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Don’t Go (4)
"Dana… "
"You’re so good to me,” Dana said softly, tentatively putting her arms around Alice.
“Uh huh… you know you’ve got to call Lara. Otherwise she’ll just show up at the door soon,” Alice sighed, fighting the urge to sink into the embrace.
“Yeah.. I guess. I just want to sleep right now, though. Is that okay?” Dana asked quietly, pulling back.
“Alright. Just yell if you need me,” Alice replied, giving Dana one last unreadable look and then walking out the door.
“Fuck,” Dana whispered as she fell onto the bed, taking her head into her hands.
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Alice sprang upright, gasping for breath and searching frantically around the dark room. She clutched at her chest with one hand and used the other to grab her forehead. What the fuck just happened? Where the hell am I? Whose couch…?
Alice paled as excerpts of her dream flew to her mind. Something about a hospital… A lot of doctors pushing me away to get to a hospital bed…Then…the beeping stopped.
Her eyes widened.
“Dana!” Alice whispered, tears already pouring down her face. Dana had cancer. Dana was in the hospital. Dana was dying. Dana was gone.
Alice sank back into the couch and pulled her knees up to her face, crying into the pillow she’d been using. After several minutes of hysterical sobbing, she was able to think coherently again. Wait. Why the hell am I here? What am I, crazy? Holding on to Dana’s house? Shit, I haven’t been using again, have I? I could’ve at least slept on the bed, Alice thought. She stood up and pushed her hair away from her face, turning on a lamp nearby. She surveyed the room around her again, and then looked down at herself. At least it looks like I showered recently. And changed clothes. No empty bottles around me.. pills or alcohol.
Alice sighed, looking at a clock. 1:00 A.M. That was weird. She walked to the kitchen, opening a cabinet to get a glass. She filled it to the rim with water and started to down it. She abruptly paused when she heard a groan. The remaining water fell onto her now terrified face, into her nose, and down her throat. She sputtered and coughed as quietly as she could while she set the glass down. Alice hastily opened up a drawer and grabbed a knife, cautiously walking into the living room. No one. She decided that the sound had come from upstairs, and then ran up them as quietly as she could. Did a robber sneak in here while I was sleeping? Okay, that’s unlikely. Am I being haunted by ghost Dana? Hmm.. more unlikely…
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tunafish, my guess is IC went temporary insane, or got jealous at ED/ LH/ KM having to much fun, or wanted higher ratings, or hates us Danish fans? I can go on and on. Regardless of her wrongful decision, it was ED’s loss and ours too. Although life goes on, I will never forgive nor forget. Enough ranting for today. So happy that D was out of the hospital. Now they would need some heart to heart talk. It was a good sign that D had declared that she was there and was not going anywhere. My only concern is the soup chef. I look forward to seeing how you resolve that. Thank you very much tunafish for another wonderful update!
Another excellent chapter, tunafish!! Lara. Gah! I look forward to how you decide to handle that. Dana did chase her away. But she did try to chase Alice away, too, and Alice wouldn’t put up with it. I could almost feel what Alice was going through when she woke up. You wrote that really well. It was so Alice to cut herself with the knife. I hope it is just a scratch. I am so happy that she told Dana about the dream. She needed to get it out. That may prevent it from coming back. I couldn’t help but think: “I mean she touches you here… and you feel it… here” when Alice was feeling those familiar stirrings at being close to Dana. Well done. I can’t wait for the next chapter. Thanks!!
Ok get Dane to tell Lara asap that she doesnt wanna b with her anymore…she loves Al still which is so super-cute…the tasting of blood but Dane loved it…heat between her legs huh we so know what that was about.Great update PPS.im glad Dane is ok jst dont make Alice get sick now ok.As she seems on edge btw i love the part about her thinking she might have been popping pills again
As much as I love danish I reckon you should throw Lara in again to mix it up a bit hehe. I’m a drama llama, what can I say? Great post, I totally thought you’d killed off Dana for a minute and it was all just a dream, luckily you’re not Ilene. x
Sensational, I can’t wait to see how you handle the next few steps. Their mutual desire for a second chance is executed so well…makes me sad for them both.But anyways, I hope you update soon!
great chapter – i really like the realistic version of what would have happened if dana survived. i imagine exactly a scene with dana listening to the answering with alice there and neither of them know what to do or how to act. thanks for that. cheers.
Yay! Great stuff yet again … pps
hey, great update. i always wanted to see dana and alice together, and it pissed me off when dana died in season 3. it just broke my heart. do update soon..thanks…