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Little Black Dress
Tina lay on the bed. She was face down, trying to catch her breath. She thought about what had just happened. She wondered if there were really words to describe it. Somehow she doubted it. She shut her eyes willing her mind to never forget. Never forget the way that she had been touched, the sensations that her body transmitted to her mind. The way that she felt when Bette touched her, and it was only Bette that could elicit that feeling from her. She had missed this, even though she was ashamed to say it, no-one touched her like Bette, no-one understood the way her body worked like Bette did. It was always about her, even before it was.
Bette stood in the bathroom, smiling to herself. She was taking refuge. She wasn’t even sure what from but she knew that she needed a minute to herself. The feelings were so intense. It was like nothing else that she could think of. Even when Angelica smiled at her she didn’t lose herself the way that she did when Tina touched her in all the right places. There was nothing else that existed in the world than the two of them, the noises that they made, the look in Tina’s eye, the love that they made. Nothing and on-one else existed while her and Tina made love.
Tina turned over and stared at the ceiling. She tried to think about what Bette might be doing in the bathroom. There was silence emanating from the room next door so Tina was puzzled. She thought about getting up to make that Bette was OK but when she thought about it some more she didn’t think that her legs would support her so just stayed lying on the bed, a small smile creeping across her face. How she loved it when Bette surrendered to her, made herself vulnerable, and yet powerful all that same time.
Bette knew she had been lucky. Getting Tina back, having her daughter back in her life on a full time basis. She also knew that she hadn’t always done herself any favours, and that she was constantly earning the right to be in Tina’s life. She wondered how long that would last for. The looks that Tina gave her when another woman chatted with her at the bar at The Planet made her heart ache. There was one thing that Bette was sure of though, she wasn’t going to mess it up this time. There was far too much to lose.
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excellent writing but gaaa why did you stop there??
I felt the breath catch in my throat when I saw your name there! I love it when your name pops up and you never dissapoint. I miss reading your stories!
Where’s the rest great story, hurry please I want the next.
such a wonderful surprise to find another story from you :)
Great story, citygirl. I love when you post. Thanks
So happy to see another story from you citygirl!!! Love it!!! Thank you PPS
I was just thinking about you and recommending of your stories to a friend. Great to see a post from you. I hope all is well.
Welcome back and thank you for the Little Black Dress.
How lucky to get this great gift from you! Hopefully, it evidences that you’re in a fanfic groove again. Fingers crossed!!!!
damn for a minute there I thought someone was gonna die. the title of the story, Bette being in the bathroom for so long, then reading about Tina asking her why her breathing was so fast. Hopefully this is a fun story that continues to a NC 17 after this one.
Oh Yea citygirl is back and with such a lovely hot start. Thank you, Md aka Oma
Welcome back–you have been missed. I did a double take when I saw that you had written for us again. Thanks so much, Citygirl.
Is it wonderful to have you back!!!!! You are a gem to this site. Hope you can continue posting regularly, for you are a talent and a half. Thanks a bunch for this..but…did you forget a page 5 and 6 and 7? LOL!
Oh Man! I have no words :)This is one great story and you write so really well citygirl. Thank you for this..I hope there’s a continuation to this… :D
Citygirl YOU ROCK!
You were always good, and you still are.
This is good and like it. Please post more, thanks!
HOT HOT HOT!!!! PLEAAAAASE continue soon! I can’t get the image of Bette in a sexy black dress out of my mind now!!
and…????????????????????????
Please let there be MORE!!!!!!!!! PPS
Surely there is more somewhere, I just can’t seem to find it! PPS:)
Yippee!!! Citygirl posted!!!
Loved the chapter. But is this a one-off or will we get more. Please, pretty please. Too lazy to go back and look but did you write a story where Bette was in New York and was buying a little black dress and modeled it for Tina looking on from her computer in LA and the sales clerk, straight woman, was going gaa, gaa over Bette in the dress and Tina bought it for her. My memory isn’t what it used to be and I don’t remember the name of the story nor the author. Great chapter. PPS
Loved the chapter. But is this a one-off or will we get more. Please, pretty please. Too lazy to go back and look but did you write a story where Bette was in New York and was buying a little black dress and modeled it for Tina looking on from her computer in LA and the sales clerk, straight woman, was going gaa, gaa over Bette in the dress and Tina bought it for her. My memory isn’t what it used to be and I don’t remember the name of the story nor the author. Great chapter. PPS
If all else fails pull out that little black dress.Theres nothing more tempting
You gotta be fucking kidding me! Really soon as I get excited it ends there arghh!!!!