It was a good sign that D had declared that she was there and was not going anywhere. My only concern is the soup chef. I look forward to seeing how you resolve that. Thank you very much tunafish for another wonderful update!

    2. Another excellent chapter, tunafish!! Lara. Gah! I look forward to how you decide to handle that. Dana did chase her away. But she did try to chase Alice away, too, and Alice wouldn’t put up with it. I could almost feel what Alice was going through when she woke up. You wrote that really well. It was so Alice to cut herself with the knife. I hope it is just a scratch. I am so happy that she told Dana about the dream. She needed to get it out. That may prevent it from coming back. I couldn’t help but think: “I mean she touches you here… and you feel it… here” when Alice was feeling those familiar stirrings at being close to Dana. Well done. I can’t wait for the next chapter. Thanks!!

    3. Ok get Dane to tell Lara asap that she doesnt wanna b with her anymore…she loves Al still which is so super-cute…the tasting of blood but Dane loved it…heat between her legs huh we so know what that was about.Great update PPS.im glad Dane is ok jst dont make Alice get sick now ok.As she seems on edge btw i love the part about her thinking she might have been popping pills again

    4. As much as I love danish I reckon you should throw Lara in again to mix it up a bit hehe. I’m a drama llama, what can I say? Great post, I totally thought you’d killed off Dana for a minute and it was all just a dream, luckily you’re not Ilene. x

    5. Sensational, I can’t wait to see how you handle the next few steps. Their mutual desire for a second chance is executed so well…makes me sad for them both.But anyways, I hope you update soon!

    6. great chapter – i really like the realistic version of what would have happened if dana survived. i imagine exactly a scene with dana listening to the answering with alice there and neither of them know what to do or how to act. thanks for that. cheers.

    8. hey, great update. i always wanted to see dana and alice together, and it pissed me off when dana died in season 3. it just broke my heart. do update soon..thanks…

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