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    “Making My Way Home” – Chapter 10

    Story written on December 10, 2008 by VanillAandSugA.
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    Mark sees a big wave and stops. Carmen goes to see her mother.

    Chapter 10

    Just as Mark was about to run into the water he saw a huge wave come from behind and he suddenly just stopped causing the girls to look at him weirdly. They were all shouting at him at the same time. “Mark! What are you doing? Go get her!” Mark shook his head no and pointed out towards the lanky girl. They ran over to him and looked out to where he was pointing to. They had to wipe their tears away completely because it was kind of impairing their vision for the moment. When they all gained good visibility of their view, all mouths were opened in shock.

    “Shane?!” Mel said more to herself than anyone else.

    “Wow!” Alice added.

    “She’s.. she’s surfing.. she’s freakin’… I totally forgot that she surfed!” Mark said with mixed emotions.

    “I never saw her, but I remember her telling me that she surfed a lot when she was younger.” Carmen smiled to herself.

    “Yeah, and I remember her saying that she does it to clear her head sometimes.” Mel said.

    The 4 let out a sigh of relief to know that their friend didn’t do anything stupid. Of course, surfing in the dark in freezing weather is stupid, but nothing compared to what she could’ve done.

    Shane spots the 4 on the beach after she caught that massive wave and walks towards them slightly out of breath. “What are you guys doing here?” She says walking with her board in hand and shaking the water out of her hair.

    Mark meets her half way and gives her a one armed hug. “Shane. You were awesome out there!” She gave him a smile as the rest of the girls ran towards them.

    “Wow slim! Pretty hot in the wet suit.” Alice said while giving her friend a hug.

    Wow. Super extra sexy hot! Carmen thought to herself.

    It was Mel’s turn next. She stared at Shane for a second, smiled and then gave her a hug. “Shane?! We were all worried.”

    “Why?”

    “Because… Because..” Mel couldn’t really finish so Mark finished for her.

    “Because we know what today is and after what happened last year and the year before and the way you acted when I last saw you we got worried and we didn’t want you to be alone.” Mark said in one breath.

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    1. Yay, that was a fast update. I’m glad you got your muse back, ’cause I love it very much. Can’t wait to read what Mercedes has to say. Hopefully Shane proves to Carmen that she has changed.

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