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Without You
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Without You.
Chapter One: Choices
The night air was cool and refreshing compared to the blazing hot sun from earlier that day. Tina sat in the passenger’s seat of her boyfriend’s truck with the window down, her hair flying with the wind. So many thoughts ran through her head that night, she placed her hand on her stomach; thinking about the life that was growing within of her. She looked at her boyfriend; they hadn’t spoken the whole ride home. She thought back to earlier that day, when she broke the news to him.
Mark had picked her up around noon to go out for the rest of the day. Earlier that morning she had just been to the doctor with her mother when she found out the news.
She was 16 and expecting.
Her mother was not happy at all about hearing this news. And yes Tina had wished this wasn’t happening so early in life; but she was ready to take responsibility for her actions, even though the thoughts of what laid in store for her in the near future scared her very much.
Mark took Tina down to the beach to meet up with a few of their friends and have a picnic. Tina tried to act normal as if nothing was on her mind. She seemed to be doing a good job because no one questioned her mood.
After they mingled with their friends and ate it was getting close to sunset. That’s when Tina decided she needed to take Mark aside and tell him the news.
“Mark, wanna take a walk with me? I really need to talk to you.” Tina asked.
“Sure babe.” Mark took off his sunglasses and put them on his head as the coupled walked away from the group hand in hand. Tina stayed silent as they walked, trying to find the right words, her heart racing a mile I minute. ‘Just tell him’ she said to herself.
“Mark…I went to the doctors today; remember I told you how I haven’t been feeling right the past few weeks?”
“Yeah…is something wrong?”
“Well…” Tina paused still trying to find the right words, but decided she just needed to come out with it. “…I’m pregnant.”
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Please continue!
mmm tough topic!!! I wonder whare does Bette fit in this story?? would she be the one to adopt the baby??? Great start ;) PPS
I can not wait to see where you take this story. Thanks PPS
Hiya Coff!!! SOOOO glad you have a new story started and may have a little more time to update regularly. You have peeked my interest! PPS
Please do countinue. Thanks for sharing.
Bette is gonna be in this story right? Interesting start, please continue:)
I agree with everyone else – interesting and good start – just wondering where Bette fits in. Can’t wait to read more !
Welcome back you have been missed. Tina is stuck in a difficult situation. Whatever she does it will affect her entire life.
such a real life scenario…yes, plz continue. There’s lots of possibilities for where this can go.
This is interesting!
Hey Stranger …. PLEASE continue :)
uhmm wow this is the first time i read some tibette story with this subject.. i think it can be a wonderful story, but how are you gonna bring bette in this story?? i would lik to know,, soo please continue!!
It didn’t take much for me to really dislike Mark. “Get rid of it?” Mark, this is not a stash of marijuana you need to ditch. *headdesk* And maybe I missed the bus somewhere, but do people not know what condoms are? I’ve never trusted the pill as far as I could throw it because sperm is still going up in there. Unless the condom broke which is a possibility. Tina on the other hand, damn, she’s got a rough road ahead whether she lets another family adopt the baby or keeps it. This is definitely worth continuing, coffee. :)
well well Coffee nice start…we need another chapter of that one and where does Bette fit in??
Hi Coffee! Wow! This story is quite interesting, dear friend. We love the way you are telling it and of course we encourage you to continue. We think there are lots of things you can explore here. Keep it coming, sweetie. PPS Hugs & kisses on both your cheeks.- Lucero & Marsha (Proud Salsa Aunties to the ever loving JC and Eunichick)
Wow, what a heavy topic and one that we have not seen associated before with Tina and Bette. And I can hardly wait to see how Bette comes into this unless she is in school with Tina or some such. By all means continue please. PPS
Do carry on
can’t wait for more…pps
Hey Coff, You just can’t leave us hanging. This story deserves to be continued. I so wanna know which way Tina chooses. Maybe she runs aways and meets Bette and then they fall in love and bring up the child as their own or Tina has the baby adopted, meets Bette, falls in love, then they decide to have a family and Tina want to search out her adopted child with Bette’s full support of course. Any way you wanna write it is fine with me. Just so write it. Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
Good to see you with a new story and it really interesting. Please continue. I’m looking forward when Bette is coming in the picture. I hope she will love Tinas child as her own. But Coffeex will you in the future your unfinished story continue and finish, please.
Hello Coffee… Oh My you certainly have a way with words… the emotions and the subject matter are such raw things to behold… but you handle them with extreme care… you masterfully have taken hold of your words and are crafting a story of conscience and sadness but I have faith that you can make it real… you can make her happy… for each dark cloud exists a silver lining… you are completely amazing, Love and Hugs, JC (Latin Nephew to those Salsa Angels ever loving Cuzzie to the ever Talented Eunichick and personal Fanner to the incredible Deean)