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Pause The Tragic Ending – Chapter One
There was a ringing in Tina’s ears. She couldn’t place it but she knew that it was coming from somewhere close. She turned over and looked towards where she thought the offensive sound was coming from. It was then that she realised, it was a ringing in her ears at all. It was the phone that was demanding her attention. She knew it was early. The sun was barely up in the sky. By her reckoning that was too early for any kind of phone call. Emergency or otherwise. She turned over and grabbed a pillow from the other side of the bed and put it over her head. She didn’t want to deal with the world just yet.
As Tina plunged herself into temporary darkness she was reminded once again about how it felt to be alone. That pillow came a little too easily from the other side of the bed. If there had been someone there she would have had to wrestle to ease the ringing. The ringing that she was pleased to note had ceased. Also, Tina was pretty sure that if she did have company right now the phone wouldn’t have been ringing at all. People would realise that she shouldn’t be disturbed. It was then that the phone started ringing again.
Tina thought about ignoring it but knew that whoever it was wouldn’t stop calling. If they had the persistence to call twice then that would inevitably mean that they would call a third and a fourth time. Tina took the pillow away from her head and moved back towards the phone. She picked up the receiver and started to speak.
“Hello.” she said, making herself sound extra sleepy so that whoever it was on the other end knew that they had disturbed her beauty sleep.
“Tina, I know it’s early but I need to speak to you about something.” said a voice that Tina was currently finding hard to place.
“What do you need to talk to me about?” asked Tina, hoping that this would give her a clue as to who she was having this conversation with.
“Women.” stated the unknown caller from the other end of the line.
“Sorry Shane, can’t help you with that one. They are as much of a mystery to me as they are to any one else.” replied Tina, thankful that she was starting to wake up.
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I like, give me more.
Good start!
I like it. Please continue. Can’t wait to see who she might meet at the Planet…
no tragic endings please LOL
Great start! I like the Shane/Tina friendship! More please!
As always, I’m well excited when I see a post from you. Great start with the Shane-Tina friendship and I can’t wait for more. Thanks, cg.
city, great to see you! You’re writing has been missed.
As a devoted Tibetter, I like it so much better when Eric (or any significant others) are already out of the way…now will there be a meeting between T and a certain brunette with curls at The Planet tonight?? Like this and PPVS!!
I like the idea of being present at the inception of The Planet. I like the alt-setup of Shane, Tina and Dana as friends. I’m glad there is no Eric to cuckold. Pretty good so far, I’ll be looking for another chapter. Thanks!
Great start please continue. I can’t wait to see what happens. No tragic endings please :) Thank you!
Great start,more please.
very nice…i have a feeling bette and alice are best friends… please continue… soon
Very nice beginning – but please, no cheating Bette, no indecisive Tina and please, please,please no mention of Henry or Jodie.
But Mette, there wouldn’t be much of a story then. LOL! It almost sounds like a Shina story. You never know when citygirl is in control. I mean, she DID kill Shane a few years ago…
This is intersting and good start!
Very good start!!! Glad to see your back!!!! Thanks you PPS
Always love seeing your name beside a story! I like the Tina/Shane friendship and look forward to their night out.
Glad to see you back!! I always have liked a close friendship between Tina and Shane. It’s so unexpected, yet totally understandable. Thanks!!
I am certainly looking forward to reading more of this. Glad to see you back!
i am glad to see you back also. looking forward to this. thx