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    New Beginning – You Choose Which One

    Story written on January 5, 2009 by biissexi.
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    Choose from three possible beginnings!

     

     

    Beginning 1

     

     

    The girls are all hanging out at Bette’s house and Alice offers a game of hide and seek. Everyone thinks it will be hilarious except for Bette who finally agrees to play along. She walks down the hallway in a huff, opening the closet door and getting in. She waits with her arms crossed for a while, thinking about her day until she hears something right outside the door, expecting it to be Alice coming to get her. The door opens and instead of seeing Alice, someone has joined her, giggling at the same time.

    "Alice?" Bette whispered, dropping her arms at her sides.

    "No, but I was supposed to help her look," the stranger whispered, still giggling.

    "Do I know you?" Bette whispered, widening her eyes in the dark as she felt two hands on her chest.

    "Oh no! Sorry!" The blonde snorted out of laughter, drawing her hands away. "I didn’t know where you were."

    Bette gasped when she felt the hands on her and let out the breath she had been holding when they disappeared from her body.

    "No, you don’t know me." The girl whispered, trying to contain her laughter.

    "Why did you jump in here?" Bette asked, re-crossing her arms tightly to her chest. She could feel her hardened nipples through her bra and smirked at what this stranger had already done to her. She knew that her friends would be so happy for any smile coming from her.

    "I know you’re gonna think I’m crazy," the stranger whispered quietly. Bette smiled again, thinking ‘too late’. She could sense the girl was getting a little closer, by the volume of her voice and she felt a tingle. "But I was scared when I heard Alice coming down the hall so I just jumped in here," She laughed again, trying to keep as quiet as possible. She was surprised to hear Bette join her in light laughter.

    "Why?" Bette asked, calming her laughter away with a smirk remaining.

    "I don’t know," the blonde chuckled, afraid her noise would attract Alice’s attention. "Sorry if I give away your position." she whispered quietly, getting even closer to the brunette.

    Bette swallowed and reached up to turn on the little ceiling lamp.

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    1. Sheesh. My first comment disappeared so I hope this one comes out. I don’t comment very often but thought I would give my vote. I vote that you continue all of them. Even if it isn’t at the same time, but eventually do all 3 of them. I had a hard time deciding in which order but finally decided on…2,3 and 1. I liked them all and hope to see all of them continued at some point. Whichever one wins, I’ll be reading even if I don’t comment very often. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.

    7. Dam women three great openings for a story and only one to continue with. Two choices are hard but three is even harder. I say number 2 and if we had to choose a back up I say number 3.PPS.

    19. maybe you can do a multi-channel. Something like after you finish updating a story’s chapter, and you can get the readers to vote which stories do they would like you to update? I had seen one author in a forum doing this. It was creative and so fun!

    26. WOW – look at all these comments!! what a great way to get all the silent readers to go out there!:) I really liked beginning 2 and 3. Its hard to decide – but if I actually had to…hmm I vote for no.3! But I would love to know what bette wants to say to tina in the end of story no.2. but I really REALLY love business tina – soooooo is ee so much potential in beginning no.3…. But it really doesnt matter what story you write – I will read it anyways. I`m looking very much forward to this new story! Thanks. :)

    27. Definitely _#1_!,… Loved the: Tina to Bette – “Sorry I took your chair.” – “No, it’s alright,” Bette assured her, She suddenly had images in her mind of sitting in the lounger with Tina in her lap. – Bring on the Lap-Sitting!

    28. You are amazing my friend and what you’re doing is really original, it feels like it’s our story and that made me already attached to it and it didn’t even begin yet. As always brilliant ideas but really I have to say that the second one attracted me better, and I loved the third one too, but may be you will be kind enough to do the whole three. hehehe Thanks for making our voices count. Love

    32. #2 then #3 and then #1 ….you just have to ( puppy eyes ) We are your faithful loyal fans who are devoted to your writing!! (How can you say no to that) LMAO :)

    33. OMG! I freakin’ loved them all! You are killing me with choosing. If you force me to there is just something about the second one that seems as though it would make a really cute story. They are both thinking something completely different than what’s happening in reality — that just makes for such a great storyline. After you do the second one, could you write the other two up as well???

    34. Ummmm. #3 NO #2 NO #1. Damn this is hard. How about a little of each story and make one big one. Probably #6 that is it #6 (I can add). I guess #3.

    35. I think I like 3 the best. I enjoyed the banter between the two of them. But like everyone else, I’m silently hoping you will follow up on all 3!!! PPS

    39. i am SO late voting- i just found these! let me echo all those who said ALL 3. Dammit. All three. as i read #1 i was voting for that one, CLEARLY first. Then i read 2…crap. adorable too!! sigh… number 3 is the best!! now what?? i really want all three and i think it’s feasible. However… in to answer your question. In order– i think the story following #3 has some very original potential. i love the idea of them meeting over business and Bette coming for Tina alphablast… too cute. But i refuse to not vote for 2 and 1 too.

    40. wohw this is great!! how original to let us choose :) my order is 1 2 3 but you should definitely do something with all three! i do believe there is already some kind of story like your 3 but i would like to see your version sometimes. 1 is so funny, i think it would be a lovely story, but you have to slow down the ‘sexual contacts’ between them so they can learn to know eachother. good luck with everything you starting on right now ;)

    42. Oh My God what a choice to make. I’ll make the assumption that you have all three already outlined and ready to go depending, of course, on which choice wins out. Making a choice is an awesome responsibility and I can’t make one except to say “DO ALL THREE, 1,3, 2. But I must read them again and see if my choices stay the same. I loved all three of them. Do them all one at a time, they are each asesome beginnings, the hid and go seek is really fun, I love that. I don’t know how you can keep from writing all three. PLEASE!

    44. All 3 please, they are so cute. But if we are to really really really to choose I will hurtly say 3,2,1. Man this is too dfficult to choose. Thankyou for sharing with us

    47. 333333333… Of course!!! Although I think that number 1 is really sweet, funny and so original. Don’t get me wrong, I think 2 is sweet as well, but somehow it’s something that has more or less already been done. Although I’m sure your own version would be just great. So I guess my vote is 3, 1, 2. But I really hope 3 wins, cause it has so much potential. Love this kind of beginnings! K ;)

    48. wow it is so hard to choose, they all sound interesting!But my vote for no.2 then no.3.No.2 for the tention between B and T. HOT!No.3 for the charming Bette Porter atitude, nice!please~

    50. wauw – different approach! It seems I´m with everybody else, having a difficult time choosing between three great beginnings – but maybe 3,2 and then 1 – preferably all three

    51. i thought i was gonna be the original one nd say all three – but everyone wants all three to be continued. They are really all great. they all capture a different facade of the characters. the business tina, the flirtatious bette, the calm collected bette, the nervous tina, the nervous bette, the straight girl really lesbian tina (i do love that one) – But really, do them all, there’s a serious lack of tibette fic at the moment, and each of these allow for some great enjoyment for the readers and hopefully give you something too. :D

    55. They were all awesome… and I would LOVE to see all three of them come to life… But to have to choose I definately choose 2.. with 1 a close second then 3. Can’t wait to see which one you continue with. PPS

    57. i don’t usually comment but just wanted to give you my vote! :)all 3 starts are totally awesome so it’d be great if you do eventually complete all of them but if i had to choose, my number one choice would be 2, then 3, then 1. :)

    58. You take a hottie and a blondie like tibette and you’re expecting us to choose 1 out of THREE? Woman, you’re too much…ok,that aside, I opt for 3 follow (of course) by the other twoxD

    59. I think #2.But i definetely like #1 because Bette let Tina sit in her chair how cute?But #2 because they dont know how much the other is attracted to them.#3 is good though as they will be working closely together.Which ever one is picked i’m sure everyone will enjoy reading.

    60. wow!! I love all of them!! But if I really have to choose, my first choice will be #3. Then #2 and #1. I will really like to see you continue the story! Please…

    62. #3,#1 Is cute ,#2 they are already in love with each other, and will eventually put one and two together but three look like it could be quite challenging

    63. ALL THREE!!!!!!!!!!!!! ALL THREE!!!!!!!!!!!!! ALL THREE!!!!!!!!!!!!! ALL THREE!!!!!!!!!!!!! OK, I vote for 3,2 and then 1. They all have such great potential. I really want all of them, but I want number 3 first, please. I like the bantering back and forth between them. It’s definitely going to make working together interesting. PPS!!

    67. i will admit that i too enjoyed all three but #1 was so very random that it intrigued me. i like that they’re all playful and would have to cast my vote for 1.

    68. We get to pick? Yippee!! You are so cool to offer us Interactive fanfiction . LOL! First of all, as I read all the comments I’m curious as to how you’re going to get out of not writing all three? You know us fanfic readers always we always want more, more, more. I agree with the others. I’d like you to write all three stories, even if it’s not at the same time. **But you do know Allyemmerson has three stories going at once, right? LOL! No pressure,bissexi** Three great beginnings & I’m in awe of your writing skills. I don’t think I could write one of these stories successfully but that’s not going to stop me from asking you to write all three. LOL! That’s because you’re an amazing writer and I’m…I’m….just a fanfic reader with high demands. Or does that make me an interactive fanfic reader with high demands??…hmmm. If I must choose ** I’m pouting while I stick out my bottom lip** than I vote for 3,2,1. PS.

    74. well i’m also with the others… i like # 3 for the banter between them… i think they will have fun working together… #1 because it looks like tina is all shy and new to all of it… #2 because they both like each other but bette is not going to hit on a stra8 girl… and tina wished she would… so take your pick… they all are good beginnings… but if i have to vote… 3, 1, 2… good luck with your choice

    75. I don’t think I have ever commented but it’s a beginning for everything,so I’m with the others you should continue all the three stories,but if I have to chose then my “top” it’s 3,2,1

    76. I think you got the general consensis there…you got a brilliant story with all three…but you said to choose one story…and I have read them over and over again trying to choose…but would go for no 2 (then 3…and 1)…what a great idea…cant wait to see more and hope to see all three:)

    77. Wow there are a lot of comment biissexi!!! Congrats for that!! well I liked all 3 of them, but you know Tina in the first one was hilarious, and in the second one they were just so into each other…but I have to say that I would enjoy much better the beginning number 3 ;) I guess I like Bette being challenged =P and I’m guessing Tina won’t be an easy prey xD Any beginning that wins I’ll be happy with, because your stories are always fun and HOT!! =D

    81. God, all these beginnings are soooo tempting !! Aren’t you ashamed to put us in such a cruel choice ??? *wink* Ok, seriously, for me I decided to choice the one with the biggest development potential. So at first, regardless the so cute “closet-sharing”, I eliminate the #1 – simply because the chemistry is already so palpable, it could easily end at bed in few days – or even hours ! Then, it becomes pretty hard : I have a weakness for #2, because of the hidden crushes that would take time to be confessed, but imagine the regular “professional” meetings of our dearest two at Bette’s gallery, in #3, is also irresistible ! So, well, I’d be tempted to ask you (… beg you ?) for at last continue the #2 & 3 at the same time (after all, such a talented writer like you could easily do it, no ?? Common, say yes ! *wink & grin*)… So, it I must choice now, it’s #2. BUT please, please think about #3 too, it would be dreamy !! Many thanks for give us so much TIbette stuff to think about – and thank you very deeply for sharing once more your talent. Faithfully yours – A.

    82. I just begin to start reading,to new anything is fine so as long is related to Tibette of their romance,I left you a private message hope you read them too.A very good start indeed!

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