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Dana got to her house after her panicked escape from Alice and couldn’t get the image of Alice’s smile out of her head. She’s so cute when she’s nervous. I wish I could have just grown some actual courage and talked to her but, no instead I was just a coward, as usual. No wonder she left me. Dana sighed as she started to change into her pajamas and laid in bed, partially dreading the funeral tomorrow but, secretly looking forward to seeing Alice again.
Unfortunately, morning came too soon for her as she had only fallen asleep a few hours ago, unable to think about anything but the prospect of seeing Alice today. What if she doesn’t want to even see me after what I did yesterday. Did I just ruin it for myself by disappointing her? Dana looked at the clock and realized she only had an hour to get ready and get over to the Planet, the place of the funeral. After showering and getting dressed, Dana felt more refreshed and not like she had spent the whole night torturing herself.
Dana managed to get to the Planet at the same time as Shane and Jenny, which helped her nerves as she was not the most comfortable person in crowds. As they entered they saw Bette talking with Kit near the counter and Tina and Alice standing near by. Dana noticed Shane and Jenny start towards the group and breathed in deeply, trying to calm herself knowing she’d be forced to interact with Alice. When she walked over Bette had just finished hugging Shane and moved towards Dana to do the same while Shane and Kit were introducing Jenny to Alice.
“Dana, come meet Alice” Jenny said grabbing Dana’s hand and pulling her to stand in front of Alice. Alice cleared her throat awkwardly and looked at Dana while Dana stood stock still, not breathing.
“Um actually we’ve met, Jenny. But it’s nice to see you Dane” Alice said trying to shake herself of the uncomfortable atmosphere. She would have laughed when Dana finally sucked in air if the situation had been different but instead she found herself holding her own breath this time, waiting for Dana’s reply. Don’t let it be snarky. It’s the last thing I need today.
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OMG, I loved the way Dana turned her hand and locked fingers with Alice. What a beautiful chapter. Thank you so much … pps
that’s so sweet of dana, being under control when alice cries. i hope they’ll try to patch things up between them coz it’s very obvious that they still love each other..excellent post…pps…why the hell did alice left dana in the first place?….can’t wait to find out…
thanks to Danish for being mature support adults….love them.. Thanks for the update
I love how things have turned around for A & D. I also like the way you incorporated their feelings as the events unfolded. Nicely done, fabutvs26! I echo both chillipepper and mai’s comment. Looking forward to some answers to their breakup. I can never get enough of these two. Thank you very much!
Hey, I echoed all the above comments! It’s a great story. Can’t wait for another chapter. Thanks and PPS!
Great update, fabutvs26!! Loved getting more of Dana’s viewpoint. She was such a great friend to Alice during the service and afterwards. So supportive. That connection was never completely broken. So funny that they were so lost in each other that they didn’t help the cleaning at all. I look forward to more on this story. Thanks!!