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Change the Past
“wow its been forever since I’ve been around here” Alice said after pulling up to the planet, exiting her rented car and onto the streets of West Hollywood where Bette and Kit were standing.
“I know, and it hasn’t be the same. We’ve definitely missed you” Bette said laughing as Alice made an
“aww” face and put her arm around Bette’s shoulder.
“Ya, you need to come back and visit more often baby girl. You forget all about us common folk?” Kit asked jokingly to which Alice rolled her eyes.
“Common folk? I don’t think Kit Porter could be considered ‘common folk’” Alice said and Bette agreed as she opened the door to the Planet. “Wow, you own this now, Kit? I remember this place back in the day when we used to come here after classes. It’s changed so much” Alice stated as she looked around her old stomping grounds, nostalgically.
“Well, our friend, Marina used to own it along with her crazy, power-hungry girlfriend but…” Kit paused looking at Bette who grimaced. “A lot happened since then.”
Alice noticed the look past between siblings but let it slide. Kit walked around to the other side of the counter that Alice leaned on. “So, what can I get you baby girl?”
“Anything to wake me up. I got no sleep on the place because the girl sitting next to me was pumping me for information.” Alice said sighing dramatically causing Bette to chuckle.
“Oh, the hardships of being a famous musician”
“Don’t forget gay icon” said lanky, shaggy-haired brunette, jokingly to which Kit and Bette laughed. “I’m Shane, by the way and this is Carmen” Shane stated as Carmen shook Alice’s hand
“Nice to meet you Shane, Carmen. I’m Alice” Alice noticed Bette talking to a woman standing behind Shane but couldn’t see her face. Shane noticed this and smiled stepping out of the way to introduce the woman. Before she could, the woman glanced to her left at Alice. Shane couldn’t understand the reaction her friend held and was about to ask her when her friend stated “Alice” angrily.
The group went silent at their friend’s tone and glanced at Alice who appeared to be unable to speak with a shocked and surprised look on her face.
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(35 votes, average: 3.60 out of 5)
Welcome, fabutvs26!! I am always thrilled to have a new Danish author come on board. Excellent start so far. Love Alice as a rock star. I hope Dana and Alice can hash through their problems. The attraction still definitely exists. Sounds like there is quite a story in why Alice felt she had to leave. I also love the little touches you added like Carmen stopping Dana’s head from hitting the table. Very well done. I can’t wait to see what all you have in store for us. Thanks!!
Great first post, loved it. pps
Hi, welcome aboard! This story is very well written! I like it, NO I LOVE IT! Can’t wait for the next chapter. Thanks and PPS! :-)
fabutvs26, what a pleasant surprise with your 1st Danish story, welcome! A rock star, a broken heart and a funeral, very interesting start. I am sure you will eventually tell us about the break up. I sure hope that Kit was correct about A & D being right for each other. Always love a good story on how they would find their way back together. Looking forward to your next installment. Thank you very much.
I’m liking the start of this story. Keep it up and welcome aboard
I hope you continue the story…very soon.