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Mark stopped dead in his tracks and let go of Tina’s hand.
“What? But, how? I mean…shit Tina!”
“I know…I still can’t believe it…” Tina said. “I’ve never been so scared in my whole life…”
“What are you going to do?” Mark asked.
“What am I going to do?” she asked confused. “You mean what are we going to do, I didn’t get into this by myself you know.”
“Jesus Tina, I’m only 18, I can’t deal with this.”
“And I’m only 16 Mark! I can’t do this by myself.” Tina retaliated.
Mark looked away and combed his hand through his dark hair, thinking.
“Well…can’t you just…you know…get rid of it?”
Tina folded her arms and looked down at the ground. “I thought about that, and my mom thinks I should, but…”
“But what?”
“I don’t think I can Mark. I just…I can’t.” Tina looked up into his eyes, trying to figure out what he was feeling.
“Tina, we can’t have a baby…BOTH of us still have so much going for us…we can’t let this hold us back.” He looked right at her, “I don’t know what you want me to do Tina.”
“I guess I was hoping that you might want to be there for me…”
“Well, I told you what I think you should do, but apparently you’ve got this all planned out already.” Mark started walking back to the group of friends. “Come on, I better take you home now.”
Tina followed after him. The sun had gone down and it had gotten cold, Tina hurried up to the car. The whole day was mentally exhausting; she wanted nothing more than to go home and curl up in her bed.
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The next morning Tina woke up to the sound of her mother vacuuming in the next room. She sat up and looked at the clock on her nightstand; 12:20pm. She forgot to set her alarm for school. “Great…” she said to herself. “Mom’s going to be pissed.” She got out of bed and got out of her pajamas. She picked out clothes to wear and walked over to her mirror. Before she started getting dressed she examined her body, turning from side to side to see if she could notice any change in her body. Of course she couldn’t because it was early in the pregnancy still.
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Please continue!
mmm tough topic!!! I wonder whare does Bette fit in this story?? would she be the one to adopt the baby??? Great start ;) PPS
I can not wait to see where you take this story. Thanks PPS
Hiya Coff!!! SOOOO glad you have a new story started and may have a little more time to update regularly. You have peeked my interest! PPS
Please do countinue. Thanks for sharing.
Bette is gonna be in this story right? Interesting start, please continue:)
I agree with everyone else – interesting and good start – just wondering where Bette fits in. Can’t wait to read more !
Welcome back you have been missed. Tina is stuck in a difficult situation. Whatever she does it will affect her entire life.
such a real life scenario…yes, plz continue. There’s lots of possibilities for where this can go.
This is interesting!
Hey Stranger …. PLEASE continue :)
uhmm wow this is the first time i read some tibette story with this subject.. i think it can be a wonderful story, but how are you gonna bring bette in this story?? i would lik to know,, soo please continue!!
It didn’t take much for me to really dislike Mark. “Get rid of it?” Mark, this is not a stash of marijuana you need to ditch. *headdesk* And maybe I missed the bus somewhere, but do people not know what condoms are? I’ve never trusted the pill as far as I could throw it because sperm is still going up in there. Unless the condom broke which is a possibility. Tina on the other hand, damn, she’s got a rough road ahead whether she lets another family adopt the baby or keeps it. This is definitely worth continuing, coffee. :)
well well Coffee nice start…we need another chapter of that one and where does Bette fit in??
Hi Coffee! Wow! This story is quite interesting, dear friend. We love the way you are telling it and of course we encourage you to continue. We think there are lots of things you can explore here. Keep it coming, sweetie. PPS Hugs & kisses on both your cheeks.- Lucero & Marsha (Proud Salsa Aunties to the ever loving JC and Eunichick)
Wow, what a heavy topic and one that we have not seen associated before with Tina and Bette. And I can hardly wait to see how Bette comes into this unless she is in school with Tina or some such. By all means continue please. PPS
Do carry on
can’t wait for more…pps
Hey Coff, You just can’t leave us hanging. This story deserves to be continued. I so wanna know which way Tina chooses. Maybe she runs aways and meets Bette and then they fall in love and bring up the child as their own or Tina has the baby adopted, meets Bette, falls in love, then they decide to have a family and Tina want to search out her adopted child with Bette’s full support of course. Any way you wanna write it is fine with me. Just so write it. Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
Good to see you with a new story and it really interesting. Please continue. I’m looking forward when Bette is coming in the picture. I hope she will love Tinas child as her own. But Coffeex will you in the future your unfinished story continue and finish, please.
Hello Coffee… Oh My you certainly have a way with words… the emotions and the subject matter are such raw things to behold… but you handle them with extreme care… you masterfully have taken hold of your words and are crafting a story of conscience and sadness but I have faith that you can make it real… you can make her happy… for each dark cloud exists a silver lining… you are completely amazing, Love and Hugs, JC (Latin Nephew to those Salsa Angels ever loving Cuzzie to the ever Talented Eunichick and personal Fanner to the incredible Deean)