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I WANT YOU BACK Part 22
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Part 22
Tina was trying to brush her infant daughter’s unruly hair, Bette was watching her lover grooming their child..she loved how maternal the blonde was, how gentle and loving she was when dealing with their baby.
Mr Kennard knocked on the bedroom door, and when given permission to enter he came in and said
“Bette, Chrissy wants you – She is in our bedroom”
“Tell her I’ll be down in a few minutes Mr K” The brunette replied, Mr Kennard nodded and left the room.
“Mom’s going to give you the chat” Tina said amusedly
“What Chat Tee?” Bette replied
“The dreaded..You better be good to my daughter chat” the blonde laughed
“Oh! THAT chat?…I don’t think so, we’ve already had that discussion”
“You have?” Tina said surprised
“Yeah – a few days ago”
“Oh..Okay, I hope the rents were not too hard on you!”
“No it was fine…I wouldn’t have expected anything else from your mom!” Bette laughed
“Were so glad you are getting along so well with my folks, aren’t we Angie?” Tina said in a baby voice to Angelica making the child giggle.
Bette smiled at their interaction, then kissed both girls before getting up to go see Tina’s mom.
She found Mrs Kennard sitting on the bed, rubbing her temple, Bette was nearly right next to her before the older women realised it was Bette
“Hello dear… I just wanted to give you something”
Mrs Kennard went over to her jewellery box, scrunched her eyes up…willing herself to find what she was looking for, she picked up a ring put it directly infront of her eyes then smiled in satisfaction that she’d picked up the correct item, then walked back to Bette and handed her the ring saying
“I want Tina to have this. I thought that maybe you could give her it when you ask her to marry you?…It was Christopher’s great gran’s engagement ring, it’s been in the Kennard family for years.- Its kind of a Kennard heirloom… But Bette I’ll completely understand if you want to buy Tina a ring yourself..I just thought it would be nice to carry on the tradition so to speak”
The brunette looked at the ring- It had a small ruby in the centre, and around the ruby the ring was encrusted with diamonds. The ring was exquisite, very elegant, and very chic.
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Poignant, sweet & clever the way u interwoved our names. Thank you. Watching the person u love dying is heart rending. Thank u for attempting such a difficult situation and doing it so beautifully with love. I’ll be away for about a week so will look 4ward to an update when I get back.
This was a great chapter and thanks so much in the way you used our names in the story, it was sweet of you. I will go an dlisten to the songs you had them singing. The subject matter in this chapter is very hard to talk about but you did a wonderful job with respect and love. Thanks again. PPS
My name was in your story…doing happy dance now!!! That was awesome thank you:) oh and the story was great as usual, so hurry up and write us more please!
oh my god beautful writing.the songs you used were awesome.i’m am so cring right now,i lost my mom it will be 3 years sept.29,her not being still hurts not a day gose by that i don’t think about her she was the best mom ever.pps
This was a very poignant chapter with the daughters and their mothers, more specifically Chrissy Kennard. I am saddened that finally Chrissy Kennard has accepted her daughter back into the fold only to lose her own life. I know that it is this situation that allowed her to open her heart to Tina and her family, but it is still very sad.
One of the hardest thing you will do is loose some you love dearly. ove the wqy you interjected our name. thanks sssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssst thing
WOW saw my name in your story, that was so cool, thanks my friend :)! That was amazing and so emotional and funny too, sad for Tinas mom. Can’t get enough of this story, please post more, thanks!
Ya, what Rau said, “poignant” -evoking strong mental sensation, to the point of destress;emotionally moving. Your story hits many issues and so gracefully. Both of thoses songs always move me and make me appriciate being a daughter and a mother. Thank you, Md
I totally agree with what Rau said, so Very poignant and lovely. Situations like this mays one realize that we are all dying or on the path to death from the day we are born. It’s what you do on that journey that makes the differance and you have the power to change it at any time. PPS :o).
i DIDNT check him out!!! that was funny seeing my nicgreat post u mad me cry with the songs i love this story
It was SOOOOOOOOOOO touching that Angelica was trying to say Nana when Bette thought that she was telling her no. It’s GREAT that Chrissy is able to bond enough with Angie before she dies as well as make a mends with Tina. VERY, VERY NICE.
WOW!!! That was very nice to see my name in this story!!!! Those song are so great!!!! This story is so heeling to the soul. Thank you PPS
Wow this was so emotional and heartbreaking, yes life can be so cruel sometimes poor Tina. I was wondering when it was really going to sink in that her mother was dying, I’m glad her and Bette are in a really good place where she will be able to find the comfort she will need