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Regret Chpt 2
SHANE
Girl: So, yeah I like him, he’s nice, he loves me, but we have no…thing
Shane: shuzh? I ask as I cut her hair carefully
Girl: yeah.
Shane: well you are done. I say as I ruffle her hair a little.
Girl: Thanks it looks great!
She pays and hands me a card
Girl: thanks for letting me ramble, we should hang out sometime
Shane: yeah.
I give her my best smile and place the card in my wallet.
Chase: alright hair girl 8:30 last appointment 8:31 anniversary party!!!!
CARMEN
Shay: Why does Shane cry at night?
Shane….Shane…..Shane her name takes over my brain. Shane….Shane….Shane cries at night. So Shane is sorry? Well Maybe Shane should’ve talked to me instead of running away!!
Carmen started screaming in her head and frowning angrily.
I would’ve understood she wasn’t ready even if she had proposed. But Nooooo She Chose to…
Alice: well Shane is scared
Alice quickly snaps me out of my thoughts
Alice: see, she made a terrible mistake a couple months ago. She hurt very deeply someone she cared about a lot, and herself by trying to make things better in the long run, but it didn’t Even though it wasn’t the right thing to do she thought it was at the moment. This is very personal I’m not the one who should be telling you this, this is something Shane should tell you.
And I knew Alice wasn’t talking to the boy.
“ make things better in the long run” “she’s not proud of this” “She doesn’t expect you to forgive her”
The whole thing repeats over and over in my head and my eyes fill with tears
Riley: hey are you okay?
She throws her arm around me trying to pull me towards her but I lean forward avoiding her touch.
SHANE
I get home at 11:30
Alice left a note: Shay is sleeping over with them
I quickly shed my clothes get into bed. Happily I’m exhausted, and my mind doesn’t have enough strength to torture me.
CARMEN
We’re staying at a hotel until we find an apartment or something. I walk into my room and Riley has made everything comfortable for me already. I lay on the bed thinking about what Alice said earlier and slowly drift to sleep. Thinking of Shane.
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this is a short chapter just to wrap up the previous one
I will post the next part soon
love to hear your opinion =)
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(39 votes, average: 3.33 out of 5)
Children are so wonderful.Shay,ask a ? and got a answer, He would have ask if if had been a room full of people. thanks
who knew Shay and Alice would make such a good team? Haha. PPS
Loving this already! Pps!
Good job Al and Shay!!! They are funny matchmakers.
Hey, I didn’t know you had updated! Well, I read it now, and I’m really liking this so far. I feel bad for Shane, though. She made a terrible decision and she hurt Carmen A LOT, but she also hurt herself. She’s so torn up and haunted by her decision, that I can’t even be mad at her. And Carmen, poor Carmen. She’s still hurting and angry. . . I almost fear for Shane’s life when they meet again. Man, Riley doesn’t get the hint, does she? She must be too hung up on Carmen to notice. Really enjoyed the last couple chapters. Looking forward to the next one. :)