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At Shane’s and Carmen’s wedding
Dana rolled her eyes and answered yes. This was the hundredth time Shane asked Dana about the ring; whether it was in her pocket or not. Shane said thanks and fidgeted her hands as she diverted her gaze to the entrance. Dana could tell her friend was very nervous as she stood beside the lanky brunette at the altar. Well, Shane is a big girl now, she thought and smiled. Then Dana’s gaze diverted to the entrance as well. Her blonde friend, the maid of honour was going to walk down the aisle with Carmen and her mom. She was longing to see her. Both were so busy helping the brides that they hardly see each other in two days. Dana sighed. This was probably the last time she met up with Alice as her flight was tomorrow’s afternoon. She was snapped out from her thought when she heard the band played “The Wedding March.” She looked at Shane who was grinning from ear to ear now. She chuckled and shook her head as she diverted her gaze back to the entrance. She smiled as she saw Carmen and her mum walked in. Carmen was grinning ear to ear holding a bouquet of red roses. She is the luckiest person to have Shane, Dana thought and smiled. But her smile subsided as soon as she saw the person walking slightly behind the bride. She had to hold her breath. She had never seen a person so beautiful in her entire life. Alice was looking at her and smiled. The blonde looked stunning in her white creamy satin long dress and her face was glowing. The sight was perfect. In Dana’s mind it was as if Alice was walking up to her and this was their wedding. Before she realized Carmen and her mum reached the altar and Shane nudged Dana to bring back her senses. Dana blushed and mouthed sorry.
They were all facing the minister as he spoke. When both women exchanged vows Dana stole a glance at Alice. If only I could say my vow to her one day, she thought. She sighed and looked down at her feet. Alice realized Dana was looking at her; she looked at Dana and saw her looking down at her feet and was in deep thought. She’s beautiful, Alice thought. She continued to look at Dana until the women finished their vows. She diverted her gaze to the front as the minister continued.
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(26 votes, average: 3.46 out of 5)
I think Al is hiding more than that. Can’t wait to find out what!!
Kit broke her promise to Chris in 10 sec. flat. LMAO. Hooray Hurrah to Chris Daniel Pieszecki-Fairbanks even though he too broke his promise to A. See how this works? But nonetheless an adorable young lad with the same goofy grin as D! And he was already very drawn to D. Like I said before, I have a theory about this. Howie? I can’t wait to find out. I also love D’s determination at the end. Thank goodness for the gang. I thought the wedding scene was well written. Love that D was daydreaming. I was glad that A overheard her conversation with Bette. Maybe, A would come to her sense soon after D would return. Thank you very much, Uhhuh, excellent job!
Will wonders never cease we had snow here in the dallas area. snowed for about 30 mintues. that is rare here. Glad that Sana called Al in the end, Our goofy Dana is on a mission, Alice has better watch out/ thanks
What a great chapter! Loved the wedding scenes. Too funny that Dana got so distracted by Alice. The scene at the bar was very telling – Dana certainly knows what she wants. Poor Chris. I understand Alice wanting to keep the secret, but, that is a lot of pressure on a little guy. Great ending to the chapter. Dana has her path clearly figured out and it’s perfect that she called Alice at the end so it didn’t seem like she was sneaking away. Wonderful. Can’t wait for the next chapter. Thanks!! BTW: I hope you are feeling better.
Sure hope Dana gets back to LA quickly.pps
love love love it! I agree with Magoose-that is a lot of pressure to put on the little guy. So glad Dana is going back for good. Fight for your woman. Post soon
the best chapter, EVER..my heart is racing as i was reading page by page..poor chris, he’s in trouble w/ mommy alice…i wonder how alice will react to this situation..i can’t wait to know how chris becomes dana’s son…thank u uhhuh, excellent work…and BTW get well soon…
super nice story love little Chris hope he finds out soon who his other mommy is….happy family